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Chapter Two - Ben's POV
dboggs9700 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter Two - Ben's POV
It is only chapter two, and you have given us three villains to hate. Ben needs a wakeup call so badly. Hopefully the companion will be what Ben needs to break the ropes his f...ked up family has him tied up with. Great start on this story @mastershakeme. -
Absolutely fantastic story telling by you @Wayne Gray. You took an idea that most would have made an average story and with your words, you turned it into a classic. Thank you @Wayne Gray.
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Great story and I loved the characters @Paladin. I'll watch for your stories since I favorited you.
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Chapter One - Ben's POV
dboggs9700 commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Chapter One - Ben's POV
I like the way this is starting out and I will keep reading. I have a feeling that Vera will be an important character in the story and I love her attitude regarding the rest of Ben's family. Big question, will the robot have the balls to put Ben's family in their place and quit using him? -
I want to give Casey the benefit of a doubt. Meanness and nastiness are not inherited traits, and we do not know the environment he is being raised in or his outside influences. Levi has been warned enough about Casey that he will proceed with caution if he chooses to associate with Casey. Levi is a smart kid and not as naive as we think.
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Another great sensual chapter. Henry's becoming more and more comfortable with himself and the guys. Henry truly accepting himself is allowing him to enjoy Ivo and Nico more thoroughly.
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Chapter 14 ~ Stench so Acrid ~
dboggs9700 commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 14 ~ Stench so Acrid ~
Great chapter! Very surprised none of the ranch guys recognized the drunk just by the rest of the description Jake had given them. I hope Mannly does not go into a panic when he speaks with the sheriff. -
Great opening chapter! I am excited because this will be first story of yours, I have read as it is posted.
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Ordinary Days and Rumors
dboggs9700 commented on Tony S.'s story chapter in Ordinary Days and Rumors
I am right there with you scared. I have never been in the military. Has their training really prepared them to survive? Are they strong enough mentally? -
You were absolutely correct to recommend this as my next read @Summerabbacat. Thank you my friend. Beautiful story @Paladin! I had no doubt I would love it because of how much I have enjoyed your other stories.
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Thank you, I do plan on reading those next.
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Been binge reading the last couple days and caught up now. I am really enjoying the story, and this chapter was especially fun to read @Paladin.
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Great chapter @Mark Ponyboy Peters. The emotional development in Levi has been unbelievable.
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They are not that popular here in the US either. Hoping the King offers Harry something and they return there.
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I am so sad to see the story ending so soon, because all of the characters feel so real, I don't want to see them go. Not that I could see it happening, what would happen if Tag had 'an accidental death' caused by Nasser? Great chapter as always! Looking forward to Friday, if Friday is really Friday.
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This chapter has many memorable quotes. This one stuck with me because is really shows the gradual evolution in Kent. I feel like this chapter shows that Kent is maturing and becoming a confidant man.
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I'm assuming Marcus is up to no good but not sure what. Very hot session started upstairs.
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I think Theo will find Jack and Vee while he searches for the Wisdom Tree.
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Sean's Excuse - Epilogue
dboggs9700 commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Sean's Excuse - Epilogue
Glad you completed the story and I think you did justice to it. Thank you Lee! -
Chapter 13 ~ Britches, Buckles, and Boots ~
dboggs9700 commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 13 ~ Britches, Buckles, and Boots ~
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Employee of the Month, Part Three of Three
dboggs9700 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Employee of the Month, Part Three of Three
This story is fantastic and you have totally outdone yourself. You gave us an unforgettable HEA. Thank you Joe!- 19 comments
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Chapter 13 ~ Britches, Buckles, and Boots ~
dboggs9700 commented on Vcs's story chapter in Chapter 13 ~ Britches, Buckles, and Boots ~
Really enjoyed this chapter @Vcs. Bit of a cliffhanger at the end, so I am looking forward to the next chapter. -
I loved the story. Thank you for a great read @Paladin. Sorry I was almost two years late in reading it. Starting your current story next.
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Outstanding chapter! Great seeing a new and improved Henry. He took on Marcus and blew him away being in command and composed. I am anxious to see how Henry will be when Nico and Ivo return and he sees them on friday.
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Employee of the Month, Part Two of Three
dboggs9700 commented on Boy Mercury X's story chapter in Employee of the Month, Part Two of Three
So beautifully written. I am hoping Alex is in denial and we get a HEA with Ryan in the ending chapter. Besides, who wouldn't fall in love with a hot ginger like Ryan.
