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    I thought this was just a great chapter. Well written and paced. I am glad that Daniel will be able to have a life that he wants to lead. He needs to find Gary and do what he can to help him and then get out there and see some more of the world. Burying his Papa in the garden felt right as well. Axel was the obvious one to take over after the last chapter, sort of saw that one coming. I hope he doesn't kill any of the beta wolves in Calgary... I truly hope the ceremony works and they dababbi regain their humanity. I truly hope they remember nothing, not sure they could really live with knowing what they had done while under Christopher's control. Can't wait to see what happens in Calgary...
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    Need: 9.1

    centexhairysub commented on Rhythminthemind's story chapter in Need: 9.1

    OMG, I so loved this chapter... It was just so freaking great. The exchange between Tasha and James was just pitch perfect. And Tasha actually gave him the truth, on several issues, and that was just what he needed. Then the conversation in the car between James and Peter was so funny... Just really well written and spot on...
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    Chapter 16

    centexhairysub commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 16

    Laughed my ass off over the two scenes with the different pilots... OMG, just too funny. But Will actually got a lesson and a point across while being oh so funny. The last few scenes with Connie were so well written and had so much emotion infused in them. Connie, even if he never gets back in bed with Will, is someone I would love forward to seeing again. Maybe we will get an update on what is going on with the compound in Hawaii. Can't wait to see what happens next. Mark, we all understand real life and the demands it can make. The last 18 months or so have just been so challenging to us all. Keep up the great work at your pace...
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    Christopher may have gotten what he deserved; but he did realize before his death that he was wrong. He might not have had time to fully process or even accept it but he had at least realized it. Archibald killed his own child, a child gone bad because of his own cruelty and idiocy. He deserved to be ripped to pieces by the dababbi. Who is going to be Alpha enough to control the dababbi? Can they be saved without any additional deaths?
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    In the Gardens

    centexhairysub commented on Grumpy Bear's story chapter in In the Gardens

    Well, a discussion of how to stop and defeat and maybe cure the dababbi and how not to kill Christopher on site; and then a big old bear orgy to take the tension off. I understand the desire to fix the issues with the dababbi; but with Christopher's madness, I am just not sure it is feasible.
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    Ancient magic; as in actual magic or more like demi gods or gods? This is just getting so good.
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    What a truly wonderful chapter; so well written and just flowed wonderfully. Bill acted with true grace under pressure. Not many creatures, much less humans, would have been able to do any better. Gary will make a wonderful Papa; but I am not so sure that Bill will be willing to just walk away from Sean.
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    That would have made perfect sense except they knew that Christopher had parked his vehicle right next to the one that Gary brought the kids in. Knowing this; it just seems like the smarter thing to do would have been to head away from that area. I realize that the dababbi would have been able to move faster than the kids so once Christopher realized and send the dababbi after the kids it would have been a race that the kids might not have won, but just seems like it would have been smarter than heading back toward where you know Christopher and dababbi had at least been. Don't take it personally; I bitch all the time when you damn(🤪) authors don't write exactly what I think you should.... LOL...
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    R'mart is smarter than most of those at Telgar probably give him credit for; but he knows and understands that he cannot move to change everything too quickly. D'gar was right to ask permission, it does show the riders of Telgar that they seconded riders to respect the command structure of the place. D'gar is right to try and find out which of the other leaders will support R'mart as he tries to make changes. D'gar is not so much trying to change the system but trying to survive if and when the system blows itself up...
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    I am going to have to hunt someone down if anything happens to the kids... So well written; don't understand why they did not head out immediately without returning to the campsite. You would think that would have been the smart move since they know that Christopher and the dababbi were in the woods already...
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    Taran should have realized earlier that: Momma always knows best... Love the interaction between Taran and Ronnie; there is such a realistic quality to it, the writing is just wonderful...
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    Oh Please, do not let the innocent kids get hurt. Gary will do what he can to either draw the dababbi off or fight, he has no chance either way really. I doubt that the addition of Marcus or Rodney would make a difference. The only hope would be that they find them and get them away before Christopher realizes it...
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    I am sorry to say that I do not. I have not even seen a post from him a long while.
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    Chapter 27

    centexhairysub commented on lilansui's story chapter in Chapter 27

    Oh Hell to the NO...
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    For a chapter that started so sweetly and with such promise; it ended badly and with tears and recriminations.
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    No, he had one band when Yakob saw him and now he has two. What do the bands represent? That he was possessed by the Gods? Touched by them? Why the bands on the lower leg? There is just way too many questions that have not been answered.
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    I just knew that it was going to be Gary that Christopher had as his third person for revenge before going after his Papa... The fact that he would have his monsters kill innocent children just to make the revenge happen is so beyond hideous that I just can't even imagine it. Archibald was a bad Papa and obviously has not learned much since then. I hope that Daniel is able to get through to him. I doubt that talking will even slow Christopher from his revenge scenario but anything is possible. What happens to the dababbi if Christopher is killed?
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    Love how Kaplan goes from being the in charge beta that organizes everything to being both the love sick mate to Cyrus and the amazed spectator to Vincent's mage ability. I think they need to find out about Stuerm, he is just way to underhanded. Having a second Delta would be a big no no. I wonder what else he is hiding? Hope we get a better explanation as to why or how Yakob knew that Vincent had two visitations???
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    Chapter 26

    centexhairysub commented on lilansui's story chapter in Chapter 26

    So many twist and turns in so many different directions. Not sure how this will end up playing out; but I have a feeling that a lot of people are going to be very unhappy. I honestly can't understand how anyone as truly stupid as Lord Duyi could have produced two children as bright and loyal and wonderful as he did...
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    Chapter 25

    centexhairysub commented on lilansui's story chapter in Chapter 25

    Wonderful chapter; well written and it flowed so well. Rushi must die for this; I do not care if she is the Empress and the mother of the future Emperor; she has to die. Nothing else will do at this point; she will never stop her scheming. If the Emperor had done the right thing; then this issue would have already been resolved. Jihan will have a surprise or two up his sleeves. Kastan will get there; late but I hope in time to make an impact. Lady Baiza must also die; I don't think she will ever give up her dream of being Kastan's mate. She is as duplicitous as the the Empress.
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    Ah dammit; let's all hope that Ezekiel or someone reaches them before the boys go into the woods. We should strongly suspect that we all know who the third revenge is for; and with the kids around, it could be a disaster... Well written and the pacing was excellent.
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    Well, as easy as it is to hate Christopher; it is fairly obvious that his Papa Archibald Arnold bears a great deal of the blame for how Christopher has turned out. I wonder if he will be able to play any role in containing his wayward cub? I sort of suspect that he will claim he holds no responsibility. Hope that the Alpha wolf can get past the beta to try and get additional help; although the wolves did not seem to be able to do anything about the dababbi...
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    Well, like every Bond villain ever, Christopher just had to gloat and tell what his grand plan was or at least how the creatures were created. This might help those that are trying to fight him... Now that the wolves have been attacked; I do hope that the snotty beta of the Supreme Alpha gets his comeuppance... If Thomas knows the family, maybe they can piece enough of the backstory together to find out who Christopher's Papa is... We know that Gabriel was the favorite of Christopher's Papa, were they changed by the same man?
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    Aleks is not the one to be in this business; I actually think that Maks might be able to do what needs to be done to protect Aleks; but just don't see Aleks as being strong enough to really pull what he needs to do off. You always have that one friend that time and space just doesn't matter; you are truly friends for life...
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    Loved the scene with Vera; she is just too cool... We can hope that the legends are true and that maybe the elder can help turn them back...
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