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So good to see CJ and Ozzie back. And yes, a surprise too. When I saw who wrote the story (and that it was a Christmas one) I new right away I'd like it. Thanks Carlos

What an amazing idea.

I love it. Everybody's life is going to change a lot. I hope they make sure to check if Link is the father or not. I admire the kid for accepting responsibility. And Jonthan was a big surprise. Blu and Kyle haven't even spoke with each other about that one, but everybody's acceptance of Jonathan speaks volumes.

A great story and I enjoyed it way more than I thought. I wouldn't agree with avidreader that the ending was a copout, but it was a disappointment, unless of course as someone else mentioned we'll see that in the next stor. Thank you

I feel so bad for Danny. At least his grandmother seems to be coming around - but we all know it won't last. Especially when we get to where they're going to want to "ungay" Danny. What a farce, eh? You mentioned you recently published a book. What's is it? Is it in ebook format? If it's as good as this story, and I'm sure it is, I'd love to read it.

A really touching and emotional chapter. What a great ending to a great story. I've thoroughly enjoyed it. And to find out you are going to continue the story of Eddie and Matt! That's amazing, and I'm looking forward to it.

I read this story back in 2012 but completely forgot it. I just now read the entire thing from beginning to end, only to see that it's been a really long time since it was continued. How disappointing. Is there any chance it will continue? I've really, really enjoyed it.

This has been a real ride and I've enjoyed it all along. Thanks for this. And whatever you write next I'm sure I'll love it. You're Great! There is always an opening to continue the Jared Story but with other major characters - like Liam and/or Keon. I do love shifter stories, so will also be happy with that.

I also loved this chapter. By the description of your family you could write a story just about that.

This is great Carlos. I was aware of this section of GA but had never visited it. After this I'll be sure to be a more frequent visitor and maybe even ask a question or two.

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As a first chapter I am intrigued to find out where it's going to go. Good start.

This was an amazing story. Well written, and kept my interest right through. I even put off reading the story of Jarren & Nash, which by the way is a great story as well. Thank you

I guess I'm a bit disappointed CJ might not get mentioned again, but he has had his time to shine, so time to pass the torch.

Chipper's got so much going on in his life right now - so demanding. It's so hard to get in my head that this is suppose to be his time to shine and not CJs (i.e. this story is about him, not CJ). Glad CJ is still going to be part of it though. This chapter was so good - but so short?

Self Doubt? Sorry you feel that way but rest assured it's not necessary. This is an amazing story and I've been enjoying it immensely. Your writing style is great and while I haven't read the story that precedes this one I'm catching up on it.

Great Chapter. Davies took on a lot of responsibility all of a sudden, but it appears that he did an excellent and responsible job of it. Now he has to face another issue. Wonder what that is. Oh - and by the way when you list the cities in Canada he would be touring you mentioned Ottawa as being in Quebec. It's actually in Ontario. Easy mistake to make since it's just across the river from Quebec.

Ahh... You left us hanging just when things were getting good (I guess it's called a cliffhanger). This was a great chapter. Finally Angus is gone, but at what cost? I'm looking forward to the next chapter (soon I hope)

Thanks for this very tumultuous story. It was amazing, thank you. You've got a lot on your plate right now and I wish you the best. However I look forward to you starting a new story. One with Jay and Rhidian as the stars would be really good. Of course I would expect you to include Drew, Aria and Amara as well, even if it is in a smaller role.

I'm looking forward to reading this story. I wonder if we'll see some of the characters from some of the previous stories - that would be cool and interesting.

Thanks for the clarification quokka. That definitely changes things for me.

I remember the first time I read this story and the incident with the buggy happened. At the time I thought that Devon had over-reacted - especially as far as Edgar was concerned. It's not clear what role Edgar had in all this, other than perhaps that he should have been watching the twins better. I now feel that he was right in sending the twins packing, but not Edgar. He's being treated like a little kid which he's not and his role is still not evident. Very interesting re-reading the story and obviously If I didn't like it I wouldn't be reading it again.

I think we all knew that CJ would someday end up becoming President. But this lonely chapter confirms that as well as puts us up to date o the general highlights of CJ's life since the end of the last book. This was great! While this appears the end of the story of CJ and all, and I understand and appreciate all the hard work that Carlos has put into the story of CJ. This is undoubtedly the ultimate end of the story. Yes, Carlos deserves a break after such a fantastic performance. But... there is nothing that prevents him from deciding someday to fill in the blanks and details of all that has happened since CJ finished university. Just a thought. However, whatever route Carlos takes, I'll be one of the first to jump on the bandwagon and read whatever he writes. It will definitely be good.

I would definitely be interested in a sequel with Danuva and Masia. It should prove quite interesting.

It's great that Eddie has such a great Mom. But I think some credit should go to his father. He's really supportive of his son, and I think when he finds out his son is gay he'll be cool with that too. After all, wasn't supporting gay people one of the reasons he left the old church?