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Glad to see that James is getting to go out into the field; like Finch, I think; but still not sure how much I trust him. Casper is at least starting to deal with some of his past. Glad the Toranaga's are there for him. Guess I was hoping that even though different levels of power and other issues; that James, Casper, Tasha, and maybe even Caleb would have been able to train and work together...

Ah, so we know the probable other side to the story now. In the real world a bear can snap the neck of a wolf with one swipe of his paw; but taking on a group might prove troublesome. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Okay, a different way to start a story. Have to wonder where this story will go and how wild it will get. Well written and flowed fairly well.

Like weinerdog, I don't understand their reaction. The one unattended meeting with Father shows James knocking him through a wall and then picking him up and shaking his damaged body and threatening him if he hurts his friend. Doesn't sound like someone that has a good relationship with Father. Sounds like they are just more afraid that someone that powerful isn't under their total control. Sort of think I like the Finch character, hope we get to see him some more...

OMFG, Maks has it really bad... Alek is, I want to say cute, but also an ass... I just don't know...

OMFG, really?????

Okay, a ton of information and reactions from all over. The next few chapters should be interesting...

Well, had to wait the whole chapter but G'dol finally got his comeuppance. I was afraid he was going to get himself, his dragon, or someone else hurt but this works so much better. There are those that just think their shit doesn't stink, but he will find out that it all does in the end... Enjoyed this chapter a lot, so much going on; but it flowed wonderfully and was really well written.

So glad that Emery arrived and was able to mate and claim Rhyad, they are so cute together... I truly despise the parents; I hope they die a horrible painful death that last days with them in agony before the end... I do hope that Owin is somehow able to find Sepherus. I still can't quite decide about them; but the idea of some Alpha forcing themselves on Owin is just icky.

I swear if someone does not kill; and yes, I mean literally cause the death of these to parents; I am going to dislike every chapter from now on...

WOW, I so did not see that coming. It had been mentioned several times that Sarah was simply human, so unlike most things about this story, I just accepted it. You have to understand her point of view. The fact that to access their powers the kids have to go through so horrific trauma just seems so unnecessarily evil. I sort of think that it would be better to just be human. This first book was well written and flowed better toward the end then the beginning and middle. I did find some of the characters better developed than others and felt that some chapters were almost jarring in their disharmony; that said I did enjoy the story. It is rare for me to find a story that seems to be fairly unique and not like something that I have seen a dozen times before and this story was definitely that. I will definitely continue to follow and can't wait to see where you take this next...

Well, a whole lot going on in this chapter. So happy for Cyrus and Kaplan; I hope this evolution in their relationship continues and is fully successful. Hope that Dave and Stacy are able to move forward in their relationship as well, no matter what form it ends up taking in the end.. I hope that we get to meet all of those that want to try and assume the territory that Vincent has but wants to turn over to someone else. I am still not sure that is truly the best decision but.... Keep up the great work.

O, what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to deceive! Walter Scott

A really good chapter, but they need to practice fully as a team; I know the other three have more experience but knowing what each other are doing in the middle of a fight could be very important later. Plus, Taran has to work with his new ability to get fully use to it and integrate it into his arsenal. Taran and Ronnie seem more cohesive each time they get together.

Well, that sucked in so many horrible ways....

OMG, so hot... I loved the intensity of the video play and how they added someone on each end. You can do something like that when you truly trust your partner and have a great relationship. I wonder why no one down under had any idea there were elementals in the country; did they originate there or come from somewhere else? Can't wait to maybe get the whole group visiting together at the clubs... Great job, very well written chapter and flowed wonderfully.

And why in God's name would either of them even begin to trust their parents? Nothing about this passes the smell test. Eld will find the letter later, but have to wonder what effect it will have...

Tsuru is right; James needs to stay out of the way unless instructed by one of them to do something. James, while trying to help, put himself in this position and his lack of patience and unwillingness to seek directions has lead directly to this current situation. Of course, none of them communicate the way they should. Charlie is linked to the Whale, by choice or need; I am not sure. He is going to do what he can to protect it; of course, if Sebastian had not broken him, that would not be the issue. Great chapter...

Excellent chapter as always, flowed wonderfully and exceptionally well crafted. Granger truly understands human nature in a way few ever have. Daventry sleeping with the Tsar's mother while helpful; isn't gaining anyone much at this point. Although she was all the way until her death deeply anti-French and worked to prevent any close ties between Russia and France. Addington was considered largely a failure as both Prime Minister and Home Secretary. However his years as Prime Minister were limited and Britain simply did not have the economy or allies to wage the type of war needed to defeat France. He did what he could with what he had; but that is the best that could probably be said of his term as Prime Minister. Love to Granger is able to handle and maneuver his way around the situation; no matter what it is... Bravo, Mark, Bravo...

I hope in his final moments that Sebastian felt pain and anguish, and true regret; but mostly pain and anguish. I don't think James really understands how powerful the Whale is; but I also don't think he cares either... OMG, such a great, is very short chapter....

Love this chapter; so many new things coming out. Of course, Eld Emery completely misunderstood the conversation between the brothers. I wonder if the lightning strike is what delayed his onset of omega; or does being favored by the dawn happen later naturally? So many questions...

Great update; maybe this group with a few unique powers will be able to keep themselves from being abducted or at least fight back after the abduction. Of course, it would be nice to be able to find out something about why this is happening and what the lunar cycle has to do with it. Yea... Team....

No matter what the issue is between James and Charlie and the Whale; it is Sebastian's fault and I blame him for it all.... A battle between James and the Whale with Charlie helping the Whale might be very interesting....

When one is young, bright sparkly things can pull your attention away from what is important; sometimes to the detriment of things most important. This chapter had a feeling of melancholy running through it...

I am so over Sebastian, he truly needs to die in a horrible painful way... So the Whale is trying to help put Charlie back together; but is it doing so to help Charlie or help it go somewhere else? James needs to focus on what is going on instead of just what he thinks is going on..