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Employee of the Month, Part Two of Three
dboggs9700 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Employee of the Month, Part Two of Three
So beautifully written. I am hoping Alex is in denial and we get a HEA with Ryan in the ending chapter. Besides, who wouldn't fall in love with a hot ginger like Ryan. -
Ken and Kent seem to be growing more as individuals. The mention of Claire in a letter from Ken is a step forward, as is Kent mentioning Randy and the other guys in his letters to Ken.
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The build up to this chapter was well worth it. This was a love making scene versus a fuckfest. Beautifully done Soren.
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Employee of the Month, Part One of Three
dboggs9700 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Employee of the Month, Part One of Three
Great start. I really enjoy your lighthearted stories. I have a feeling Ryan will be a hit at Alex's 'massive event'. Looking forward to tomorrow's and Sunday's chapters. -
This sounds like a threat coming from Kendo and when he acts on it, Will will take him down. Especially on top of the drugs he is feeding Travis.
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Glad Ryan made such a quick recovery and with a healthy sexual appetite. Evan and Lisa getting together would be great as long as Ryan and Randy don't breakup.
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The BBQ sounded so good I had to take a break from reading to cook a real breakfast and eat. Glad Violet is already thinking about financing options. I hate the idea of possibly having Carrington involved in financing in any way. Now we wait and see how negotiations with Carrington goes for the script.
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They share a love that will never end or be forgotten. Regardless of how hard they try to dismiss or bury their feelings, they will never go away. I think the kiss was confirmation of that but also allowing them to move forward in their individual lives.
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Good informational chapter @Mark Ponyboy Peters. I agree with @Summerabbacat and I don't think any one could say it better. Casey is still concerning but I do not see him as dangerous as others see him.
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Incredible chapter! Cane23 and mayday summarized everything so clearly. I think the strategic planning of when and how to reveal all the terms of the trust to Zane needs to be done. Tag's life will be in danger if Zane learns of the trust and not the beneficiary being Nasser.
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I really enjoyed reading your story @Paladin. Your style is so crisp and clean and I love it. Your characters are extremely likeable too. I'll read the sequel and then binge current on your newest story.
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Good chapter, lots happening. Happy for Ariel being accepted when he came out to the parents. Hopefully no more surprises coming from Tyler. But no update on Ryan or Sean yet.
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Great seeing the men form a solid pack. Trusting each other, a true brotherhood formed. The trip home will be interesting. To see how much Kent and Ken have changed and really haven't realized it.
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First date will be great fun seeing everyone from the ranch will be there. Wonder if one of Mannly's attackers will be around town and catch a glimpse of him?
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I am guessing it is Jake's horse.
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Beautifully written chapter. Sexy and passionate. I am still thinking throuple like I commented previously. I can't wait to see how things move forward.
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You have your writing style, which I enjoy, and I am sure your decision to not change it is the right one.
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Sex scenes can also enhance a story when done well.
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I understand when AI research is used and then personalized by the author as part of the story. There are some authors that are using way too much AI written material in their stories and those need to be labeled AI created.
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Good chapter. Nice getting to know Violet better. She seems to like the script but is probably trying to decide if the expense of making it is too high. Carrington is still a question mark but the comment about him stepping in at the right time makes me question his character and connections if financing is necessary.
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This was a beautiful story with some unforgettable characters. I appreciate how you gave us HEA but left it open for the possibility of a follow-up story. Great writing as always and I'll be here for your next story.
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Chapter 11 ~ Fornicating in the Chapel ~
dboggs9700 commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 11 ~ Fornicating in the Chapel ~
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How soon will we be seeing a new story from you? You have a solid fan base, and you are missed!
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I am marking love for this chapter because you brought up the AI subject as a story subject and previously, I have not seen it mentioned. I hope a lot of readers have read this even though very few actually commented. This was the best of the AI chapters. But is that because you gave enough prompts and that forced AI to focus on plot versus descriptions?
