When I came to "The End" I thought 'but what about the play' until I scrolled down to the Epilogue!
It's a good story on its own, but a sequel would be nice.
Down under it's already tomorrow, but here in the heartland of the North American Continent, it's still May 15th! I hope it was a joyous one!
Happy Birthday Graeme!
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Many, many more!
Anger issues in an intense guy like CJ can be fairly intimidating and your description does it justice as did the reactions provoked. The dads did the right thing and got a third party involved that CJ likes and Dragon offered just the right understanding and guidance for CJ to start to see the light. Sometimes we expect smart guys to always be able to figure things out, but an outside perspective is often needed and your chapter cleverly put it together.
Finding out if the Israeli evidence is fake is just as important as finding out about Lord Preston. Wade is a conundrum, he has no love and tenuous loyalty to his mother and perhaps his sister, but Nana is a different story.... I disagree with Jack, Will isn't 25, I peg him at 30! More please.
Bernardo's readiness to use drugs to score sex shows how insecure he is in his own sexiness and perhaps reveals more about his questionable moral standards.....
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading both my stories and commenting. When I posted this story, all the chapters were put up within a month. As my first effort, I tried to write sympathetic characters that people could connect with.
Sean is one of my favorite characters too and is actually an amalgamation of a couple of real characters I know---neither of whom is gay, but should be.