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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 35

    Do not rule out Corcoran as the killer ! Check the tapes. The guy is wound up and ready to get Rick. I noticed Rick has finally realized this situation is going to come to a head tomorrow and he was focused. He is the target. Rick thought....'‘I have a feeling that this time he wants to go out with a bang,’ I replied. ‘He’s got nothing to lose, especially now he knows we’re onto him and can tie him to at least three murders, plus another serious assault, so why not?’
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    I assume the decision on what to do will be given to the officer in charge of the night shift. This likely junior officer will not want to fuck up and make a mistake. He would not want them hurt. He would know the mission was to keep the Governor controlled and supportive of US policy. The boys here could be a new way to keep Will Carter in line. The safest choice would be to send them to the Governor's office and his protective detail.
  3. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    Finn and Kyle fought and did not know who Garret would choose. Finn unsettled Kyle and they fought. Garret discovered the two fought about him and were clearly hurt. He went to see both of them and heard what happened and realized he needed to make a choice and make it known Garret told Kyle ...."You’re who I text when I am having a good day. Who I think about when I smile, when I cry, when I am scared I’m not enough… you, always you.” He kissed Kyle’s forehead. “Do I look at you? I can’t stop looking at you!” He made his choice and felt so much better now the Kyle was no longe worried about their relationship. Garret told Kyle he loved him. What a change for the good.
  4. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    Andrew read the feed from Miamai. Trump wants to quickly end the resistance, He will not let the British stop him in the Atlantic or anyone in Ottawa. He realizes he needed to start the resistance that is in wait. He will protect his family. Trump...."When I’m back in the Oval in January ‘25, we liquidate the resistance assets. We finish the integration. I want it clean. I want it fast."
  5. akascrubber

    Chapter 2

    Andrew humbled the best US submarine. He knows more will be back to taken on the sub he is occupying, But, Andrew is reframing the war. He is moving his sub in a new direction. He will get near the shore and release a two man team to send the spark the will begin the Canadian insurrection Wow!
  6. Leo was pulled through his computer screen to be with Silas, a very powerful demon. Leo had sex for the first time with Silas, Leo was asked if he wanted to go back and he said "no" Will Leo keep staying with Silas? Will Silas send him on a mission back to his old world?
  7. akascrubber

    Prologue

    Yes, the US beat off he VietCong. I met a former Army MP Lt who help fight off the attackers at the Saigon embassy. The VietCong lost. But, the critical point was that the US media turned against the war. They no longer saw the US as invincible. Their negative drumbeat , lead by Walter Cronkite of CBS News, turned the public against the war. President LBJ was forced withdraw his plan to seek another term. The US military learned they would need public support for any future wars. In terms of the Canada situation. another Tet like attack on a major Canadian city when the country was supposedly pacified might well shock US citizens and the media in the lower 48 and cause them to lose support for Trump and the GOP. The media may not like that the Canadian state is no longer pacified
  8. akascrubber

    Prologue

    In the Viet Nam war the US gave up the countryside and sought to control the cities. It was called a "Strategic Hamlet" method You could tell how successful that strategy was by the success of the Tet Offensive in Saigon. The media cratered in shock and the US public turned against the war.
  9. akascrubber

    Chapter 20

    How soon is this connection along with a larger strategy be explained? Will we know in the beginning chapters of the next book? Kieran is in the dark, I assume. He must be a pawn.
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    Jacob and Tommy drive and reached the entrance to Will's well-guarded, solidly fenced in compound/prison. Now, what happens? Someone other than an American Sargent gate guard will decide. Jacob and Tommy will demand to stay together and to be with their father. Let us hope they stay safe and can support will as they planned.
  11. akascrubber

    Prologue

    The resistance continues. It hurts the Americans plus encourages other Canadians to not give up hope. West is doing his part. as a leader The kids really care about Will who they think is cracking. He is alone and that is bad to them, He needs help. Jacob,his son , and his adopted son, Tommy, are foolishly going out to find him. Two 14-year-olds are taking an old Volvo on roads hoping they can find their way to Will. Foolhardy and determined people are not giving up.
  12. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    Finn thought Garret did not yet know what he needed---his medicine or his poison. He had thought Garret needed him most, though, But, he was shocked when Kyle said he fucked Garret and Finn never did that. Garret needed something much different from Kyle and Garret liked it. Finn was shocked and now uncertain who Garret would choose, I think.
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    What will Finn do? He might still track Garret and when he is by himself approach him. He could get close and touch him again and invite him to play with him as soon as he wants. Maybe Finn could suggest Garret take him to his place to have sex. Finn knows Garret is turned on by him. He intends to better fulfill Garret than Kyle.
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    Tickling away, great happy fun was had by all. Chip and Ken ganged up to have extended session tickling TL. It was all a very enjoyable time. TL got them back the next morning,
  15. Lyn is furious at Brad and Alexander after what they told him. They are no longer his friends in his mind. He could not stay, He rejected being with Alexander. Their lives were broken apart by his deceit. Bella comes to see him at the plane departure gate, She tells him she does not blame him. She may still marry Brad and be ready for a divorce later. Brad does not know it, but she tells Lyn she is pregnant Unless something happens soon, Lyn will be flying home intending to be a lonely single man. This story will turn into a tragedy.
  16. Marina---"Her voice turned silky. "I get to do my absolute favorite thing. I get to build a star," she said. "And stars, Liam..." She paused, letting it hang. "Stars don't belong to themselves. They belong to the sky." She is going to protect her investment. He did not belong to himself. She now knows Hudson is not like any other person Liam cared about. She has to exorcise him and remove him from Liam. Has she already tried? I bet the driver reports to her. Maybe, that patron who tried to pick up Hudson and failed was her hired seducer aimed at showing Liam he had moved on Liam is haunted by Hudson. He cannot call or text him. Liam is destroying himself and notices Hudson is tightly wound. Can this situation continue? Marina will not give up. She wants Hudson to be gone. A kidnapping? A false story saying he had given up on the town and gone somewhere else less hectic?
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    The way the story was written the just needed a spark or just luck for maybe two or even all three to meet at some point. I bet they would have more opportunities to get together in other ways than shown in his story. They would connect since are so close in age , attended the same high school at the same time and have no other sexual partner or close friend and are stuck in the town with limited job possibilities Garret kept looking across his workplace at his old high school classmate and he was intrigued by him. His life was full of pain and hate and Finn collected part of Garrets miseries. He did not see a mate or think about Finn in a sexual way. Any sexual playing from their meetings would be the glue that kept them in each other's mind. Garret's car broke down and Finn saw him and helped Garret to get his car to the shop late at night. Finn wanted to help this guy. They were not friends. Finn worked on the car and fixed it after a time. Getting close to one another afterwards one thing led to another and a strong sexual chemistry aroused them and made them want each other. Kyle was fucked three times. Garret was unleashed and surprised. He had never fucked a guy before. He liked it, On the way back from fucking Finn, Garret went to Tim Horton's and met Kyle who was the staff guy on duty. He was so worked up by Finn he confessed what he did to Klye who he was a gay guy when they were both in high school. Kyle had lost his BF earlier. They began a relationship with Garret asking for more advice and then to help him improving his sexual abilities. Kyle agreed to be a friend with benefits only, hopefully. These connections might happen other ways, The sex they would have will change them I am not certain what the future will be for the three now...
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 34

    Rick was too confident that he and Adam could go out to a popular place and not be followed by Daniel Corcoran. He knew where Adam lived. He was infatuated and wanted Rick. For now, he is just playing with him and has to enjoy tormenting and upsetting Rick. The large crowd size will let Corcoran escape after he got what he wanted. I expect he careful plans this Mardi Gras weekend to capture and get what he wants from Rick before he kills him. Rick should be on even higher alert.
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    Who is the asset and who is the liability? Or, are they interchangeable and each share the opposite nature for each other?
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    I know when the donuts are tasting the best at Krispy Kreme. The store put a special red light on to tell the customers a new batch is ready for sale. I have not found any special sauce on my donuts !
  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 8

    So, the battle is defined--Garret and Finn use the language of hate but they still feel compelled and turned on Finn is tracking Garret around town and Garret notices it. Finn is at incident 87. They meet at a convenience store by accident. Garret is so worked up and upset by Finn touching him that he runs away to Kyle at his store and they fuck in the back room. Things get easy and pleasing and Garret spends the night with Kyle watching Dr Who and feeling so comfortable. Garret..." knew, in a distant, logical part of his brain, that this was complicating things in a brand new way. Kyle was no longer just a friend, or a convenient outlet. He was becoming a place. A sanctuary. And Garrett was moving in, bringing all his baggage with him." Finn drove by Tim Horton's and knew now where Garret went for relief when he left him. Kyle was his rival for Garret. Hmm-What will Finn do?
  22. Kieran thrown out of university and into a brutal life in estate housing finds himself barely surviving on the dole and facing predators ready to hurt him and pick him clean. They know he has no street skills and has some money. Ben finds him and saves him from a nasty beating but kills one of Kieran's attackers. The police think Kieran was the killer and cannot prove so they keep watch on Kieran missing Ben's involvement. Kieran slowly transform into a leader and builds his own kingdom to rule over Cradle Grove under Ben's watchful eye. Kier lucks into associates and along the way receives sexual release from some of them. Their environment is violent and competitive. Ben intervenes malevolently and Kier keeps knowing Ben rules him. The police remain clueless about the deaths and real power struggles. There is a surprising final scene This is rightfully termed a psychological thriller. Read on the be challenged and worried. Life is not easy or safe in Cradle Grove.
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 20

    No final answers were proposed and the book ended The Estate is history for the main characters. They left it seeking a new life and an escape from their traumas. Yet, will history repeat itself? Riley spilt and will live and work elsewhere for his own sanity. Kieran and Lee nicely dressed are traveling to another town with a better location to set up a new kingdom, not connected to an estate or council housing. Ben freed is from police custody for lack of concrete evidence and with the help of a high powered lawyer(Ben has money) will not give them up. Ben will seek them out to maintain his role as emperor over them. Will Kieran finally take a stand and overthrow the Emperor? Thank you for this compelling story. I am ready for Book 2 when you are ready and able to begin
  24. akascrubber

    Erroneous

    I am very glad to see your new work. You are setting the stage for a very interesting story that I want to read.
  25. akascrubber

    Chapter 19

    I sense that Kier is very comfortable having both Riley and Lee satisfying his various physical and emotional needs. He kisses both. He only fucks Lee and Riley makes a home for him and gives him good blow jobs.
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