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“The Devil’s at the Door”
dboggs9700 commented on CasualWanderer82's story chapter in “The Devil’s at the Door”
I agree with both of you. I've reread some sections two and three times to be able to completely understand and take the totality in. @CasualWanderer82 writing looks very clean and clear on the surface but has great depth when examined closely. -
Guessing they are going back to the Mezenga vineyard estate and the Soul tree with Mister D. The tree seems to hold truths? Thank you @CasualWanderer82 for this fantastic story.
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Great chapter as always @Mark Ponyboy Peters. Levi's introduction to the new church and Father Costas seems promising. He just needs time to come to terms with everything. Very cool he loves Thompsonville.
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A very sweet chapter. It scares me because @mastershakeme will probably now start throwing curve balls. Of course, that's what we're all here for any way.
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Great chapter! Taggert relaxing somewhat but feeling it is dangerous. Time seems to be chiseling away on some of Taggert's walls. Ash just being there for him.
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The more I read, the more I wonder how Owen survives. Margot seems to be the only person in his life that gives him any hope going forward. Hopefully Ryder will be good for Owen, help him escape his planned-out life.
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Calder seems to want Nathaniel. To get to Aaron? Romantic interest? Both? Was the card to Xavier from Calder a direct challenge even though Xavier is not an alpha?
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I had my doubts that Frank would follow through on the bet, so glad he did. A perfectly beautiful lovemaking scene, so sexy and romantic.
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Absolutely beautiful, the love and devotion Luka had for Devin. Hoping Devin's love for Luka can break Theron. Hoping for a HEA but I know that is not always the case.
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Not sure what to think about Bruce's response or lack of. Seems you could not ask for a better critique on your performance than what Johnny got from Violet. Another great chapter Albert.
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Not sure what is more depressing, the prep room conversation or the 'breakup' with Cole.
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Chapter 26: Blood, Money and Betrayal
dboggs9700 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 26: Blood, Money and Betrayal
Clara to the rescue. After Clara divorces Arthur perhaps, he will meet the love of his life at a McDonald's drive thru window. -
Chapter 22: Where Love still Lives!
dboggs9700 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 22: Where Love still Lives!
I read the story over the last couple days and enjoyed it start to finish. Enjoyed the slightly open ending. Great writing @vanalas. Thank you sir. -
The prayer had me tearing up. It looks like Levi is adapting to his new life and accepting everything on his own terms. Loved this chapter @Mark Ponyboy Peters.
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Cole seems nonthreatening, perfect for Owen right now. Hopefully it is not an act.
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The Future Alpha of Whiteflame
dboggs9700 commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Future Alpha of Whiteflame
For some reason, I feel Theo will succeed in defeating the branches. He is long overdue for some good luck. I am really excited for Vince, his guiding spirit, Skarg, and Jack to meet up. Let the four of them fight the evil spirits. -
Surprised how tame the app replies were, especially since Owen is 'new meat'. Let's wait and see what Margot thinks of Luke, that should be interesting.
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Really enjoying the lighter side of Frank. Hoping he does not revert back to the old Frank. Will Frank make good on his losing bet?
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Chapter 24: Nothing sweeter than a fate fought for and won.
dboggs9700 commented on vanalas's story chapter in Chapter 24: Nothing sweeter than a fate fought for and won.
I enjoyed reading this one too @vanalas. I am starting to question my own sanity now. Thank you @vanalas. -
Happy Father's Day! Fun and enjoyable story. I wonder sometimes how you come up with some of your stories. LOL
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Margot is something else and exactly right for keeping Owen in the closet along with herself. The dating app, with a picture, will probably bite Owen in the ass when someone close to him discovers it.
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Typical Bavarian Breakfast
dboggs9700 commented on Soren Kraft's story chapter in Typical Bavarian Breakfast
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I agree Will needs to persuade Travis away from the cocaine. Unfortunately, Travis will probably decide it is because of Will's disdain of Kendo. I like Austin but he strikes me as a crazy stalker type ex. Will better keep a bodyguard close by now.
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Owen seems like a confused guy with a domineering and overbearing family. Telling any family member no, will probably be deemed evil and the devil's work. I am into this story already and I can't wait to see where we get taken. Looks like the possibility of several villains and unfortunately very few possible allies.
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I vote for chapters 3000-5000 words. Longer than that often cannot be read in a single sitting.
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