Daddydavek
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Sorry I was late to get to this, but I truly enjoyed it and hope the news about portals provides some clue as to how to proceed for our college students!
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Nice job! It does make sense for Brad to live at CJ's place while they are in Mexico, but I get the feeling Brad gets tired of being manipulated....
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Billet-doux - Word of the Day - Thu May 7, 2020
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
....love notes scribbled quickly, usually short and flowery passed surreptitiously, is the definition in my mind. -
I'd have to agree with Myr that Dalen Ashkevron was immensely interesting and the fantasy world that dkstories created was amazing. But for a more historical fictional figure, I would pick George Granger in Mark Arbour's Bridgemont series. For a contemporary figure I would love to meet Carlos Hazday's CJ and get his take on current events!
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Collywobbles - Word of the Day - Wed May 6, 2020
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
It's a new one on me. -
Best chapter yet!
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I too was not so thrilled about the extra wait over the last cliff-hanger.
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Cam tells Rory he will be staying a couple of weeks, and then he will move in...or on?
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From my reading so far, Mark is the complicated one and is a bit of a dare devil.
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While not shocking except to April and probably Jett, Sid and Jett's old man seem to have more than a little bit of history???
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Mark finally has found a reason for his "parents" behaviour....and of course it still sucks.
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Chapter 8 - Coming out to the world
Daddydavek commented on unilive's story chapter in Chapter 8 - Coming out to the world
Hopefully the label is as understanding as the fans... -
I'm glad I don't have to wait for the next chapter!
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PART 2 - Chapter 6 - Success
Daddydavek commented on unilive's story chapter in PART 2 - Chapter 6 - Success
It was a fantastic night and it ended the right way, although some of the highlights getting there were pretty hot. -
I liked the flow and pacing of this chapter and the character development as well. Nice job. On a more detailed level, I liked how it built to a nice climax!
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Recrudescence - Word of the Day - Fri May 1, 2020
Daddydavek commented on Myr's blog entry in Writing World
I thought of this sentence when I saw today's word. " You thought your shingles outbreak subsided, but instead experienced a recrudescence of the virus. I first heard it from my mother's physician when she was there for a recurrence of shingles and the doctor called it recrudescence and gave the above quote. As shingles is a cruelly debilitating disease, I thought the word was perfect. -
I loved this chapter but fear Granger will feel obligated to Daventry to go to see the Tsar....
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Interesting about Brad's ongoing feelings about his grandparents despite Paddy's best efforts. I also found it interesting that the football players were interested in people who don't live in a gay bubble.
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Interesting jump forward in time and Kyle gets my vote for being interesting.
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Everything was going great until the last six lines.
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Ryan is a treasure and Danny owes Jake a coke....and is still a slutty teenager.
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Cam has found a little corner of heaven. And the vibe with Rory has strong sexual overtones.
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I also have a 1971 Sony TC-730 Reel-to-Reel Stereo Tape recorder with auto-reversing three motors and six heads which still works as well, although not as well in reverse as it used to....
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....Ummmm I still do. It plays fine to. I also have a Sony Discman....from the mid-eighties. It works too. I think that Jett and Tom are too much alike. Sorta like my daughter and granddaughter. They can get a rise out of each other with just a look. However, I have no idea what redeeming values Sid sees in Tom or why they spent nearly all night talking. And apparently neither does April or Jett. Missed any description of any interaction with baby Jay....
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Thanks for the early present!
