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    Chapter 22

    Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 22

    "This is just a transitional chapter, but hopefully it's a fix for you all!" Worked well for me! Thanks, I really enjoyed it!
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    Chapter 6

    Daddydavek commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 6

    Like our poor battered hero, I was surprised that Benny wasn't dead. Nice chapter!
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    The transition into the new school is in progress. I just wonder if the preppy little kid who called Will a Neanderthal gets a recurring role? I kind of thought he was cool and maybe a potential good friend for JJ. As for Ryan, I think we will see more of him and his companion.
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    The ending with Morgan in Chase's room was just too delicious. But I am at a loss, the judge asked the kids in to let them decide and neither Coop nor his lawyer learned anything that day? Further Coop (whose contract with the U was negotiated by Kyle) was told to can the book or resign and he didn't advise his lawyer? Cooper is not only a stream of conscious bundle of conflicted emotions, he is supposed to be smart and so far the story has depicted him as loser. Bad things happen to people with their head up their asses and I'm having a hard time generating any sympathy for Coop.
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    Chapter 41

    Daddydavek commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 41

    Great! The Cards win the NLCS and the next good thing is a new PMS Chapter. I am in Baseball Heaven!
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    It definitely makes sense to follow your heart before you have personal commitments and responsibilities. I think Andy's advice is spot on! Everybody accumulates regrets. Minimizing them is the goal.
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    I keep hoping for at least a Granger update.....
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    On occasion I like to read about someone gobbling a pecker but I've never considered those terms in this context. Most well written stories I just breeze through unless the prose sings to me. Then I have a tendency to read and re-read, usually trying to envision hearing James Earl Jones reading it aloud. It doesn't happen often. Jamie, writer of the Scrolls of Icaria has done it on ocassion. Poorly written stories get a once through usually, unless they are really pointless, and then I abandon them and move on.
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    Chapter 1

    Daddydavek commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Sucked me into another story about that damn cat! You are so bad that you are good. And yes I did get a laugh out the line about Rover and Felix.
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    Mark Arbour's forum but I also read and post all over as the thought strikes me. Lots of good hosted and promising authors here!
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    I think it's much ado about nothing, or at most, very little.
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    Well you stayed true to the story! And I like happy endings!
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    Chapter 1

    Daddydavek commented on Kiltie69's story chapter in Chapter 1

    I like a good story about regular sorts with a happy ending. Check, Check, Check! Thoroughly enjoyed it!
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    I liked the flow and way you spun the title into the narrative.
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    Chapter 10

    Daddydavek commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 10

    KC, one word describes this story! HOT! Shade's double transformations. Shade's appetite for sex. HOT!
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    Chapter 16

    Daddydavek commented on Nephylim's story chapter in Chapter 16

    I could almost feel the deep, body rumbling purrrrrrrrrrrrrr!
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    Chapter 5

    Daddydavek commented on Cia's story chapter in Chapter 5

    I'd hate to be the character that called Ellis human scum when Dar comes back.
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    Some sections are slow? Glaciers move faster. Too many goat references. His profile doesn't list his birthday, but he must be a Capricorn. Today's Horoscope for Capricorn the Goat The 10th Sign of the Zodiac October 11, 2011 Your loved one will bring you a piece of news which could change your schedule.
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    Lone the Were waits in bed wearing a granny gown? I hope not. Please let it be way more sexy than that!
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    Poor Coop. Poor Chase. Poor Kyle. Poor CJ. Poor Lisa. Poor Mike. Sounds like a real pity party. Whatever can go wrong has, or seems about to. Guess life is not a see-saw, just a downhill stumble...
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    Bull Dust

    Daddydavek commented on C James's story chapter in Bull Dust

    95 Chapters, with 95% bull dust with only a few bits of any insight provided....As the author blithely ignores his fans desire to know and instead, just provides enough to titillate.
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    Red

    Daddydavek commented on comicfan's story in Fiction

    Well Nock did as expected and talked to the big, bad, wolf. Just for fun, one of my favorite off-beat songs from 1966 was by Sam the Sham and the Pharoahs' L'il Red Riding Hood.
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    That would only make sense if you were reading it in the northern hemisphere on a pre-PC Wang dumb terminal. And yeah, I am old enough to have actually used one. (Wang terminals were dedicated and very early word processing systems used only in large companies or the government from the mid-1970's.)
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    Ahh! But you have the advantage there, we lowly fans have to wait for it to be actually posted!
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    For those of us unfamiliar with Aussie slang, I looked the following up: bull dust   noun Australian Slang . nonsense; bull.
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