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Honestly, I am surprised that Mike managed to survive the night. I was honestly afraid that he was going to be bred while they were in wolf form. I wonder why Nick just slapped him and left? I would not want to be Mike the next time that Nick decides to have a go at him. The Pip character seems to be interesting, sort of hope we get more of him in the future...
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Tsuru is so gonna get the 411 on Cody... So glad that James realized that he had to get some advice, if not actual help. I know he did not really plan on his grandmother coming; but that is what happens when you care... I wonder where and what Finch has been up to; sort of surprised that he has not contacted someone above him; but assume since Peter did not know what was going on that he hasn't or the climb up the hierarchy takes longer than usual. They need to find a way to communicate with this spirit; of course, if it did come from another world it might not be easy to do. If only we knew someone that could sense what others are thinking and feeling; oh right, we do, where is Casper when you need him... LOL.
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Okay, no more dates until this is resolved. This could put both of them of dating for life, becoming bitter old men. So was the spirit pulled from another world or dimension; and if so by whom?
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Chapter 19- The Edesias' Disdain
centexhairysub commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 19- The Edesias' Disdain
This is not enough; I want them to be physically punished or dead... They don't get to just disown their child and turn and walk away... -
Ah, a mystery, so what pissed off the nature spirit so bad that he decided to drown a town??? Tune in tomorrow, same bat channel, same bat time, for the answers to these and other interesting questions about the nature spirit and the love life of James...
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Chapter 18- Enthale and Cojalis, part 2
centexhairysub commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 18- Enthale and Cojalis, part 2
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Really, if you get your date killed on the first date; you might have trouble getting others to ask you out... This was really well written and flowed wonderfully. The last eight or ten chapters have had more resonance to them and I think have been better written and polished then some of the first 20 or so chapters. They start was good but these last few have been so well done... They seem smoother and more cognizant of flow and chemistry.
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While I enjoyed this chapter a great deal, the primary feeling that I got reading it throughout was one of melancholy. Even during the upbeat parts; there just seemed to be a low level feeling of sadness or regret. Well written and flowed beautifully, can't wait to see the next update.
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Chapter 17- Enthale and Cojalis, part 1
centexhairysub commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 17- Enthale and Cojalis, part 1
So happy for them both; of course, they will make great parents, just don't let the grandparents anywhere near them, ever.... Can't wait for the visits to and from the island; once we know for sure... Great job. -
OMG, I so loved this chapter... Monster hunting while dealing with teen angst; just perfect. Not sure what actually could cause more damage between the two. This was just what I needed tonight.
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Well, I doubt anyone reading the story did not already know that Ewelina had been unfaithful and was a total slag. Hate that Maks had to find out about the affair like that, never a good way to do so. But surely even he know there was something off about her. Aleks to the rescue, but Adrian blooded him. At least he got her away from the situation again, but have to wonder why she keeps going back to it. So have they figured out what each really wants? What will they think in the morning?
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You know, sometimes I truly hate people... I hope the cameras worked enough to get some evidence of who did this; although I suspect it was the poor kid's family. Just when things were looking up for him, hope he is going to be okay; for them to call a helicopter in the ribs must have punctured the lungs or some sign of significant internal bleeding.
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Chapter 16- Falling on Purpose
centexhairysub commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 16- Falling on Purpose
So sweet, and glad that the family helped him and stayed with him. I wonder will we ever know why he was taken? Glad that Sepherus and Owin finally overcame their issues. So happy. -
“So…” Pretty Boy said awkwardly, “You, uh. You’re magic too, hu-” Cody cut him off. “W-what the fuck is that thing!?” he asked, gesturing madly at the water monster. Pretty Boy winced. “Well… I mean… Would you believe me if I said it was Bigfoot?" ===================================================================================================================== OMG, i laughed till I honestly though I was going to pee myself....
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Chapter 15- The Walkers
centexhairysub commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 15- The Walkers
Sometimes when someone states the obvious; it gives you a chance to validate your feelings and understand what is going on inside of yourself. What a nice family; too bad that Rhyad and Owin never had something like that... Still want their parents to have an accident while flying over a large volcano... -
Chapter 18: Final Fulfillment
centexhairysub commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 18: Final Fulfillment
The scene with Vincent and Mace were just so hot. Glad that the full mating has been completed. Love the scene at the meeting. Can't wait to see how much the pot has been stirred. Snakes in the grass are a problem to be stomped out indeed. Flowed wonderfully.- 18 comments
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Glad to see that Mitch is going to take on some help; plus Myles obviously needs to get away from his home situation. Fire can be a tricky thing; let's all hope it stays well away from them all...
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Although any area that is rural with land types such as this are in danger from fire; Australia is especially vulnerable to them. Glad to see that the farm has some fire fighting equipment and with the rivers nearby should be able to pull plenty of water if needed.
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Glad that Mitch is looking for help, even if just part time. I wonder what kind of cheese? Some of the best cheese is not refrigerated, but has to be stored often underground or in caves. Chapter flowed wonderfully.
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Well, if it is the right kind of wine and especially cognac; it could be worth a fortune, although five years old isn't that much for wine. You would think that Mitch would be more interested in who put the stuff there and how come no one mentioned it... Some things are not adding up about some of this; I smell a mystery...
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This is starting to look like more than a one man job with the added acreage and all. Making cheese is not particularly labor intensive; but you have to have the right tools and place for it to keep. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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WOW. a lot of information to absorb rather quickly. The lawyer should be put up for failure to perform his job with some professional association. No ethical lawyer would have allowed something like this to occur. Glad the accountant finally got with Mitch to go over things with him. Losing ones family is always hard; even if you are estranged from them....
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Okay, did I miss who the hell Ceros and Astra are from the last two chapters??? Are they elves? Are they wherever the Whale and Charlie went? Hmmm... Cody seems to be too cute and definitely in need of some excitement; but not sure he is really ready for James... What lurks beneath the waters???
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Damn, Thorin turned out to be one catty ass... The overall scene was hot though. Loved all the tourist stuff; really different when you have someone that lives there showing you around; you find places that are so neat that you just never would. Ain't no way in hell that I am climbing a bridge like that....
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Chapter 14- Struck, part 2
centexhairysub commented on Thirdly's story chapter in Chapter 14- Struck, part 2
I swear, stull like this would never happen to Owin, always Rhyad... Well, at least the natives are friendly... LOL.
