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Daddydavek

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  1. Daddydavek

    Chapter 12

    A lot going on with more to come. Hopefully things settle down a bit.
  2. bag lunch
  3. ...and back to me!
  4. SPUNK Steve practically utilized Nick's knickers TOWIP(e up)
  5. Daddydavek

    Chapter 6

    A good massage is hard to beat....
  6. Daddydavek

    No I But Me

    Don't put it off too long, it's always easier to maintain momentum while a story is fresh! Trust me this is so true from my experience...
  7. Daddydavek

    Chapter 11

    As I have no recollection of the other story, I am enjoying reading this as a complete outsider trying to catch the glimpses of the back story as this one plays out. Well done!
  8. Daddydavek

    No I But Me

    Well done. You could run with this and turn it into a novelette as it seems there are endless possibilities for a several more chapters....
  9. Daddydavek

    Chapter 6

    I've lost track but I think Billy's tribe is up to four boys...that's a handful.
  10. Daddydavek

    Chapter 5

    A sad commentary showing violence is everywhere, even in paradise.
  11. Daddydavek

    Chapter 5

    An arranged encounter. Hope Rita's plan comes to fruition.
  12. The term does seem to have a certain stink to it...
  13. Daddydavek

    Chapter 10

    Teej is still fragile over losing his dad and everything that happens seems to be magnified. I too wonder about him passing out and if he has some underlying medical condition.....
  14. Daddydavek

    Chapter 9

    "Holy Crap" Well all the good guesses are already taken, but I'll go one further...its a picture of TJ and CJ naked in a bathtub as babies!
  15. Mike's education continues...
  16. Daddydavek

    Chapter 4

    If Carlos gets along half as well with Tony and Anthony as he does with Rita, everything will be fine!
  17. ...and back to DDK!
  18. Daddydavek

    Chapter 1

    Showing they were both prepared indicates they really were up for more than eye contact....
  19. Daddydavek

    Chapter 3

    Carlo seems to have just made a friend who can insure he earns enough for his college expenses...
  20. Daddydavek

    Chapter 4

    Dinner went well...and I wonder about the figure standing just off the pier?
  21. Daddydavek

    Chapter 3

    I'd say Akela has his own agenda. Billy doesn't know resistance is futile. The chest full of gold could be problem too.
  22. Not true! https://www.mystore411.com/store/listing/123/Canada/Cold-Stone-Creamery-store-locations
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