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I LOVED this chapter. On some level you truly seem to understand the D/s relationship in a way that so many that write about it don't. You have done an excellent job of conveying so much with a refreshing take on an ago old subject matter.
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I have to admit that I had already come to the conclusion that you introduced here in my head already, at least on most of the points. This explains so much, at least from Gregory Jr.'s point of view. I can promise you that he must truly care about Christopher and trust him deeply on some level to have shown this much of who he truly is. Can't wait to see where this is going.
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Just really sweet.
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It was almost like to two kids playing hide and go seek except the electronic version. Too funny. The letter was sweet and a fond remembrance of times past and a hint of the future maybe.
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Loved this one; I do think it is easier sometimes to communicate via written message rather than verbal. Some people can be dyslexic when it comes to verbal communication yet understand perfectly when something is in written form.
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I have to think that they need each other more than either can admit. I think that Gregory Sr. understood what they both needed more than they did or do. I still would like to know why Gregory Jr. changed his reaction to Christopher from the first and second time he meet him...
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One of these two is going to have to start being the adult in this situation. I think we all know why Gregory Sr. changed his will; have to wonder why neither of these two have been smart enough to figure it out...
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I don't know what else to say about this one but DAMN...
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Delicious in so many ways...
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I think Gregory Jr. has probably been attracted to Christopher for a long time but could not do anything about it because of his father. I have a feeling this is about to get very interesting on more than one level.
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Damn, this is turning into a Golden Age of Hollywood drama with Katharine Hepburn, Bette Davis, or Barbra Stanwyck...
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I don't know why, but the saying pride goeth before a fall, keeps ringing in my ears. And I can bet you any amount of money that both Gregory Sr. and Jr. know just about everything there is to know about Christopher.
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Well, I certainly hope that Christopher has put money back, I doubt a reference is coming. LOL... That was just too delicious. I assume that when the will is read that Gregory Jr. is going to be in for a real surprise.
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I am glad that Chris was honest about all of that; I sort of imagine that Gregory Sr. has already had him checked out and knew most of it already. Most people don't understand how close to a life on the street so many are. A lost job or a huge bill that can't be paid and it can all snowball so quickly.
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I wonder how Basil is going to take this; does he already know? Is he as ready to go as Gregory Sr. is for him to go? Hmm......
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I don't care what anyone says, the clothes can make the man or woman. I don't know if I am dreading the arrival of Gregory Jr. or waiting with baited breathe. Great job.
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Waiting for the doctor and the coroner, or their people, can be very hard on some. I think it is their arrival that often is the first glimpse that this is real, the person is really gone.
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Okay, Gregory Sr. has obviously lost his mind and should be kept away from sharp objects and in a room with soft edges all around. LOL. I do understand the sentiment though; there are times that you can meet someone for the first time and just get a feeling about them; I have found most of the times my gut reaction in those situations have been accurate whether for good or bad. Intriguing story all the way around; can't wait to see where this goes.
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There is a flow to this that most well written stories have; I don't always like them but you can tell when someone actually knows how to write. Plus, this one has so far been a joy to read. The emotions seem real, even if the remembrance seems a little bit Pretty Womanish. Of course, I am a sucker for those kind of stories so...
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Hmm.... have to wonder if Gregory Montgomery Jr. will turn out to be a monster or something else, there seemed to be a hint of something in this chapter. Looking back can be painful even if you are in a good place when you do so; after this loss, hope that Christopher is ready for that...
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I don't know why but this seemed more funny than sad; even though it started with a death. Just ran across this but can't wait to see what you do with this story. Great beginning...
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TC2 - Chapter 2: Meet the Grandparents
centexhairysub commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 2: Meet the Grandparents
Really enjoyed this second chapter; the emotions just seem so real and come out in unexpected places and times but fully understand with this situation. The bit about what his parents bought and got for him when he came out was hilarious. Well written and flowed beautifully; can't wait for the next update. -
TC2 - Chapter 1: Meeting Each Other
centexhairysub commented on Brayon's story chapter in TC2 - Chapter 1: Meeting Each Other
Interesting start to this story; I cannot even imagine the shock that came to both of them with this news that one had a son and the other's dad did not die but was still alive and well in Florida. Can't wait to see where it goes. -
And another turn in this family saga; sort of surprised that the guys have not taken on someone before. I would think his interaction with Dane would be the deciding factor. Good update, can't wait for the next one.
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The Human, the Werewolf, and the Vampire
centexhairysub commented on HinderToyBL's story chapter in The Human, the Werewolf, and the Vampire
Rub a dub dub, three men in a tub....
