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How soon will we be seeing a new story from you? You have a solid fan base, and you are missed!
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I am marking love for this chapter because you brought up the AI subject as a story subject and previously, I have not seen it mentioned. I hope a lot of readers have read this even though very few actually commented. This was the best of the AI chapters. But is that because you gave enough prompts and that forced AI to focus on plot versus descriptions?
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Hoping you treat Sean as he deserves.
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Levi definitely needs to go back to church and start talking to Father Costas regularly. He needs to be part of a tolerant forgiving church with a caring priest. Casey is still a question mark, is the friendliness sincere or is it a set up for an ambush. Great chapter as always!
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The parents are so cold hearted it is scary, must be Thomas's profession. Eric was exactly as I had guessed, disappointed he didn't have a business partner but supportive of his cousin. But the total fallout is still not known. Thomas's view of his son's education as drpaladin said is disturbing and disgusting.
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Kent seems to be settling in well on the surface. No mention of Ken so hard to totally gage where Kent's mind is. Great comradery amongst the small group including Kent and a true sense of trust is being built.
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I noticed the names also. The sex scene seemed better than in the other chapters. I still cannot believe how over done the descriptions are. My favorite is under a sky the color of a bruised plum. I have found myself looking for any possible signs of AI writing in chapters now as I read them.
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Hopefully Theo's high morals will result in his success finding the Wisdom Tree and eventually Vee and Jack.
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Great chapter. Just enough of the twist of Ryder being late to be a work by @mastershakeme. Beth is the greatest!
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Tag has every right to be worried about being found. The hatred Zane seems to have for Tag will totally change Tag's life. Zane will disrupt every part of Tag's life, including Ash.
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Chapter 11 ~ Fornicating in the Chapel ~
dboggs9700 commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 11 ~ Fornicating in the Chapel ~
Love Shir, every story needs someone that clearly speaks what they think (@Summerabbacat does not count). I just hope that insulting Shayna's mother does not provoke Mannly's attackers to now target the entire ranch along with Mannly. -
There is a lack of much dialogue in all the chapters. Getting really bored with just adjective heavy descriptions.
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Really fun story. Loved the daughters' drama too. Was really nice to revisit those characters.
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I am starting to remember the characters after reading this chapter. Excited to see how you proceed.
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I really like the pace that I hope is leading to an unbelievably hot and passionate first time. Can't wait for next chapter now. Great wring as always Soren.
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Owen seems too calm right now and it scares me a little. Ryders apology was very touching and appropriate. Blowup coming......are they ready?
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At least Kent has Randy as a comrade for now.
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I was thinking Zane would emotionally harm Tag. But I would not put it past Zane having physical harm done to Tag. Rebecca seems to think Zane cannot touch the trust as it was written intentionally so he would have no control over it.
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I am finding this AI story more and more bland. The descriptions being given now remind me of a high schooler trying to sound prolific.
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Great chapter. Tag's trust could be used in so many ways. Maybe Tag will buy the Fleming Ranch himself as a home for he and Ash. Lots of possibilities. The real fear is what is Zane capable of doing to further hurt Tag?
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Chapter 29: The Truth That Buried Us
dboggs9700 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Truth That Buried Us
Don't celebrate yet. Do not assume Julian is in the clear until there is real evidence against Sofia. If Sebastien is rescued in time, he is the only person she has told the truth to. Twists and turns are what our author here is known for. Put nothing past Authur with the hatred he has always had for Julian, he may decide he can get the company if Julian is found guilty. -
I was hoping the vacation would calm them all down. Seems to have done the opposite. Will needs to calm down with Caroline. She could certainly upset Marie but also raise a lot of questions regarding Travis. Travis does not need allegations from Caroline on top of a probable Rehab stint in his near future.
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Looks like Johnny must really like Krakatoa since he suddenly called Violet to come over early. Charles Carrington was slightly mysterious when he presented the script to Johnny. Waiting to find out more about him. Loved the clothing Sam and Johnny chose for the restaurant, reminded me of the old Rat Pack. Great chapter, can't wait to see where you take things to next.
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I am really concerned for Owen. The parents are going to come down on him hard, and his tendency tends to be to accept anything his parents demand. This sounds like a situation where he needs to get advice, Beth, Jules, Margot, anyone to keep him calm and give him alternatives. Maybe Owen and Margot need to have a Sunday dinner with their parents to discuss things, not wait for the wedding reception.
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A Harlequin Romance approach.
