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Donovan would be an idiot not to go. I can't believe that he doesn't understand that Shane is flirting with him when he is being an ass; that is just how some guys flirt. It is like when the boy is in elementary school and they pull the hair or throw sand at the person they really like; some men just never outgrow the behavior.
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Mr. Neighbor and his crew
centexhairysub commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Mr. Neighbor and his crew
OMFG, this was just way to funny. The writing in this story is beyond good. It is so hard to do humor and do it well, and this is exceptional... I wonder if we don't know who one of the grandsons was???? -
Let's talk about standards
centexhairysub commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Let's talk about standards
So sad that Donovan is so hung up on first impression; that he can't even see what might be right in front of him... -
Literally laughed till I had to get up and go pee....
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Lord have mercy, taking a cold shower before the next chapter... But not sure how Donovan is going to feel in the morning; this is why you never add to much alcohol when you are this horny.
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I have a feeling that we all know just what is happening to the prospects... I can't believe Shane is trying to manhandle Donovan; are we going to have Bette versus Joan on the dance floor in front of God and everyone???
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A perfect bon mot, Bon Appetit all...
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Loved everything about the game and how easily Donovan goaded them into a bet; and how delish it was when their team won. Really can't say enough about the writing and pacing, it truly is pitch perfect...
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Kill him...with kindness
centexhairysub commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Kill him...with kindness
Another great chapter, funny and bitchy and full of fun; oh wait that is me... HA HA HA... The writing and pacing are great. Can't wait to see what happens next. -
Oh lord, I don't even know what to say; laughed my ass off through this whole chapter...
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So impressed by how much Jack taught the boys and group; makes me sadder that he is gone, as I am sure he would have had more to teach. Loved how the boys handled themselves in getting to the town and how methodical they were about getting in and out of the stores. I hope that discipline holds even though they know the camp maybe under attack. They need to secure the location they are at and then get back safely. So some humans turned and went crazy, some simply survived, and the others turned into a blue crystalline stone? Did some event precede this occurrence? More background would be great. Well written and the pacing is just first rate. Can't wait for the next one.
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Just delicious from start to finish; just needs to marinate a little to be perfect. Love how Rory is camping out in a tree to watch his mate; of course, we have gone over the border into stalker land, but as a were, he really can't help it. Love how the whole Takeda interact with each other; they are all so tactile, common for an Italian family, but not so much for the Japanese side. Can't wait to see what happens next... Keep up the amazing work.
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Just wanted to cry, so we know what happened to Jack; but he gave his life so the kids could survive. He taught them all he could and then showed at least two of them; what might be needed to survive in this new world. Dreams of what was or what might be; either can make you feel empowered or devastated. Writing and pacing was first rate. These zombies remind me more of the ones from 28 days...
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Damn, the ability to shut out his Alpha, that would be very rare and probably not a popular ability to have. This is getting good; can't wait to see where you go with this next. Why do I feel that Rory is going to be Milan's personal guide to high school. A human being the mate of the Alpha in waiting, this is not going to go over well.
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Excellent start; we got to know a little about most of the group by their interactions and how they dealt with this new arrival. The writing and pacing were both good; can't wait to see what happens next. Have to wonder was Jack from the area and came back or did he happen on the kids fleeing the city?
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Chapter 4 - The Dawn of Day
centexhairysub commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Chapter 4 - The Dawn of Day
Well, the other space race is off reptilian nature; this will play into every fear inbred into the humans. Will be a major shock when they meet face to face, so to speak. Of course, the other race would be a bit on the we are stronger so we can take what we want side of things; should make for an interesting first encounter. Still not sure how much I trust the older monks; I am sure they dealt with the reptilian race at some point, so not sure how they will handle the new group. -
Excellent chapter, moved the story along well. I have to wonder about the Shade, what part will she play in this. If Esthor is a were, why did he never show any ability, was it blocked? Can't wait to find out what happens next.
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Chapter 3 - The Dawn of Day
centexhairysub commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Chapter 3 - The Dawn of Day
Well, I don't think he is unconscious, I think he is praying to his God's, the ship or the masters of the ship. I wonder if the other figure is trapped here, maybe their ship was damaged or they landed in an escape pod, but if they have been here for a while, have they not adapted to the atmosphere; or can't they? Good flow and writing, can't wait for the next update. -
Lovely chapter, the writing was excellent and the story just flowed. There is such emotion in this story; the words convey moods and feelings so easily. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Rulf and Esthor met up and yet neither knows enough about the other to know how they are linked. I have to wonder is the Princess really dead or did Esthor place her in a coma like state? Well written chapter and it flowed beautifully. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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Chapter 2 - The Dawn of Day
centexhairysub commented on Dolores Esteban's story chapter in Chapter 2 - The Dawn of Day
A good second chapter; the way forward becomes a little more clear. Did something bring the Earth vessel to this location on purpose, and if so for what? -
Another excellent chapter; but do have to wonder who and why would have set up a bunker with this type of equipment and then seemingly staffed it with 20 individuals all 15 and younger. Writing was really good and this chapter flowed really well. I like the idea of the AI, and have to believe at some point, it will come into play with Alex and his issues with Larry. Does the AI realize that the outside was accessed?
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So there was no one before this family moved to town that was not a werewolf; and the mayor and town council allowed a shady bio-med research company to set up shop and cordon off an area of woods and make it off limit? And yes, they are shady, all bio-med companies are. Sounds like a major mistake, and it could come back to bite several people/werewolves in the ass.
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Excellent chapter; good writing again and this one flowed much better, or so it seemed to me. Chris and Rory are already proving to be very interesting. A few questions answered but a few more popped up. Onward into the great adventure.
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Several dangers of going to school with CVID and being in Colorado in the winter. Good writing but this chapter seemed a little choppy at times. Can't wait to see what happens next.
