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dboggs9700

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  1. I am 100% with you pvtguy. The passive point is exactly right.
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    Chapter 16

    Great chapter. Looking like the power couple is close to emerging.
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    The Quiet Boy

    Glad you're back @Tony S.. Thank you for giving us a new read.
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    Chapter 11

    Great to see Levi's slow and steady acceptance of his father and Luke. The dream is also going to aid Levi. Great chapter as always @Mark Ponyboy Peters!
  5. Gotta ask, who doesn't check someone out on Facebook and the other sites out of curiosity? Very disconcerting meeting. They are both hiding things, intentional or not. I think Ryder will text Owen first.
  6. Damn! Will Theo, Vince, and Jack ever be reunited? We know they are only strong when they are together.
  7. Beautiful chapter @CasualWanderer82. I am not even going to try to guess where things will end.
  8. Great chapter. Really liking the trust building too. Taggert was coming around slowly but surely, hopefully Bert recognizing him doesn't set him back any.
  9. Great little story, who wouldn't love Bill? Would be fitting for a couple leather guys to take turns on Leo.
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    Chapter Ten

    I just want to hug Owen and tell him everything is going to be fine. He won't listen but tell him not to overthink things.
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    Perfect Timing

    Truly enjoyable read start to finish. Good mix of story and sizzle. Looking forward to your next story!
  12. A fun read, eager for part three tomorrow.
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    Chapter Nine

    Your description and dialogue on the phone conversation were perfect in this chapter. I felt like I was just outside the car and watching and hearing the conversation. Great chapter @mastershakeme.
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    To the Team

    Good to see Grumpy Frank has left the building. Now a team builder at work and a hot lover for Marc at home.
  15. Glad you put the image here. I don't think everyone goes to your homepage before reading your stories and sees the poster art.
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    Making Up

    Austin and Will are equally at fault for their fucked-up relationship. It is not Will's fault solely since he has always been up front with Austin about Travis.
  17. Great premise, I'm sure things will get really interesting soon. Enjoying the story as always. Outstanding poster art, I hope everyone goes back and looks at it.
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    Chapter 15

    This chapter seemed so difficult for Johnny. I hope he can put things in proper perspective and survive. Maybe Bruce is the answer, if Bruce wants to make the commitment Johnny wants.
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    Chapter Eight

    So, we have an overthinker and a person with a dramatic insecurity streak. What could go wrong?
  20. I agree with both of you. I've reread some sections two and three times to be able to completely understand and take the totality in. @CasualWanderer82 writing looks very clean and clear on the surface but has great depth when examined closely.
  21. Guessing they are going back to the Mezenga vineyard estate and the Soul tree with Mister D. The tree seems to hold truths? Thank you @CasualWanderer82 for this fantastic story.
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    Chapter 10

    Great chapter as always @Mark Ponyboy Peters. Levi's introduction to the new church and Father Costas seems promising. He just needs time to come to terms with everything. Very cool he loves Thompsonville.
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    Chapter Seven

    A very sweet chapter. It scares me because @mastershakeme will probably now start throwing curve balls. Of course, that's what we're all here for any way.
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    Aftermath

    Great chapter! Taggert relaxing somewhat but feeling it is dangerous. Time seems to be chiseling away on some of Taggert's walls. Ash just being there for him.
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    Chapter Six

    The more I read, the more I wonder how Owen survives. Margot seems to be the only person in his life that gives him any hope going forward. Hopefully Ryder will be good for Owen, help him escape his planned-out life.
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