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Yes, wake up might be quite dramatic! I'm sure that the guys who will leave the resort are not going to be the same guys who came! 😉

Yes, bunch of guys, choosing plot over sex - outrageous!

Absolutely agree! In some of the previous chapters I was comparing Dumas' characters to @Laura S. Fox's characters. Closest to d'Artagnan is, actually, Lyn. Does introducing Luke as d'Artagnan undeline Brad's literature ignorance or there's some hidden meaning in it?! If Luke is Lyn's "replacement", why is he so much Brad like?!

Sunscreen, swim shirt, avoiding the peak uv hours but still...my forehead is red as traffic light!

No tan for gingers, only skin burn!!! 😭 Remember the moment of reunion when Alexander call Brad out about (not)reading... And all the homeworks and projects Lyn did for him... 🤪

There's no point having a church once they win the war! Maybe some reformed church to worship Cian, with services as performance for the masses!

There's been a subtle role reversal in volleyball scene. Have you noticed that Lyn didn't show his usual jealosy when Brad announced he will play with Luke?! But then, Brad reacts as a child whose toy has been taken from him! Btw, his choice of words is something I have to think about for my analyses... There's many interesting things in this chapter to think about... Luke, colledge Brad 'clone'. What kind of mirror he is going to be for Lyn?! Lyn and Alexander - fantastically synchronized...the way they complement each other make me think - did they play together before?! Than, there's Brad insecurity we see for the first time... It is not a chess match...Why chess - because it is the game of the intelligent and, Alexander and Lyn are the smart ones (unlike Brad). Very competitive too... Greetings from Aegean Sea guys, two more days and going back home.

When it comes to @Robert Hugill, you know there's gonna be naked buts and underweare fetish!

That's how I saw it too. I think it is brave to touch this topic. Authors' mission is not just to entartain readers, it is ok to push borders, shake us or even makes us uncomfortable! After all, this is something that nobody should be comfortable with! Finally, I've read some serious violence and abuse stories here at GA. Comparing to them this story is not exception.

Third reading which means this story is definetely my favorite SA competition story this year. As I've already said - I like good reunion stories and I like second chances too. Maybe because they are so rare in real life. This story looks finished but I would like to read some nice Epilog!

Thanx, not sure we're staying at the same places but, if we cross the roads, I'll send your greetings!

Greetings from the Aegean Sea!

I've got impression that aliens were digging deeper in subconscious to get the picture... But, it would be interesting to know, how would somebody else see us! 😁

Too bad Kieran and Thalion are in some sort of magic induced coma! I can immagine situation where Rory and Garran, covered with blod, mud and sweat are arriving to rescue their lovers...only to find them enjoy some massage and spa treatment, surrounded by food, drink, flowes and music from harph!

Almost done. I have to go back to 'war story' as my 'vacation mode' brain cannot handle two war stories at once!

Great - Rory, the badass king! One villain down - finally! Thalion - a diva...that's surprise (or maybe not )!

I'm shocked!!! Bravo SA!

When a life turns into one big mess... Nevertheless, what doesn't kill you - makes you stronger...and Tim, certanly, ends up stronger at the end of the story. I would like to read more about Tim and his future... Great tale SA!

Brought tears to my eyes. Very touching story SA. Bravo.

The greed will exist as long as humanity! Interesting story SA!

Interesting, original, intelligent humor and hell of a twist! This story has been written by the master of the writing craft! Bravo SA!

I LOVE this story!!! It has some romance, and some drama, and all the usual things you would expect to see in high school, but also a few twists. Don't forget adventure!!!

Surprised as others... At one moment, I thought it is going to be GA 'Jackie Chan' story, but then...the wings!? Hope this storie continues. Very good SA!

Wow, royal intrigues with some suspicious similarity with real people! Well done SA!

I hope our SA is feeling much better after getting this out of the head! I've, certainly, enjoyed reading it!