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A new adventure for all of those concerned; surprised that they were able to push something through that quickly even with good lawyers, usually when dealing with a child of the First Nation, you have more hoops to jump through... I was wondering when the guys were going to think about Cass. I am sure he will not have any objection, but it was funny they never considered him in dealing with this. I love Tim Hortons, they are wonderful.

So enjoyed this chapter; I am so glad to be in Chicago. I have to admit that I agree that Chicago style pizza is more of casserole dish rather than a pizza; I know this may start an argument but I prefer the traditional idea of pizza; good dough, a little sauce, and cheese... I thought the beginning of the chapter was just perfect; so well written and the pacing was just spot on. The writing just felt so true. I can't say that the end was a surprise; there was enough hints that Bradley may have been gay along the way. Can't wait to see what is next...

I think Kandric is going to be more than slightly pissed that this Frexla grabbed his brothers; the bitch may have just bitten off more than she can chew. Once again, I really can't get into Glaster, but I like much of those that are with him. I still worry about Connor, which way will he turn in the end.

Don't know how I got the quote box up; but can't get it to go away. I just can't get into Glaster, there is something about him that repulses me on some level. I did love the battle and how the others handled themselves. This seems to be getting better and better.

Damn, Gambra is just worse than I ever even thought she could be. I can't imagine how hard it will be to win a fight with her.

So what the Garm and Alphar have been hunting for over the last thousand or so years was just found and by a child? LOL, this just keeps getting better and better...

Another good chapter; the writing and pacing just keep getting better and better. Everything about this story just draws you into it.

Well, Kandric does not seem to have the need for any trappings of royalty. I wonder if that will be allowed to continue???

Kick ass chapter; Kandric just made himself a huge target. Not just one Great Dragon but two and different races on top of that...

This is huge; a death like this suffered by the greens will reverberate not just through that group but so many others...

I have to wonder who all will be lost in this battle for this mountain. Bloody Rock may well earn it's name before this is over with.

So many different roads being traveled but they all seem to have one destination... Klent and Jory are now proving to be more interesting by the moment.

Aster is starting to get answers to questions that he never even knew existed. I have to wonder how many others will figure out what he, Kandric, and Connor really are.

I have really grown to love the part of the story with Aster and Pocet. They seem to fit together almost better than any of the others, even those that care for Kandric. I can imagine that Pocet would not be happy to leave Aster's side; but to advance to the next level, he may have to do so...

I really enjoyed this chapter. Monarch proved to be a revelation. I was impressed with how he dealt with Kandric and Vondum. I think this will be the start of a really interesting chain of events.

Once again, even new forces and events are pushing all of them toward one location; have to wonder how big this battle is going to end up being.

Really, I think every chapter should be required to either have a JJ or JP input in some form or fashion... I really like the meeting with Mary Ellen and Wade with Elizabeth; the way Mary Ellen just bypassed everything was hilarious. I can't wait for the meeting at Goodwell. I do think that Wade will have to work to stay ahead of Elizabeth and Mary Ellen, they are something on their own, but together, dammit... I can't wait to see what will happen when you throw JP, Stef, Brad, Will, Matt, etc., in the mix. Glad to see to see that Brad was able to get out Scott/Lark; and while I don't really trust Alexandra, I don't think she would be willing to go toe to toe with Brad and family to strike at him more than she has. I said earlier and someone else did as well about Buzz's widow, the third wife, and her possible ties to Joaquin. I have gone back through all the stories in the past couple of weeks; the only female that I can find missing that just seemed to disappear was Robbie's older sister that ran off and was strung out on drugs, but how she would have gotten herself connected to the De Beers family would be a reach. Can't wait for the next update, so good Mark...

Great chapter, the fight scenes are particularly well written. I wish there was some way to differentiate between the groups when you switch from one to the other.

I just can't get into Glaster or that part of the story; it isn't that it is written or developed less or worse, he just annoys me for some reason that I can't put my finger on...

This just keeps getting better and better. I really think the writing has improved, although it was good from the start. The pacing and plotting has been very even, except for the one chapter I noted earlier. Can't wait to see what is next...

Great battle scene, especially the one with Kandric. So pleased that his brother was able to pull him back from going after Emroc, but you know that there will be issues ahead, as there should be.

There are so many levels to this story, not just the different story lines that are running toward a meeting it seems; but the fact that no one is quite who they appear to be...

Kandric is a born teacher, he takes every chance to teach and help even the slave to learn something that will help himself...

For all of his growing powers, Kandric has a center of good that just seems to pour out of him. I think it will stand him in good stead as the story progresses. I loved his interaction on the spirit realm, making a friend of the spirit rather than just accepting the favors was a stroke of genius...

This gave some idea what is going on as an overview but I had a little trouble staying into it. It seemed a little choppy, like it was written really fast and not edited as well.