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Daddydavek

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  1. Still not sure how this really fits in with Jexon's plans other than helping with his course work....
  2. Q reposted the correct prior chapter, so read the new Chapter 28 and this one will make sense....
  3. My resistance to spending time on GA is an exercise in futility.
  4. Daddydavek

    Miles

    On yeah, the elite of The Elite are back! Great chapter!
  5. The updated chapter 28 now makes sense! Thank-you!
  6. Daddydavek

    Chapter 30

    Well Granger has to deal with more frustration...you think he'd be used to it!
  7. Well at least Brad and Will are getting some.
  8. Daddydavek

    Departure

    Enjoyed it, but it left me wanting some more...Maybe in another antho entry in the future???
  9. Daddydavek

    Delivery

    Now that was a surprise!
  10. Daddydavek

    Decision

    The fight was exciting and the decision to spare the challenger's life interesting.
  11. Daddydavek

    Danger

    Now this is something entirely different. Bravo!
  12. Daddydavek

    DA Ch 27 - Newman

    Thanks for the new chapter. If I could have one wish, it is for chapters twice as long.
  13. Great question and interesting answers. In my own experience, I can overlook a lot if the story has a good plot or really interesting characters. There are a lot of stories that I start and never finish as I lose interest due to poor writing, cardboard characters or a plot that is so thin you can literally see through it.
  14. Daddydavek

    Chapter 3

    Hmmm.
  15. Marcus seems ready, willing and able to join Jex's practice after the graduation. In the meantime Jex is checking out the offer he received, perhaps to get an idea of pay and benefits to offer??
  16. Well shoot, now I'm caught up! Which means I find the story compelling and raced through the first twenty-five chapters!
  17. As if life wasn't exciting already....
  18. I guess the visitors couldn't read the sign!
  19. It seems Jex's folks are investing a lot of money...is it just to keep the mining operation out or do they plan to turn it into a tourist and museum site?
  20. I waited a bit to get started and I'm glad I've got about 24 chapters to go before I get caught up!
  21. ...and we all know that pretentious comes from French and Latin and is not exactly good native English. https://www.etymonline.com/search?q=pretentious
  22. As usual loved it, even if it did come in under 5k... Also glad to see the dads interact and getting it on!
  23. Daddydavek

    That Summer

    See, I said that Jett would be ok with finding out. Of course that was before the last chapter when April was kidnapped....
  24. Oh what a tangled web Mr. Arbour weaves.. Enemies to frenemies?
  25. Daddydavek

    Chapter 29

    I loved it as usual...and laughed out loud at Granger's use of the infamous Lady ELGIN and it having the desired effect!
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