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  1. Vcs
    Love lost, found and the journey in between. That which Greyson Myers takes is a bit circuitous though, in the end,... Well, no spoilers here, one must read and find out!
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    Whew, what a ride. The last couple of chapters had me in tears and smiling.
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    Prologue

    Vcs commented on FlyOnTheWall's story chapter in Prologue

    ...if something happens during the afternoon, we get to scramble and go with a “breaking news” broadcast. With one of the worst presidents ever sitting in Washington, that’s always a possibility. I so needed that laugh, thank you!
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    Nothing to Forgive

    Vcs commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Nothing to Forgive

    Starboardtrack was exactly right... damn condoms!
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    Big (Not Bad) Wolf

    Vcs commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Big (Not Bad) Wolf

    My thoughts exactly!
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    Epilogue

    Vcs commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Epilogue

    Awe what a fun ending with having Rusty show up!
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    Chapter 1

    Vcs commented on rustle's story chapter in Chapter 1

    “There’s an alligator between my legs.” Ok, that's all it would take, there'd be no more swamps for me! What a nightmare trip and then to return to find a flat tire. Sorry, I couldn't help but laugh at the last line.
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    Chapter 1

    Vcs commented on jian_sierra's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Hmmm, ok so the ending was sweet and it's great Mark came to his senses. However, I must confess to feeling a bit perplexed by Mark's behavior at prom. He's been so in love with Dean yet it was as if he made it a point to make a big display of being lip locked with the head cheerleader? I get he didn't want to experience rejection but that was seriously cruel! Personally, I think he got off way to easy.
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    Beautifully touching short story.
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    Chapter 1

    Vcs commented on Andrew Q Gordon's story chapter in Chapter 1

    What an incredibly heartfelt piece. Thank you
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    untold

    Vcs commented on K.C.'s story chapter in untold

    I’m sorry for the difficult subject..., personally, is one of the saddest. It's the perp who should be sorry and bear the heartache but don't.
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    Nightmares

    Vcs reviewed K.C.'s story in Non-Fiction

    Raw, honest, real
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    Last Call, though fiction, deals with a reality that happens far too often. KC has done a magnificent job painting a picture of the turmoil of emotions felt by both main characters.
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    Chapter 7

    Vcs commented on chris191070's story chapter in Chapter 7

    Feeling a bit speechless here with my heart in my throat. All these years later and reading about a character in a fictional piece working in Tower One in September of 2001... Well, I was right back in that moment. Thank you for writing with compassion and respect.
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    A powerful glimpse into two traumatized souls finding each other.
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    Story: Part 2

    Vcs commented on Ieshwar's story chapter in Story: Part 2

    Absolutely stunning. One could feel the heart wrenching emotional pain as the Keith and Aidan wordlessly shared their individual traumas. Sometimes simply being there is not only enough but what is needed the most. With a genuine connection made they could begin, introducing themselves to the other.
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    Wait, that's really it? Wow, with an ending like that this story really must continue!
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    Fire!

    Vcs commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Fire!

    Must be in a bit of mood this evening as in reading through the description and note, I suddenly chuckled seeing "...be prepared for at least a bit of straight sex" thought, hmmm that's a different trigger warning. At any rate, working through stories offered here and am struck by Jack Poignet's ability to stunningly paint images with words.
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    In Control

    Vcs commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in In Control

    What an interesting take on body building and vampires. Caught in a cage chasing the perfect form not so dissimilar to those who become hooked. Well done.
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    BigPaws

    Vcs reviewed Jack Poignet's story in Fiction

    A unique take on were-creature, vampire and witch universe. From the start, characters and pacing draw the reader in and ensures audience remains engaged.
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    Such an exquisitely satisfying ending. So many possibilities lay ahead for Renato perhaps we might have an opportunity to hear of his future adventures?
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    Henry beamed, now fully committed. “It’s all about preparation, son. You can’t just park a barge like that in a boathouse without dredging the channel first, if you catch my drift.” “Stretching!” Odetta Henry and Odetta are adorably hilarious! The lines they come up with remind me of conversations shared with a dear friend of mine.
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    Interlude

    Vcs commented on Jack Poignet's story chapter in Interlude

    Personally, I'd love to see Timmy get a shot in. He's sure earned it! Yeah, I know the story has been written but one can dream. What, me evil? Bwahahaha
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    Oh my, what a lovely example of a loving, devoted mother - not! Great line though: “And you haven’t changed all that much, have you? I still remember you sucking your cute little thumbs. Now look at you. All grown up… sucking dick.” Well, they do belong to an interesting pack: "Breeding committee" “If you need volunteers—we’ll take shifts.” Now here's a line I could have happily used earlier this evening: “I am going to strangle you with your own spine.”
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    Pardon, the "perfect ending..."? Ugh, what a relief to see there are more chapters ahead! Am so wrapped up in this story I shudder to think of the comment that would be left now if this was the last page. LOL
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