Palantir

Great start. You made me smile. You made me intrigued. I like the natural flow of your writing and, oh my, there's so much potential for where the story might go.

Remember them? Good grief! I play their music almost weekly.

1. Heinlein is one of the greats. 2. Reading is highly subjective and personal, and the old saying 'one man's meat is another man's poison' very much applies. Stating as fact, rather than opinion, that a particular novel or piece of writing is poorly written, wonderful, boring etc, can be taken with great exception by readers with different views. 3. Amended number 1. I regard Heinlein as one of the greats. 4. DNF. Good grief! I think this is a powerful tool for anyone who loves reading. There are more wonderful reading experiences available than anyone could ever get through, so why waste time reading stuff that doesn't do anything for you?

Great little story - you should write more,

Yay! I used the meaning of 'widdershins' to create the title of my fantasy novel - 'Widderkin'.

What a delightful story. Your characters piqued my interest from start to finish and the story flowed gently but seemlessly. Thank you.

Wow! You have a gift for evoking mood from surroundings and and adding mystery and unease to the ordinary.

When I was in Primary School I was the ink monitor in one of the classes and it was my job to fill all the inkwells from a great big bottle of ink.

Lol - deja vu indeed! Last year I didn't mention that I've camped at Yass. I didn't notice the sign though.

I have to say wow because I watched that movie just last night and here it is referenced on GA.

You're right of course - The PM's efforts really resulted from the inspiration of Woorawa and friends impacting on his personal as well as his political life. Yep! - Nathan gets to visit the penguins in the near future. 🐧 'getting themselves ready' - Kieran's expectation of getting used to 'ordinary' times is a misconception of epic proportions.

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Yes, there are major surprises to turn the friends on their heads.🤐

What's next? Singing orcas, yabby races, power eyes and who knows what else. I'm delighted to know you enjoyed the story.

I was trying to think of some special kind of clever trick for ages and then the conscience vote came to mind. We actually do have it in the Australian parliament, though I haven't a clue how it really works. Lol - author's licence is very handy.

A few notes from the author. My apologies for the delayed post. I hope the double size compensates somewhat. Chapter 25 brings Woorawa’s challenge to a conclusion and I want to thank all the people following the story for their interest. I want to say a bigger thank for all the varied reactions. And I offer heartfelt thanks to the readers who gave their time and thoughts with the comments I love and regard so much. Laughs, challenges, praise, anticipation, conjecture – what a wonderful mix they present. VOE was written in line with Ranevargar’s injunction to keep Realm and Human interaction low key. There were a few close calls with Min Min lights, sentinel eagles, meeting shenanigans etc. There’s no injunction like that for the next section of Widderkin so what might happen is up for grabs. A tentative name for what’s to follow could be ‘The Great Pearl’ but I don’t really like that and by the time it’s ready for posting it will be something different. Sorry, I’m only a bit over 20K words so far, so posting is quite a way down the track. A milestone. I’m quite chuffed to note that somewhere in Chapter 25 I clock up a million words on GA. YAY!