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Prompt 210 - Grim Reaper
Dr. John NYC commented on Mann Ramblings's story chapter in Prompt 210 - Grim Reaper
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Destiny Begets Destiny
Dr. John NYC commented on Headstall's story chapter in Destiny Begets Destiny
Absolutely, I want to hear more! At a minimum, I want to know about the other packs of their hypotheses and about Kellar's father. I'm guessing he is from a pack, too, so that could be another place to bring copper. Besides, it might also give Kellar (and us!) some insight into the years between Gisla leaving Morningstar and saving the young Kellar and, hence, the future of the packs. -
Definitely not the reunion I was expecting, but I'm glad Noah has the strength of character to put his people first. Now to see what he's planning to do in the throne room...
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So, a bit of a delay because the text on my iPhone stopped after the first couple paragraphs, so I had to wait until I had time to read it on my computer. I'm sorry to hear that Grace and Cindy are still not talking. Losing your best friend since childhood has to hurt. At least we know each of them is missing the other -- and is equally stubborn. I will also confess that I thought that perhaps both sets of parents would show up at the game and at least start the healing. At least we know that Grace knows, however, and she is not freaking out. I'm not sure how Jackson would handle his mom freaking since he is only a few chapters away from freaking out himself. I'm also glad to see more of their friends figuring it out and supporting them. Some major stuff is approaching the fan, I suspect, so they will need all the support they can get. Thanks, Krista!
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Wow, the ending certainly up-ended the story! It could go so many ways now. I'll be looking forward to seeing what is next. Thanks, LillyLee!
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Silent but deadly: I started reading because of the description (hey, you had me at supernatural). At first, I was just reading, but by the end, I was somehow immersed in the characters and wanting to know what just happened and what was going to happen next. I'm glad you made them fraternal twins: it's easier to accept how different they are since they are no more alike than brothers. Although it's possible to have identical twins be so different because of unusual circumstances (e.g., checkout "Clueless Camping"), it is not common in my experience. Thanks for a good start, Superpride -- I'm ready for more!
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Chapter 44 A Time of Rebirth
Dr. John NYC commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 44 A Time of Rebirth
What a miraculous conclusion of a chapter to read on Valentine's Day! True love does win. Thanks, Gary, for sharing on this week that celebrates love -- of all types! -
Perfect job, indeed! Even though Sashaworld (I love that term) means there will probably be at least a few hiccups, I'm betting on Jian ending up there. It will also give him a chance to spend some time in heat & humidity. Now the only thing missing is a place to surf... I also adore how their relationships are evolving: Emmett, Jian, and Pitanê. I also hope that the students realize just how lucky they are to have such an exceptional teacher and a beautiful husky to get to know. Probably a good thing that Pitanê fits right in with the students because it might be awhile before Jian can take him to work with him. Thanks, Sasha!!!
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Merry Cliff-mas! Seriously, an intense chapter from which lots of different futures can be imagined. As Lux Apollo said, Trein is going to be trouble. Deke has "his property", a better clan, and more power. I'm betting on Deke, Kraig & Co. to deal with whatever trouble he's going to cause, but I hope Deke's cockiness doesn't make him over-confident. Happy Rest-of-2016 and all the best to you, yours, and especially your writing in 2017!
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Chapter 35 The Winds of Change
Dr. John NYC commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 35 The Winds of Change
¡Carajo! Now that was an intense, exciting, suspenseful, loving, scary, heart-warming, maniacal-sociopath-killing, soul-satisfying chapter! My heart is still racing (although the first espresso of the day may be contributing). I wondered at the twig snapping whether Warren or Fenwick might be there and contribute in some way, but Tobyn saying it was a bull elk explained away my explanation. Like the others, I am delighted that it was Warren who showed -- again -- how much he has to offer the pack. Still, I can't help but wonder when Fenwick might make another appearance. Also, now that we know there are other hunters still around, something is going to have to happen to address that lurking danger -- unless that denouement is being saved for the next book. Thanks again for this latest addition to the Morningstar Universe. Until the next chapter, Peace, and may the remaining weeks of 2016 be Merry and Bright! -
Chapter 34 True Colors
Dr. John NYC commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 34 True Colors
Such a special chapter, and perfectly placed in the arc from fear in multiple dimensions through an incomplete understanding of the malaise to a better understanding to... THIS magnificent description of their joining. Spectacular! Now, they are ready for the hunt -- we all hope. Thanks, Headstall ! -
Argghh! Just when I thought progress was being made, Emmett loses it, & now they are both devastated. I'm still struggling to understand Emmett's reluctance so it makes the ending even sadder. At least I can be happy that there are probably more chapters left than I was expecting!
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Now THAT is the epitome of a cliffhanger, but what an encouraging turn -- I hope. I'm going to be majorly pissed (and I am not speaking in the British sense of the word) if his brothers don't show him that they don't care if he's gay, I mean bisexual. Of course, a little light hazing of Efrain would be ok after their first trip to Wolfie's family. Can't wait for the next chapter. PS: I was laughing maniacally when they were talking about the VT team watching the Twilight saga to prepare for the game!
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Although I had read it awhile ago, the fact that it popped up on the radar again and I read it from stem to stern will allow another "please, Sir, may we have some more" to the list. Also, I don't think you have to compare your dragons to Pern's: yours are plenty intriguing enough to rate more story time, with the Dolphins or without -- but since Neo and Draak are heating things up, "with" is preferable. ¡Gracias, Carlos!
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An All Saints Day story does not have the same ring as a Halloween story, but you managed to do both at once -- kind of like what "Phil" did for the two young men. I particularly enjoyed the perspective of Mephistopheles that our beliefs (e.g., what/who is a devil?) may not always reflect reality. Wonderful story, Cynus, and a fitting tribute to both days. Thank you!
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All Hallows Eve Adventure
Dr. John NYC commented on Cia's story chapter in All Hallows Eve Adventure
Definitely, they have to meet again -- and before next All Hallows Eve. He's a strong young magician and they have a connection so there MUST be a way. Right? Please? Thanks for such a different kind of Halloween story, Cia! -
Guess he wasn't as blind as Ben thought. Great story for Halloween, & a great moral for all the bullies -- if they read it and still are capable of enough self-reflection.
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What a fabulous way to flesh out characters and events from EPIC! More on the "girl-baiting" by cute-as-*$^%-Cory was the perfect place to start. I suspect there are some more of those stories lingering in some dimension, so maybe we'll get to see them, too. THANKS!
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Chapter 24 Facing Demons
Dr. John NYC commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 24 Facing Demons
Whoa!!! Major twist, but while completely unexpected for me, I'm a sucker for redemption and especially among family--& Warren and Kellar are family to me. What pendejos are their foster parents! -
What a lovely ending, R. Eric, but it was made even more special by your note. Thank you so much for sharing a part of your lives. It explains why it rang so true. I, too, was lucky enough to find "my Elias". Though it was not my first relationship, it has been almost 30 years of commitment and, thanks to changing laws, finally 5+ years of legal marriage. We were also luckier on the family front, but still, there was a mix of acceptance and rejection, so it was easy to relate to so many of the situations. Again, thank you, and now to look for more of your stories!
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So excited to see you back posting your amazing stories! Emmett & Zeke already feel like new friends that you just intuitively connect with, but from the description, I'm very curious to meet Huan-Yu's cousin. Besides, Zeke clearly is s great lay, but as a non-shifter -- as far as we know -- he doesn't seem like long-term material. Then again, stranger things have happened... Welcome back!
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Absolutely fabulous, Geron! It starts like a little creek, slowly swells into a major river, then in one mighty rush flows into the sea where it becomes one with the rest of the world. Veel Dank!
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Deep, quiet-tears despair and then, with the twinkle of Santa's eye, rebirth and infinite love. Thank you!
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I want more. I want more! Great conclusion to this segment of their story, Wolf. I do want more, however, whenever you are ready to continue the saga. I'm especially interested in seeing what happens once they have children! Kudos to you and thanks so much for sharing with us!!!
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It's all in the definition (thank you, Bill & Monica), so I'm hoping the definition of virgin for Finian to cross over is NOT simply orgasming. Certainly made for a heart-thudding cliffhanger! Please don't make us wait too long for some resolution!
