Daddydavek
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Arbour characters usually have depth and are not one dimensional. This chapter reveals more about some who may have come across as stereotypes earlier...
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Another great memory...but I noticed the title of the next chapter and it has me a bit apprehensive.
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OK, I get that Harlan has it bad, but making breakfast for Bailey? That I didn't expect and of course it worked... Rayne and Elias at too cute and Huck has sure come a long way! Well done!
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...and the good feelings persist. Now I'm getting nervous as I suspect our author plans a little more drama.
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It's great to see that things can work out and some small measure of happiness can brighten so many lives.
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DA Ch 43 - Animals Big and Small
Daddydavek commented on quokka's story chapter in DA Ch 43 - Animals Big and Small
Jex keeps thinking up more ways to spend money...no mention of how much is coming in or whether the cash flow is sufficient to support all these ventures. He makes one mention of his solitary life, but we still have no clue and from all appearances he is asexual. -
Another entertaining chapter with a sexy hot tub ending. Loved it!
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Sensational! And, with all the touchy-feely connotations explicitly implied!
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Harlan is making progress and perhaps that preacher will learn a lesson....
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Rayne's dad is a fool for listening to that homophobic idiot. Harlan really has it bad....
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This newly bitten kid is going to present a challenge for Jimmy.
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DA Ch 41 - Final Semester & Holidays
Daddydavek commented on quokka's story chapter in DA Ch 41 - Final Semester & Holidays
Does the letter mean he is now a vet? -
Poisonous snakes and spiders are endemic to Australia...and even experienced people can be taken unawares. Fortunately, spider bites do not result in death with only one reported in the last forty years that I could find. https://www.telegraph.co.uk/news/2016/04/12/young-man-dies-after-spider-bite-during-australian-bushwalk/
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Now Jex is enlisting the Yanks to transport materials for the out camp!
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Well Harlan f....ed up big time. I expect he will try to fix it in his own way.
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I figured that Bailey was mute and now it is clear why. He risked a lot to save Rayne and thankfully it worked out. Harlan has a hardon for Bailey and I think it's probably the first time in his life that anyone has got to him like that...
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I wanted to let this story get a head start so I could enjoy reading several chapters without having to wait. I am not disappointed as I enjoyed the first chapter and will see what else is revealed in the next!
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Omniscient - Word of the Day - Fri Jun 12, 2020
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
Many small children know their mother is omniscient. Alas, it doesn't last. -
DA Ch 38 - Yankies are Coming
Daddydavek commented on quokka's story chapter in DA Ch 38 - Yankies are Coming
It seems Jex and his family have a lot of resources. -
It seems the trip to the left coast brought out the boy in both C & B!
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It seems that Will and JJ haven't lost their libido. It was a fun read! Glad to see Arbour is back!
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Sounds like some mining interests are a bit grabby...
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Well done!
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Fergus is complicated and full of plans. I wonder if they will soon include Sawyer?
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DA Ch 34 - Back to Civilisation
Daddydavek commented on quokka's story chapter in DA Ch 34 - Back to Civilisation
Dad is always on time. I hope nothing is amiss..
