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    Chapter 11

    So glad that Granger was finally able to get through to Cavendish and make him understand where Granger was coming from and what he was trying to do to help Cavendish. They have such a history that it seems maddeningly annoying when they fight. I don't know and have never seen Cavendish as the one great love of Granger's life. I think there will be someone that becomes paramount but not fully sure we have meet that person as of yet. I don't believe even that would cause Granger to cut the others from his life however. Granger truly is an honorable man; and would never knowingly do anything to alter or change what he believes to be true and honorable. The visit with the French merchant Captain was enlightening on more than one level. Hope that Granger takes all that he said into account in his upcoming mission. It is still about six or seven years before Denmark really falls; first their ships to the British and then the country to the French. They were a great power that came out of the Napoleonic era severely damaged and to some extent never fully recovered. Can't wait for the next leg of Granger's adventures in the cold north expanse.
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    Chapter 58

    Loved It... I thought JJ handled the situation with Carullo better than I could have imagined. He kept his cool, at least as far as Carullo could tell; and found out what the situation is. Disappointed that Carullo feels that he can't let himself get that involved again with someone, would think that Joey would have wanted Carullo to be happy. I can understand the fear of letting yourself get that hurt again; but if you aren't willing to risk the hurt, you can't win the love and happiness either. Not sure how long JJ will wait for Carullo to figure it out, but hope he gives him a chance to do so. I can't imagine Wade allowing his family place to be so completely unprotected. Would have thought his father, the Senator, would have had more of a security set-up than they appear to have had. Not often that Wade get's caught with his pants down, literally or figuratively either one. Glad that Jake was able to get a team there as quickly as they did; plus surprised and really happy that the FBI responded as fast as they did. Was actually sort of hoping that some of the family would get involved in their defense; I could actually see JP and Nana viewing the incoming men as clay targets and really going to town on them. Okay, now onto Will and his night. It really is time to say good-bye to Zach. Not saying that ten years down the road after college and a few years in the pro-ball, that they can't meet back up and find there are still sparks, but this is turning Will into much more of a masochist than I ever imagined him being. His first visitor of the night was hot but ultimately forgettable. His second was much more of a surprise. Will MUST tell JJ about this. He can explain the situation and then get ready to grovel but he has to tell him. Eventually, something like this always comes out in the CAP universe and while I think JJ will get over the sex; he might never get over the hiding of it. I can actually understand why Alex needed the sex; and why Will went along with it; there are several layers here and all were masterfully interwoven. A masterful chapter on several levels; can't wait to see what the ripples in the pond are on the next one...
  3. centexhairysub

    Heading Out

    Well, I know a rescue mission isn't funny; but with this group out to find the missing, it just might be. Can't wait to see where you take this after this great start.
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    Chapter 40

    Really enjoyed this chapter as well, I like the ones were we get to see more than one group involved. Maria is just too much, would love to see a story when she is about 14 or 15 years old, it would be a hoot. Few things in life can be as interesting and dirty as a small town or county election in Texas. I am sure that will be very interesting. Keep up the great work, can't wait to see what comes next.
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    Chapter 57

    I would deeply...
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    Chapter 57

    I don't even know where to start so let's start by saying Bravo, Maestro... Just when I think that Elizabeth can't get any more Byzantium in her webs or thinking; she tops herself. I can't imagine why or how she came across this information; but I hope that someone is there protecting the first and only real Countess Granger. Have to wonder who she was on the phone with; but I am sure she knows more than one or two people that could do something like taking someone out. Wade and JP are handling themselves in the way we would all expect, perfectly. The rest, even the Duke and Alex, just seem to be suffering a few stutter steps along the way in figuring this out. This is just getting so good. Can't wait to see where you take this and how you resolve this one, Mark... WOW.
  7. centexhairysub

    Epilogue

    Way to keep everyone waiting for the next book; hope we get to deal with the missing pack members in that one. Wonderful read, and can't wait to see where you take us next.
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    Chapter 15

    I am really starting to wonder if Diaz is going to survive this encounter. Jake is going to end up having to make a choice and that choice may not be something he ever recovers from fully. The tape sent to Klaus was hot, and Klaus handles Jake perfectly, and not in a bad way. Klaus can see something in Jake that he can't even see in himself. Keep up the good work.
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    Chapter 4

    Sitting here bawling and smiling all at the same time...
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    Chapter 3

    Beginning to wonder if Jacob is not the Red dragon imprisoned in a human body; have to say this is not the first time I considered this but getting serious about it now. The ending was very hot...
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    Chapter 2

    There are depths and levels to this story that is evident even from the first couple of chapters. Can't wait to get to the next one.
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    Chapter 1

    Just came across this after a recommendation from someone, a great start, can't wait to see where it goes.
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    Chapter 39

    I actually liked those parts a lot; but then probably because I fully agree with them. Have actually met the man and find I was 100 percent in agreement, and the handshake was very sweaty, had to wipe my hand right afterward. That was a couple of years ago but doubt it has changed.
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    Chapter 39

    Lovely chapter, so glad to get a new one from you. Daniel and Raymond are so self aware. Can't wait for the election and the wedding. Keep up the good work.
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    Chapter 10

    What a perfect treat you have given all us of Bridgemont fans with this Valentine gift. I am always left wanting whenever I finish a new chapter of this remarkable saga; but then I stop and realize another will inevitable follow. For all of Granger's astute insight, I think he completely misread what Cavendish was implying when he said that John Ward had allowed him to stay with him. I think on some level Granger can not be impassionate about Cavendish and that all ways colors his reaction to Cavendish in some shade of green. I hope that Granger and Cavendish are able to resolve this issue before a fissure grows between them that will make it too difficult to do so. Lt. Grenfell got to experience both sides of Granger in a very short time. I hope this is someone that Granger allows to grow and experiment in a way that helps both of them in the end. I could see a time in the future that the improvement with the shots could prove more than useful. Granger handled Daventry and Whitworth with aplomb and just the right amount of bite. Can't wait for this adventure to get started... Well done, Mark.
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    Chapter 56

    Honestly, I don't even know where to start; so let's start with the easiest. I think that JJ will find that he is truly happy with his life now versus when he was competing in skating at the highest level. Yes, he enjoyed the glory, but I am not sure anything was worth the code of conduct that he had to live under at least for him. The fact that he was on such an even keel when Carullo returned, kept Carullo calm and hopefully will lead to an honest conversation between the two of them. Will handled himself perfectly under the circumstances. He was able to do what maybe no one else present at the meeting would have been able to do; and that is bring everyone into the present and get them past the issues of the last year or so. Everyone will have to be unified and supporting of each other in order to face what is going on right now; and the past would have been an impediment to that, it should not be now. Could there still be ramifications from it yes; but nothing will stop an united front while facing the present issues. Sort of surprised that Wade does not have more security on a regular basis at Goodwell when all of them are in residence. Jake is right this would be a perfect place to strike them and get rid of the Duke and Alex but also do damage to JP, Stef, et al; for their allies in Mexico. I am sure that JP, the Duke, Alex, Wade, Mary Ellen, Nana, and probably Darius will turn out to be better than fair shots. Unsure of the rest; but with something like a shotgun you don't have to be a great shot; just have the nerve to use it and let the person get close enough. I guess I am just not vicious enough of a person; but I could never see killing one child to help another one out; of course if Lord Preston is that cowed of his wife, she maybe able to force him into anything. Magnificent chapter, Mark; can't wait to see where you take us next with this wonderful story...
  17. Such a wonderful chapter and a delight for this Valentine Day; I am so glad that Mama Brig will soon have another little one. Kao and Dean will be great Betas and make the pack stronger. I loved their visit with Jessup and Brig. Can't wait to start on the issue of the missing pack members. Keep up the great work.
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    Chapter 55

    Another interesting chapter with so much going on, but you keep it moving in a way that allows it to flow naturally and seamlessly. I feel each chapter seems to bring some new insight not just into what is going on with the current situation but with those that we have known and loved for so long. I do think Brad wants to trust Jake. Should he, I am not sure that we have enough information to make that decision yet, and I know he doesn't. You can tell that there is more to Brad's interest in him than just getting him in bed. He seems to have a connection with Jake that isn't easily definable. I do believe that Jake is being honest about what is going on with Lord Preston, at least in that he is giving them the information that he has on the current situation. I just am not sure that Jake has all the information yet, and I know we don't. I think they are getting closer though; I think the key is who is Lord Preston's wife. I think she is the Black Widow. I feel that she has some connection to the past, perhaps Robbie's sister that disappeared or her daughter??? I am going back and re-reading the older stories to see what I can find. I can't wait for the meeting at Goodwell, there is so much to cover and so many different angles to explore. Glad that JJ is staying in New York to deal with Carullo. I do think Will is right, he can't chase Carullo but he has to find out what his real issue is, and they may not be very easy. JJ has to figure out what he really wants from Carullo; an encounter, a friends with benefits, a relationship, or something more... I am sorry, Stef's reasoning about Zach not calling just does not fly. This soon after 9/11, you could not be involved in anything and not be aware of the anniversary. It just was not possible on any level. Zach is just more self absorbed than Will or anyone else is willing to admit at this point. Can he grow out of it, who knows at this point but Will needs to put some space between them so he can view the situation with more clarity. Darius found a cougar before anyone knew what it was... LOL. JP and Stef are not competitors, I don't think they ever viewed their relationship like that; but I still don't think they are on an even keel. Even with Stef's enormous wealth, JP is still the one that calls the shots on anything truly important. They are more equal now than in the past but still not quite on the same level. The gathering of the families at Goodwell will be so interesting on so many levels. I can't wait for the fun to begin... Bravo, Mark...
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    Chapter 14

    AWESOME!!!!!
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    DSJ Chapter 17

    Well, I was frankly expecting more of an uproar from the Earth group, but I guess since everything that was suggested really was a benefit in some way; they could not find much to grip about. Another good chapter, I keep expecting the worse from the Earth group, maybe I am being to bitchy but we will see...
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    DSJ Chapter 16

    Enjoyed the chapter and update; did we find out who caused the death of the Emperor and the injury to the new Emperor? They keep helping the Earth groups in subtle ways; but I worry about someone trying to take advantage and causing problem. Keep up the good work.
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    DSJ Chapter 15

    Good chapter, although I wish it was a little longer. I was expecting to get a little more information on the situation on Sahndrol with the regent and the investigation. Glad to see that the individuals in the Space agencies seem to want to coordinate; although have to wonder how effective the no interference from political forces will prove to be. Keep up the good work.
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    Chapter 54

    Stef's plan to get the government to take the land as part of the tax burden is truly brilliant. Not sure why JP feels that the Duke, Alex, or by extension Lord Preston is owed anything; just really don't get his reasoning. Joaquin would seem like someone they have more of a connection with; after all, he did save Stef twice and the family fostered his son, Alejandro for years. I am not saying they should be actively involved; but between the two sides the longer and deeper connections would appear to be with the Rubio Cartel. Will giving Stef so much adulation for his and Darius's actions was smart, and even true in several ways. I am sorry, Darius annoys me so much the last couple of stories. Isn't it time for him to disappear into the military yet? Can't wait for the meeting at Goodwell. Keep up the great work, Mark.
  24. Truly lovely, sitting here bawling like a baby; but I really did love the story. Well written and the pacing was first rate, truly evocative.
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    Chapter 13

    Jake may have been drunk, but I think he meant every word he said; both the I love you and the I am going to fuck you... This was a real delight. Can't wait to see what is next...
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