Daddydavek
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I tried to make the dorm setting as realistic as possible with characters who seem real. I hope I accomplished that. Again, thanks I do appreciate that you are reading and reviewing my story.
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Going away to college is an important step in anyone's life and for Dean it may be an escape from all the intrigue.... Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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A professional who was almost caught. That may make him even more determined and dangerous.... Thanks for reading and reviewing. This was the first story I thought was good enough to put on the site .
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Everyone is suspicious and under suspicion, that is what something like this does to a neighborhood.
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I don't think anyone in Dean's family or circle of friends was happy, but it was better than doing nothing.
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Danger is stalking Dean and he and his mom are right to be worried. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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Danger is stalking Dean and he and his mom are right to be worried. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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Thanks for your kind words and review.
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Good moms are unbeatable assets for anyone! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review.
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Indiana University (IU), Bloomington, IN
Daddydavek commented on Daddydavek's story chapter in Indiana University (IU), Bloomington, IN
College life ended for me almost 45 years ago, so I had to do some research...Things have changed I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thanks for reading and reviewing. -
Black Widow (Story Discussion)
Daddydavek replied to Mark Arbour's topic in Mark Arbour Fan Club's Topics
Elizabeth did not do so well against Brad in the past and I'm sure she would love to help ME deal with JJ. However, I suspect that eventually JJ will decide to quit deferring to Alex for handling the matter and when ME makes another threat, he may just call in some help to resolve matters himself. Either Will or Brad would be glad to assist, I'm sure...However, Mark is usually pretty devious and hasn't tipped his hand just yet. I'm sure he likes seeing us squirm.......Just sayin! -
John III is a central figure in the ongoing story. I'm glad you like him, Dean certainly does.....
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His embarrassment of 'riches' is more the problem than anything else. The murder next door certainly marked a change in his life. Thanks for reading and reviewing.
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Small town Indiana still has many of those neighborhood traits that were more common years ago. Thanks for reading and sharing.
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The intrigue gets more interesting.....I promise.
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Thanks for your kind words. I hope the story continues to keep your interest and surprises you a bit too.
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Headstall's point about Elizabeth is well made and worrisome. ME is a determined player and mommy is coming to 'help' her. JJ and Alex could be in for more than they can imagine. Will has some serious plans and hopefully he will not get burned. More please!
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What a good sport with some awesome moves too!
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Why do I sense more intrigue as the chapter ended? Great job and I for one, don't mind longer chapters.
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Happy Birthday, Billy Martin! A.k.a. Billy The Brat
Daddydavek replied to Bill W's topic in The Lounge
Happy Birthday Billie! -
Happy Birthday Tucker! & Many, many more!
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Everything was proceeding about as expected and then wham! Along came New Years and Barry reconnecting with his kids....that I did not expect. Once it happened, I was not surprised that the kids had not done so well. Losing both parents, their home and their former lives all in short time was way to much for them or anyone to deal with. So it's a great story, but the kids are now involved in the secret and still probably on the radar for at some element of the mob. So yeah, I can see where there could easily be a second book in the saga! Thanks for sharing!
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Well at least you didn't set him on fire.....
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The shy angst is readily apparent. Poor Andrew, in a class called debate and didn't realize he'd have to get up in front of the class until his teacher spelled it out. Interesting start, but kind of short if you are going to cover your high school years in only three more chapters.
