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Daddydavek

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  1. Daddydavek

    Chapter 32

    I thought that was the driveway in Malibu.
  2. Daddydavek

    Chapter 32

    Blocking the car seems to be Will's go to solution to stopping flight syndrome... Brad and Will always find relief riding the waves. Loved the chapter. Travel safe!
  3. I agree: Well Done Carlos! Late to the party and @tabaqui laid out all the points I would have made! Congrats on another successful foray into your well conceived CJverse.
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    The Inevitable

    They are college kids and the ending scene confirmed it. The seduction of M.D. was complete and of course doomed Jonathan into realizing he is in love!
  5. This chapter was well told. It took us in with things going normally and then exploded while Northmann was plodding through his meeting. The planning and waiting until dark was nerve wracking. The final encounter was bound to be screwed up, plans usually are. And it was so like you Carlos to end with a cliff hangar on your longest running cliffie. Of course I'll be checking back frequently, impatiently waiting for the next chapter!
  6. I can think of at least 5, but why not start with one whose last name begins with A......or T.
  7. So we have two gay boys curled up under a blanket exchanging histories.....And mom calls. Alright already, I'm waiting for the next chapter!
  8. Daddydavek

    Chapter 60

    I will try to put some meat on your bones. What a great line coming from George to his fanboy!
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    Chapter 31

    Jake and Brad are exposed as losers and are uncomfortable and humiliated into being civil and thoughtful. I still wonder what or whom is behind the effort to get Jake back in service and why. In the meantime, I look forward to Will and a weekend of parties...
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    Bottoms Up!

    So close! Ouch!
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    CDMX • XXXV

    Now that was a thirtieth birthday to remember. Made extra special sharing wth friends, talented friends! The dads were shown to be enjoying a birthday as well and Cap is at home in the casino. Great chapter, I just hope Chipper holds off buying the drums.
  12. The birthday party was special. The safe was not. The Chinese spy was a bit intimidating. CJ's analytical ability is outstanding. Ozzie's reaction to the spy story was husbandly. Carlos you done good!
  13. Late to the party and most comments covered everything I could say, except the Mets vs Cardinals score...The Mets really are freaking amazing this year and any runs scored against them takes scrappy hard work.
  14. I hope Jonathan likes being versatile, otherwise Mad Dog is going to ruin his ass. Maddox however could decide to be a total bottom once he gets his prostate poked. In any case they are definitely in the more is better stage.
  15. Daddydavek

    Chapter 30

    In hindsight it does look like Jake was manipulated. Now I'm wondering how the master story teller untangles the web and what deceit is revealed.
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    Chapter 29

    ROLFMAO!
  17. With the gerrymandering following the 2020 census, and the glowing endorsement of "45" I think we can assume the above is prescient. However, the reversal of Roe may complicate things a bit....
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    Chapter 29

    It took a bit, but Will figured out that dad was having man problems and where he'd go. The ice bucket dumped on Brad had to be a real shock, however it seems to have worked. Another great chapter, but as usual I'm impatient for the next one!
  19. I think J & M are there. The deal for a month is off and they are actually talking and listening to each other. I'm loving it!
  20. CJ is a natural, even with the press, and shows it by his interactions with everyone. It's obvious why a jealous, small minded guy like Northmann has animosity. With Owen and their daughter, Carlos has created something very special. And now I have to wait another week for another miniscule dose!
  21. I can relate to having write down a name cheat sheet and a timeline with birthdates and a story outline chapter by chapter... Great questions and answers!
  22. Daddydavek

    CDMX • XXXI

    Ok so the Steve is not just petty, but beyond dense?
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    Chapter 28

    Brad has man problems. His inner bitch always manifests at such times. I still think Will transfers to another school. Steff got into Google and will get into FB. Interesting chapter!
  24. Poor Jonathan is so worried about what the masses think, rather than the people he cares about.
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