Daddydavek

A sweet chapter about young lovers without being too saccharine or too explicit. Well done.

Nice hook-up! Now on to Ch. 3.

Just decided to check out your story and glad I did. Now on to chapter 2!

Happy 21st Birthday! & Enjoy the car!

She is a he, but who is 'her' intended? And will the crew leave Rho 59 alive?

Happy Birthday Graeme! & Many, many more!

20990There Can Be Only One! Happy Birthday Mark! You are the main reason many of us frequent this site! May you enjoy many, many more years here! 20990 There Can Be Only One!

Happy Birthday Thorn!

Another cliff-hanger!

JJ got dumped on by ME at the start of the chapter and then tore his ACL at the end. In between it seems like Alex's dad and Wade' s mom are dreaming up ways to make life miserable for everyone. Brad is still obtuse and Will reliably pushed his buttons. Zach's turn for tumble next?

Life can be cruel. How we react to the occasion molds us into the people we are. While nothing can replace your sister, remember to treasure her memory and all the little things she meant to you. As for as your thoughtless relatives, try to have some compassion. Everyone reacts differently to unexpected death and while they may have been inappropriate, they could be hurting inside and trying to hide it or just wanted to distract themselves. Good luck on your return to work. Hopefully, you will be able to concentrate and the routine of work will be somewhat reassuring for you. My thoughts and prayers remain with you in this time.

Le'Ton has an idea, but will they actually learn anything useful? Still to many things that can go wrong.... More please!

I read the whole chapter with trepidation and it ended horribly, fully justifying my fears. Life sometimes sucks but this was the whole enchilada in one chapter. And no I couldn't bring myself to "like" it. More soon, and hopefully things turn around and get better then.

Happy Birthday! & Many, many more!

JJ wins and lost his coach...ouch! Tiffany decides being mama is her first priority and with a third child on the way, it does seem inevitable. Alex is there but nothing more is revealed, except his disreputable parents showed up for the wedding. I suspect the reception will be more entertaining than the ceremony. More please!

Happy Birthday Sasha! & Many, many more!

Happy Big 4-0 Comsie! & Many, many more!

The crew and passengers both seem uncomfortable and I don't blame them... I hope stealth and the ability to shoot helps. Things could get exciting! More please!

Great job! More please!

TimothyM is probably right that Alex will not have much interest in the day to day upbringing of his infant child. However, I also never expected Alex and JJ to be a forever thing so I do expect there will be some falling out eventually and probably because JJ finds someone more interesting who isn't encumbered by being married to Mary Ellen.... Brad has lead a pretty chaotic life so far and I'm beginning to wonder as he is now about forty if he isn't ready to settle down with someone and Marc seems to be a pretty good choice. I never gave Marc much chance when he was first introduced into the story. His insight into the family and their personalities at an artistic level seems almost prescient and if he can use that ability to maintain Brad's interest, it seems like a win-win situation. My thoughts on Will are still ready for almost anything. While he and Zach are fixated on each other and finishing out highschool together, they are still in highschool and the likelihood that they will maintain a forever relationship as mates is a mountain they still have to climb and conquer. Wade and Matt are another story. Wade has his definite goals in life and sees Matt besides him. Matt sees himself besides Wade, but what is going to do with his life? All in all, Arbour has a lot of ways the story can go and I really wonder where it heads after the Streak is finished?

Christmas at Escorial is so much more fun! Mary Ellen's plan to ditch JJ are now clear. The implementation could be interesting. Marc is not only an artist, but also has some very clear perceptions regarding his lover's family. Another great chapter! More please!

And it appears to about to get interesting.... More please!

Happy Birthday Carlos! & Many, many more!

Happy Birthday! And, I loved the present!

It appears Will is on a streak too. Of course the chapel scene got to me as I remembered the memorial.... Another home run!