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Love how well they all fit together; Phuong just merged with the group seamlessly. I do worry about that many shaman being in such a small geographic area like this one; seems like a rogue action of some sort; not just the others being taken but covering their tracks the way they have. Can't wait to see where you take this one.

Oh how the mighty have fallen... Can't wait for the next update.

Thoroughly enjoyed every aspect of this chapter; can't wait to see where we go next in this little adventure. The pacing and writing were both first rate. Now, how will Diaz screw something up...

I just love Maria; and it is never too early to start putting a bully in his or her place, so I think Maria did just fine. Keep up the great work, can't wait for the serious campaigning, this should be so down and dirty but oh so fun...

Well, I have to wonder what the Goddess Nut is up to; is she really trying to help or is she the young one that we heard at the first of this story??? I can see Viktor stealing in and unraveling part of the Air Stole that Shael is working on each night. Really good chapter, can't wait to see where you go with this.

I am so glad that Elias got a color and it completed the gem. Can't wait for Nolan to fully bond with all the rest. Keep up the great work.

I actually put my comment in with my phone; and did not read any of the previous comments as it is a pain to do so on my phone. I grew up in a small town in Texas and currently live in a large city in Texas, just outside of Austin. I doubt that the announcement would have even raised and eyebrow in Austin, Dallas, Houston, San Antonio, El Paso, or even Ft Worth. Even the mid size cites that populate Texas of say 30,000 to 125,000 would probably not have many law enforcement that would publically react in a negative way; they might say or do something in private but that is another facet that we are not addressing. But understanding from this story is the city and county it takes place in probably is in the 10,000 to 15,000 on the city and the whole county population is probably under 30,000. Texas has a lot of counties that size and that is the area that this announcement would still spark some outrage. Not saying it could not be overcome but the tolerance level would be much lower. Because of my job; I have some interaction with law enforcement and because of relatives had quite a bit growing up in a county smaller than the population I am supposing for this one; it still is many times smaller; the whole population of the county is less than 10,000 for the one I grew up in; while the one I currently live in is more than 500,000. I can promise you that at least half the law enforcement group in the county I grew up in would have walked out even today after that announcement; while I doubt anyone in the county I live in would do so. Attitudes maybe changing, even here in Texas but small towns are still slower to change and accept than larger ones. Now, that being said, there are a number of openly gay people that live in the county that I grew up in that are accepted and have few if any problems living there; but none of them are in an elected position like a Sherriff, and if they were open, they certainly would not be elected.

Very well done; but I do think that in reality in most " small " and " rural " counties in Texas, that you would have had more than two walk out. Some of those might have showed up on Monday with a better attitude but not all would. Can't wait to see where you take this next.

Well glad to find out this will be the last one; and he seems sweet but so battered. Hope we get more of his backstory. I have to wonder why the Librarian just showed up to check on them? He was talking about how busy he was; wonder if when they searched for that tome they were wanting; if an alarm was not triggered that it was being looked for? Can't wait to see where you go with this.

Perfect...

Damn, I wonder if the issue with Khonsu dates back to Anubis doing something to either change his/her gender or split it or something... Why do I feel that the first betrayal is the key to all of this animosity??? I am pretty sure that in ancient Egypt Khonsu was worshipped as a male god of the moon and healing? Will have to do some research.

Oh this maybe the hottest chapter so far; I can't wait to see where and with whom it goes next, although we still have to worry about what happens when others find out. I hope the diary is some help. Lord have mercy, that was just too much, and yet not quite enough...

Oh wow, that was hot on so many levels; I have a feeling that Viktor would have paid any price for a chance to see that again. Viktor comes across in this chapter more lonely and hollow than an ass, maybe he isn't as bad as he seems. Can't wait to see where you take this next; plus who is the next mate going to be???

What an ass, but then a thought occurred to me, could he be the vampire they seek?

So glad that Maribel found her mate, even if he is a human. Can she turn him? Is there a benefit to that? Do the humans know about the vampires and shifters?

I still have serious misgivings about how this is going to play out. I do think the idea of a shifter/vampire mating is hot; but I have to wonder what the ramifications will end up being. I do think that they should have reported it right off, facing something head on, would have been the best way, maybe not the easiest but the best.

Why do I not think this will be a good thing? I know they maybe mates; but I have a feeling that all hell is about to break lose, quite possible literally.

Oh damn, a drunk shifter about to find his mate; I can imagine all the things that could so easily go wrong with this...

Exceedingly hot and so well written; plus the pacing was just spot on. Can't wait to see how the introduction of the next mate will top this one. So glad that Mateo is going to get all of his needs met. Have to wonder if anyone will be more dominate than Pax?

Well, I really like Pax, but Mateo seems cool too. I have to wonder how this will work out. I know in other shifter stories, often an omega is low person on the totem pole; but doesn't seem to be the case here. Can't wait to see how well Mateo meshes with Pax and Elias.

Had someone recommend this story; love how it starts out, can't wait to see where it goes.

Much like Raymond in the story, I could not get past the elocution lessons, just too funny. But you seem to understand what it takes to run a campaign, even in a small rural county in Texas. Gram is annoying but a necessary evil. Can't wait for the coming out party, so to speak. Keep up the great work.

I honestly can't believe that Jake let that a&#%(le brother of his get in his head like that. Jake had talked to Hans, so he knew that Klaus was talking and thinking about him while he was away. I am not sure that Diaz is not running a game on Jake. We will see. Glad to see that Jake is willing to stand his ground even though it looks like he might not enjoy this reunion as much as he could have. Great job, can't wait for the next one.

Truly excellent...

An excellent chapter all around; I especially loved the Mellie and Maria sections best. We don't get enough of either of them; but they are both so funny and kind. The wisdom and humor that comes from both of them defies their ages...