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Chapter 19: The Gathering
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 19: The Gathering
16 chapters will give you lots of room for hell and damnation to erupt. Merrick must feel he is in charge and will control the events surprising and tormenting his targets who cannot stand up to him. But things often do not go smoothly. As a famous Prussian General said "No plan survives the first contact with the enemy" Merrick is going to gain Will as an enemy. Will is just coming into his own as a gun wielding terror with a righteous anger BTW. Merrick has to get the money laundering project beginning soon at scale or his drug partners might remove him or really hurt him -
Chapter 19: The Gathering
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 19: The Gathering
OH, Boy The World appears that it is going to be ending soon for Will Merricks is assembling the fake evidence to charge Will as a child molester and criminal. His home is going to explode. Jason is going to be wrecked Merrick intends to crush will and Jason and end the Avery-Woods merger of his law firm can only depend on him. He intends to use this lsaw firm to help the drug profits to be hidden Meriick thinks he has neutralized Will. He does not see Will has taking him on and even killing him after Merrick ruined Will. However, what is Will actually going to do? Might Tanaka help -
Parents Weekend, Book Two of Five
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Parents Weekend, Book Two of Five
Xoo--Calen and Hayden might get together in bed. They could be a happy pairing. But, will Hayden first play with Matt and learn what he really likes.- 20 comments
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Parents Weekend, Book Two of Five
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Parents Weekend, Book Two of Five
Matt is amazing in action. You can see how he earned his hard, good looking body in the gym. His workout grew to sharing exercises with the assistant crew coach to fucking him in the staff shower area. Both men were very pleased, Returning to his dad role he had breakfast with his family. He noticed his son's room mate checking him out--mm and his wife and daughter were oblivious. Matt seemed to easily attract guys for sex. Life is vrry good for him.- 20 comments
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I did not expect Morgan to respond with his true story to Troy but as it worked out they both became closer. Their attraction was natural and clear to each other. They kissed and liked touching each other. They were chaste. Troy told Morgan his fate seems to be to run the ranch. He would prefer to become an artist, but he needs to take over sometime later for his dad who has early-stage Parkinson disease. The timing of the increasing severity of his dad's medical problem is uncertain. At some point his dad will need medical intervention. BTW, I have read 50% of people with Parkinson' develop hallucinations.
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Esca works for the firm offering the $10m million reward for a vampire. He submitted the paperwork showing you are his son and paid the Cooper's a fortune for your care. He has legally claimed you. Andy doed not know his motive, Esca left him to burn in 1944 and wanted him dead, Andy was troubled. "I do not know if he is protecting me, or if he is simply fattening the calf before the slaughter." I think I know the answer, Andy is prey and Esca will act on him when he is ready. Marcus, the teacher, told Andy the pack will stand behind him. It could be a nasty fight,
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Chapter 18: Den of Thieves
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 18: Den of Thieves
I am grateful for your good thoughts. Your writings always challenge and interest me-- Andy -
Chapter 18: Den of Thieves
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 18: Den of Thieves
OMG--Marcus helped manufacture the hurtful, incriminating evidence to take down Will. This is horrible news, I hope Will is not forced out of Avery-Woods -
Chapter 18: Den of Thieves
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 18: Den of Thieves
Help us out. Why did the plan not fail. Merrick could not expect Peter to intervene I expect we will learn of Merrick's reaction in the next chapter. -
Chapter 18: Den of Thieves
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 18: Den of Thieves
Hooray for Peter He read the material and knew what was going to happen. He went to the church and faked it and got Marcus to take him to the retreat. Marcus touched his butt and confirmed his diabolical approach. He acted with purpose and found the "broken" scared young men and Jason and took them to the minibus to drive them away. Marcus tried to stop him and Peter hit him repeatedly with a therapy bat and rendered him incapable of stopping him. He drove the boys to Will's house and gave them food and a safe place. Peter will contact the police about Marcus and the sick retreat Peter met Will and told him Jason was guilty of lusting after him and went to the retreat. Will was shocked and went to Jason and told him of his situation when he was Jason's age. "I was seventeen once. I know what it's like to want someone you shouldn't. To feel like you're poison. To think there's something wrong with you." They are going to have a heartfelt healing conversation Peter was a hero and took action. I think he saved Jason and the other boys at the retreat from further pain. The follow on action will be necessary and corrective. Merrick's plan for Jason has been broken up. I hope Marcus is going to be arrested -
Both longtime friends are challenged in different ways to face the future. They have enjoyed heart warming sex and meet for more sex and become honest about their future. Thei way they face their individual futures should be encouraging and draw the characters closer to you. Expect to be surprised and be fascinated their stories and hopes and how they work out their issues
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The Thing About Konstantin
akascrubber commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in The Thing About Konstantin
Life hits you hard unexpectedly and wonderful friends step up in thoughtful, sensitive ways. One friend is aided to open up and change for the good. Josh and Konstantin had a very long, episodic sexual relationship. Josh was the top and Konstantin was the bottom. They loved the sex they experienced. Josh wanted a long term relationship with Konstantin who said no and would not say he is gay. " They had been trapped in this circle of friendship, lust, and late-night rendezvous for over twenty years." The defining point happened after Konstatin texted him after a several month separations. They had great sex again and Konstantin told Josh he wanted him to know how much he meant to him. After a soul-searching discussion that night, Konstantin surprised Josh telling him he was dying and had a few months to live. He told Josh he needed to build his first long term relationship. “Promise me that you’ll live for you.” Konstatin died quietly at peace. Josh work through his feelings and opened up and healed, He took time and found a widower to be his partner and thought fondly of Konstantin who helped him to change and begin his new life. -
Travis should end up in counseling after his very messy blow-up.
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Parents Weekend, Book One of Five
akascrubber commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Parents Weekend, Book One of Five
Matt, the dad, is fascinating. He radiates sexual appeal and energy. The gay guys want him, it seems. He has started successfully this parents' weekend with his son's RA. I bet he is not done playing with guys. He is not seen by his daughter and wife as interested in males for sex. In fact, he pleased his wife in bed the first night. -
Esca will not know what supernatural creatures are willing to defend Andy. I bet he will be surprised. He should hate werewolves.
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It looks like Kendo will get his way sexually in the next chapter and the full explosion with Will is going to happen in chapter 42.
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Travis is fully dependent on the drugs Kendo gives him. No one seems to notice he uses drugs--or want to stop him since he powers the series He is very grateful to Kendo and seems now open to have him stay over at his house, He thinks he will be safe from sex since his bedroom has a lock.Kendo is going to run over Travis and manipulate him into having sex with him. When Travis comes down from his drugs, he will be so open to what Kendo wants
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I he being fetched home or killed? My first thought is that Andy will be killed unless he can beat his enemy.
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Andy's nightmare is coming true. He is not going to face hunters who want to kill him for the prize money. His sire is going after him. Esca who missed killing him in 1944 is now in his town in the person of the lawyer who freed the three losers. Kevin is now spilling the beans on Andy and his werewolf pack. Esca will plan his attack on Andy now. He feels invulnerable and intends to kill Any. How can Andy survive?
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Sandro and Mark exploded and hit each other training on the soccer field, Sandro was incensed and wanted to keep on fighting. He was ready to fight some more. The coach sent them home. Mark was depressed and ended up in a ball on his bed in a darken room. At that moment in his pain he realized he loved Sandro. What will Mark do now? Stay depressed and quit the soccer team? Go to the party and tell Sandro he loves him and be prepared for Sandro to reject him after he outed himself? Had he earned Sandro's hatred and burned his bridges with him? He felt he needed to say what he honestly felt no matter what.
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Chapter 17: The Wages of Sin
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 17: The Wages of Sin
Is not Andrew part of CSIS? He was given the gun and was told it was legal and recorded. Andrew cannot tell Will at this time of his work with Tanaka, Darius was killed. Andrew cannot put a target on Will's back by telling him that he is going after Merrick. -
Chapter 17: The Wages of Sin
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 17: The Wages of Sin
Andrew is a very handsome man I am sorry the 7th anniversary of their snow accident that started them being together He turned out to be so bittersweet. They are at loggerheads. -
Chapter 17: The Wages of Sin
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 17: The Wages of Sin
Things have changed Andrew's firm is now helping Avery-Woods in a huge merger Will and Andrew are working on the merger. Will asked him what he was hiding and told him he found his gun. Andrew said he could not tell him in order to keep. Will refused to accept Andrew's position. They separated Will is going to see the merger through nevertheless. Darius was killed by Merrick's men it is assumed. Tanaka told him about Darius who did not make a meeting with him. He mailed the dirt on Marcus and the tough pictures to Tanaka. Merrik does not have the information. Now,Tanaka needs to tell Andrew what is in the files. He needs to know how much danger Jason is in. Andrew has a gun and he might have to use it sometime to save himself and Will. -
Kyle is a mess because the guy he loved is at Penn State. He is torn up an leaving thed thinks about him all the time Kyle is not happy with Danny and thinks he jokes too much. They could get into a fight at band camp since they will be roommate. We see that Danny has a terrible self concept and thinks he is worthless. He even considered leaving the band. No one seems to know about Danny's negative thoughts. He might crash under pressure. Could he turn into a suicide risk?
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The kiss sealed the feelings of Bastien and Lawrence.
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