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Sidewinder - 9. Chapter 9 Faith and Angels

Psalm 34:17
When the righteous cry for help, the Lord hears them and delivers them out of their troubles.

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Faith and Angels

 

 

Boone slept most of the day, waking only for brief moments before exhaustion pulled him back under. Each time he opened his eyes, Coy was close by, sometimes staring at him, and he recalled drifting up at the feel of the man’s hand on his brow a few times. By evening, he was starving, and woke to the smoky smell and sound of meat frying.

“You staying awake this time?” Coy asked in a soft and weary-sounding voice.

“I… I think so. Hungry.”

“That’s what I wanted to hear,” Coy said as he offered him a cup of water. “Here, drink this.”

Boone did, and asked for more as soon as he was done. Deeps breaths after helped clear the last cobwebs of his deep sleep. “That hit the spot. I feel better.”

“Well enough for rabbit and beans?”

“Sure am. My stomach will be mighty thankful.”

“Want me to help you up? Probably best to be moving about after laying around so many days.”

“And it’s easier to piss standing up,” he said with a chuckle.

Coy helped him with his boots, and Boone smiled at the feel of his gold still there in the toes. A few minutes later, after a satisfying piss, he gingerly walked over to get a look at Daisy and Blue. They were grazing a short distance away from camp with Buttercup and Mouse. Blue’s head came up first, and he gave him a baleful eye before returning to his favorite pastime.

“I owe you, mule, but you’re still a miserable cuss,” he muttered, remembering how Blue had fought him on the night of the storm. Daisy, hearing his voice, trotted over for some attention, and he obliged with a good scratch to her neck and withers. Satisfied, she moved off. Seeing her lifted his spirits. She was a good horse, and he’d have had a hard time if she’d perished in the storm because of his decisions.

Walking back towards camp, he tested his tender shoulder to find the mobility improved. His hip, too, was better, although it still had a powerful ache. Moving around seemed to have helped his head. It hurt, but as long as he kept it steady, it wasn’t so bad. He looked around, taking in a couple of downed trees and wondered whether the storm had been responsible. He turned his attention back to Coy, watching him get their meal ready. He was frying simple biscuits in pork fat, and the smell made Boone’s stomach grumble. It was ready for a solid meal.

“You packed a tent too? Is that our old one?”

Coy glanced over at the stack of supplies. “Yep, that’s it.”

“How come you didn’t set it up?”

The man took the biscuits off the heat, and stood. “You were too sick to be cooped up. You needed the fresh air… Ma always said fever needs the good outside air. I rigged up the piece of canvas I saved from your tent for cover from the sun, though.”

“I… I’m beholden to you for what you did for me, Coy.”

“Yep. I was scared, Boone… damn scared.”

Coy suddenly looked damn close to breaking down, something Boone hadn’t seen outside of his ma and Will’s deaths. He took notice of the dark circles under his eyes, but stayed quiet while his friend got control.

“Thought you were dead when I found you, and it seemed like you were slipping away while I watched over you. Not much I could do but wait… and pray hard you wouldn’t leave me too.”

“You prayed over me?”

“Course I did. Prayed the whole time.”

“Thank you.”

“Don’t thank me, thank Him. Should a knowed you were too stubborn to give up.” He snorted and turned away, and Boone saw his arm come up and swipe at his eyes.

Poor Coy. What an ordeal it must have been for the man. What was it he’d said before Boone left? Something about there being a lot of death lately? Yep, too much death. Boone needed to show his friend he was fine now… or would be. He was pretty sure Coy was still keeping constant watch over him while he slept, which would explain the weariness he kept hearing in the man's voice. “Prayers worked, didn’t they?”

“Who’s to say? Maybe God don’t hate me after all.”

The words threw Boone as he stared at the man’s profile. He couldn’t help wondering at the pain poorly hidden behind those words. Coy was never one to feel sorry for himself. “Well… I don’t claim to be an expert on the Lord, but I’m pretty sure he don’t hate good men like you.”

“Kinda hard to tell if you ask me… but Ma always said keeping faith is the hardest work you’ll ever do.”

“Reckon she was right about that. There’s been times I lost mine. Coy? How long ago did you find me?”

Coy slowly turned back his way. “Let me figure… you fought the fever for three days, then slept through another, and now it’s another day, so that would be five days since I drug you up here.”

“Hmm… guess I was really out of it.”

“No wonder… you musta laid on the ground for three… no… closer to four days before I found you. Blue came into my camp as I was fixing some breakfast, well after the storm let up where I was,” he said, looking thoughtful.

“Where was your camp?”

“From here? Hard to say because the river winds so much, and my camp was nowhere near it. I reckoned at the time I was two days behind you, but I reached your campsite—or what was left of it—at nightfall that same day Blue showed up. Must have been catching up to you. Anyways, I found you on the third day after I found Daisy.”

“Catching up? Why were you—”

“Here, let’s sit on that big ol’ log and eat, unless you want to sit here?”

“Think the log would be better,” Boone answered as he walked over to the long-dead tree.

Coy followed behind him. “Food’s the best medicine, as Ma always said. Need some help?”

“No, I can manage. I’m near fit as a fiddle.” Boone carefully straddled the lower end of the log and eased himself down, trying to show his friend he needn’t worry so much.

“Eat, and then we can talk.” Coy handed him a plate of food, and then got his own and joined him.

The more Boone ate, the hungrier he got, and soon had his plate emptied.

Coy had beaten him, though, and belched as he got up. “Room for more?”

“Hell no. Barely got that last biscuit in me.”

“Let some air out then.”

Boone shook his head and smiled, thinking of the many belching contests they’d had.

Coy, grinning, belched again as he took their tin plates and spoons and headed down to the river, leaving Boone with his thoughts.

A full belly gave him some contentment, but he had a lot of questions that needed answering, questions he’d wanted to ask since he’d woke the first time. What was Coy doing following him… tracking him? When had he left the mining camp, and why hadn’t he gone on to his family farm? He’d said he could think anywhere, but Boone had expected he would go see the family graves at least. What changed his mind? Had something happened? But the biggest question might be, should he say nothing and wait for Coy to tell him… or bring it to the fore?

The man had cut him off earlier, like he was uncomfortable with where the conversation was going, and frankly, after nearly dying, he was just glad his friend was with him again. Answers could wait.

Wanting to go off by himself to maybe find someone to love seemed damnable stupid now. All he’d done was make Coy feel he’d done something wrong… when he hadn’t. He couldn’t help how he felt, just like Boone couldn’t change who he was, but it shouldn’t have meant they couldn’t keep the friendship they’d been lucky enough to find.

He got up and wandered over to the pile of supplies, relieved to see his all his tack piled neatly. Even Blue’s pack saddle was there. As he stood next to it, he was thrown back into that night… and the terror that followed his dropping down into the dark water. He shuddered, feeling a mite shaken.

“You okay?” Coy asked, suddenly behind him.

Boone turned and saw his concern. The man needed to stop worrying and turn in. “Yep, I am. Thought I was dead for sure in that water… but I’m not. Makes you see things you didn’t before.”

“I suppose. Made me do some thinking too… seeing you grey as gravel with your lips all white like they were. I didn’t expect to see your eyelids move. I was glad, but it scared me bad because I didn’t think you’d last another hour. I expected I’d watch it happen before I even got you moved.”

“I’m sorry, Coy.”

“What for?”

“That you had to go through this. You were right there’s been a lot of death lately. You don’t need to see anymore, that’s for sure.”

“I reckon I’d prefer not to.”

“So why didn’t you go visit your ma’s… the family graves?”

“Didn’t see much point. Ma said she’d always be able to see me from heaven when I wanted to talk… and how she wouldn’t mind leaving her old bones behind for coyotes to gnaw on, because they weren’t good for much else. I reckon if I want to tell her something, I can say it from anywhere, and I have.”

“So you decided to come looking for me?”

“Guess you could say that. It’s easier to think when you got something to do.”

“You said no when I asked you to come.”

“I did. Changed my mind… something Sheriff Willard said.”

“The sheriff? What did he have to say?”

“Well… he rode out to see me the day after you left, to tell me the reward came in… brought the old paint with him and said he was going to take Wes’s saddle.”

“That worn out hunk of leather?”

“That’s what he said… told me Paint didn’t like his saddle… I don’t know… he was shooting the breeze, like he just wanted to talk.”

“So what did he say that changed your mind?”

Coy took a deep breath. “That if I wasn’t panning no more, I should clear out. Said I was lucky the fever hadn’t got hold of me, and I wasn’t doing myself any good moping around.”

“You were moping?”

“Might have been. He said I looked sadder than a man who just lost his best horse. Said you looked the same when he saw you.”

Boone raised his eyebrows, but then he nodded. “He weren’t wrong. I made a mistake and I figured out you were right… about me changing cause of the punch. It weren’t fair, and I’m sorry.”

Coy nodded back at him, frowning before looking away. “I made some too.”

“Not like I did. Sheriff Willard is a confounding man, isn’t he? I found myself wondering why he cared so much that I was setting off by my lonesome, but there was no denying it bothered him.”

Coy snorted and met his gaze again. “That man is slick as goose grease. Says a lot more than words when he speaks. Pointed out I had a responsibility to do his friends’ memory justice… that you and I both did… but it seemed like it was more than that. Made me think of how my pa used to talk to my older brothers, like he knew what was best for them.”

Boone nodded, thinking how he hadn’t a clue what fathers did, or how they talked to a son.

“Anyhow, he said Wes and Lee had a genuine fondness for the pair of us, and I couldn’t go wrong investing in some good land in the vicinity of a good friend. He said you had the right idea, and I could always sell if I bought the right piece. Mentioned Larkspur, and I cottoned on to his purpose for riding out to the camp,” Coy said with an eyeroll. “He up and left without the saddle.”

Boone laughed… picturing the man. “So he talked you into coming after me.”

Coy gave him an unsure look. “Truth is, I was thinking about it since you left, but I had to get over my pride. He didn’t talk me into it, but he gave me the boot I needed.”

“So, you do want to farm?”

“I don’t rightly know. Haven’t got that far yet, but I think the sheriff was right. Wes and Lee ended up giving us a gift that shouldn’t be wasted, so I’ll have a look see at this land around Larkspur and see how it makes me feel, if’n it’s all right with you?”

“Course it is. I’m glad you came, and not just cause you drug me back from death’s door. It was a pretty lonely life I had afore I met you… you’re my best friend… hell… you’re family, Coy. You’re the only family I got in this whole world.”

“You’re the only one left for me too, and you’ve always had my back. I know Ma and Will said some harsh things, but those weren’t never my thoughts. That punch… it was a boy being afeared, and stupid. I’d like to think I’ve growed up some since then.”

“I know what it was, and you don’t got to tell me that life is confusing sometimes.”

“Yep… can be for sure.”

It was a bit of an awkward moment, but Boone believed they’d moved beyond the turmoil of the past few weeks, and he was thankful. “So, was that all the sheriff had to say?”

Coy scoffed. “Not likely… there’s always something more with that man. He said sometimes we have to ponder on what makes us unhappy before we can figure out what makes us happy. That was after he mounted up. Told me you took the trail along the railway line and rode off… like I said, without the saddle. I hollered after him about it, but he just smiled at me and kept riding. He’s a strange fellow, that one. Never met a lawman like Sheriff Willard… but I think I kind of don’t mind him. At least he don’t make me shake in my boots anymore,” Coy said with a suddenly wide grin.

Boone returned it. “I guess I don’t mind him either… could even say I like the man, but he still makes me jittery when he looks at me. Suppose he does that to most folks. So, you and me, we’re going the whole way to Larkspur?”

“Looks like we are, Boone.”

 

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Thanks for reading. So Boone's on the mend, and we find out a bit about where Coy's head is at. And there was the sheriff popping up again. What did you think?
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12 hours ago, ColumbusGuy said:

Ah, the long arm of the law strikes again....I like Sheriff Willard, and it's too bad we probably won't see him again.

It's great to see our boys travelling together again; a road is easier taken if it's shared, and any trouble is halved when two friends tackle it together.
Too soon to see if an intimate relationship will develop, but you can scarcely get more intimate than saving your partner's life.

Sigh, another week to go.

Lol. I actually was going to call this chapter "Long Arm of the Law," but decided it would tip readers off. Yes, we probably won't see the sheriff again, but he played his part, and I enjoyed writing him. 

I like that the boys are back together, for now. Friendships, real ones, are worth more than gold. :)  They certainly will be safer traveling together.

Yeah, you can't get more intimate than saving someone's life... well said, my friend. Only six days to go now. :D  Cheers, buddy... G-man.... :hug:  xoxo

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12 hours ago, Brokenbind said:

I had a line manager a lot like Sheriff Willard.  Knew me better than I knew myself, and subtly altered the course of my life, often indirectly and in not so many words.  I didn't cotton on until much later, and by the time I pulled my head out of my ass, it was too late to be grateful in person.

Hopefully Boone and Coy can make it to Larkspur without further incident.  And that's a long way on horseback with a headache.

 

 

Hey, Brokenbind. If you had a man like Sheriff Willard in your life, you were a fortunate man. I expect folks like him don't need someone to be grateful. :hug: 

Yes, the boys still have a long way to go, but they are no longer traveling alone. I've spent an entire day on horseback... many times... and you sleep like the dead at the end of the day. I certainly wouldn't want to do it with a headache, but Boone is getting better. 

Thanks, buddy... I appreciate you reading and sharing that you could relate to Sheriff Willard personally... cheers... Gary.... :hug:  

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9 hours ago, Danners said:

That sheriff is the Yenta of the Wild Wild West, and thank goodness for that. However he phrased it, and by whatever means he took, I’m glad the boys took it to heart. It’s good to see them together again without the tension looming over their heads.

’Course, once they pitch dat tent and bed down together on the range, a little tension of a sexual nature would be most welcome. One can dream anyway. 

 

Lol. Sometimes Yentas do good things. :P  It's pretty obvious he is a caring man who tries to do the right thing. He is a persuasive man... and I don't think Coy stood a chance. :) 

As far as tension, there could be some lurking yet, but for the most part, the past is the past. Good friendships handle the bumps. :yes: 

No comment on pitching tents... :no: ... but feel free to dream away. Thanks, Dan the Man... always enjoy your commentary... :hug: 

 

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6 hours ago, Ivor Slipper said:

So Sheriff Will isn't as 'ard as he pretends.😀

Nope. He's a marshmallow... gooey center and all that. :P  I do think he is tough as nails when he wants to be, though. I expect many on the frontiers looked for the kind and caring moments among the harsh reality of raucous town life. Cheers, Ivor! :hug: 

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38 minutes ago, Daddydavek said:

The nudge from the sheriff was fortuitous!

Indeed it was. Often, people come and go briefly in our lives, but they leave their mark. Sheriff Willard has done this... the fact he cares  makes me curious about his life. Did he make a mistake once that cost him dearly? Did he let a friendship go he now regrets? I've been thinking there might just be an interesting story to be told. :)  Thanks for sharing your thoughts on this chapter, Dave, and thanks for the support... cheers... Gary.... :hug: 

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35 minutes ago, Headstall said:

Indeed it was. Often, people come and go briefly in our lives, but they leave their mark. Sheriff Willard has done this... the fact he cares  makes me curious about his life. Did he make a mistake once that cost him dearly? Did he let a friendship go he now regrets? I've been thinking there might just be an interesting story to be told. :)  

Yes, yes, and YES. Sheriff Willard is an intriguing character. His past is even more so. The soft spot he seems to have for men who obviously love one another — or, in the story’s vernacular, were made for each other — has to stem from something in his past. I hope it earns him someone made like and for him, and I pray that opportunity was already lost.

Please do explore his story. Been a while since you wrote a spin-off. 
 

Jimmy Fallon Goodbye GIF by The Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon

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28 minutes ago, Danners said:

Yes, yes, and YES. Sheriff Willard is an intriguing character. His past is even more so. The soft spot he seems to have for men who obviously love one another — or, in the story’s vernacular, were made for each other — has to stem from something in his past. I hope it earns him someone made like and for him, and I pray that opportunity was already lost.

Please do explore his story. Been a while since you wrote a spin-off. 
 

Jimmy Fallon Goodbye GIF by The Tonight Show Starring Jimmy Fallon

I've been thinking on it, Dan. Good to hear you think it might be a good idea. Part of it is already building in my head, but time is a factor too. :) 

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14 minutes ago, Cachondeo said:

Wasn’t he fetching the saddle though?👅

Lol. Yeah, that was his main objective... funny how he didn't bother to take it back with him though. ;)  I love when Coy says about Sheriff Willard, "That man is slicker than goose grease. Says a lot more than words when he speaks."

That's what intrigues me about him as a character, and why I'm thinking I might tell his story one day. Thanks for making me laugh, buddy... cheers... Gary.... :hug: 

 

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Got an idea of Coy's reasoning, such as it was.  The old sheriff is a good man, probably knows more than either of them can see in each other yet.  

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51 minutes ago, centexhairysub said:

Got an idea of Coy's reasoning, such as it was.  The old sheriff is a good man, probably knows more than either of them can see in each other yet.  

Hey, centex! I'm glad you can see Coy's reasoning. He's had enough time now to be done with grieving, and enough distance to do some thinking, but I wonder if he'd have set out after Boone as quickly as he did without that visit from Sheriff Willard. I think it played a big part in that issue he was having with his pride... and it probably helped to know Boone was moping too. :) 

I agree the sheriff is perceptive, but I also wonder what Wes and Lee might have told him about the pair. I suspect they knew Boone was in love with Coy. Thanks for the support... cheers... Gary.... :hug: 

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Hi Gary:

Sorry it took me a couple of days to pen a comment.

You titled this chapter “Faith and Angels” and it fits-Coy and Boone are angels of faith to each other, the surest, steadiest bond either have ever had;  It was that faith in their bond that had Coy follow Boone to work out their relationship (and inadvertently save Boone’s life) 🙏

Boone’s lack of family ties made obvious how important his connection was to Coy;  He might even have believed he loved Coy more in every way, since Coy had roots and isn’t “made like him”.
 Though the equality of their affection can be debated, I don’t think Boone can doubt now how important he is to Coy and it’s not because he’s all he has left.  I give props to Sheriff Willard and his matchmaking skills, for that is clearly what he was doing (clear to me, anyway, lol)

The journey ahead will be better because they’re together and interesting because there is discovery and exploration ahead (and I ain’t just talking about the landscape).

Nice job, 🍻 :hug:

Does Coy have romantic feelings for Boone?  If he does, will he talk about or act on them?  What other challenges await our intrepid duo?

*Tune in next week to find out in the latest, exciting installment of....Sidewinder*  🐍

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On 11/10/2020 at 4:24 PM, Headstall said:

the fact he cares  makes me curious about his life. Did he make a mistake once that cost him dearly? Did he let a friendship go he now regrets? I've been thinking there might just be an interesting story to be told. :)  

I agree.  :yes:

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29 minutes ago, FanLit said:

Hi Gary:

Sorry it took me a couple of days to pen a comment.

You titled this chapter “Faith and Angels” and it fits-Coy and Boone are angels of faith to each other, the surest, steadiest bond either have ever had;  It was that faith in their bond that had Coy follow Boone to work out their relationship (and inadvertently save Boone’s life) 🙏

Boone’s lack of family ties made obvious how important his connection was to Coy;  He might even have believed he loved Coy more in every way, since Coy had roots and isn’t “made like him”.
 Though the equality of their affection can be debated, I don’t think Boone can doubt now how important he is to Coy and it’s not because he’s all he has left.  I give props to Sheriff Willard and his matchmaking skills, for that is clearly what he was doing (clear to me, anyway, lol)

The journey ahead will be better because they’re together and interesting because there is discovery and exploration ahead (and I ain’t just talking about the landscape).

Nice job, 🍻 :hug:

Does Coy have romantic feelings for Boone?  If he does, will he talk about or act on them?  What other challenges await our intrepid duo?

*Tune in next week to find out in the latest, exciting installment of....Sidewinder*  🐍

Hello, my friend. I gave a fair bit of thought to the chapter title, and you hit on an important part of it... the faith they have in each other. Once Coy's pride diminished, he had faith Boone would be happy to see him. That is important. 

Also, Faith was prevalent for both men, and prayers were a big part of the chapter... but even faith by itself can not be enough... we all need our angels. That's where the sheriff came in... he is one of two angels in this chapter(three if you count Blue :) ). He gave Coy the push he needed to become the angel who brought Boone back from the brink of death. 

There is a certain spirituality these men share, and I wanted that to run throughout this story. Sometimes faith was all they had in those times... it's always easier to think there is some higher purpose in the obstacles we face in life. I liked the part where Boone prays for Daisy, despite Ma Diamond's belief that prayers weren't for animals. It shows Boone's individuality, and that common sense is still a part of what he accepts in the dogma of religion. His faith is his own. 

You bring up a good point about the equality of their affection... it too is a driving force in this story. Love isn't always returned, and we all know that, but friendship is possibly the strongest pillar we have in our life (and that includes family... which these men are to each other).

What will be discovered on the rest of the journey? Yeah... Tune in next week to find out...

Wonderful comment, FanLit. Thank you for taking this little story to heart... cheers... Gary.... :hug: 

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1 minute ago, FanLit said:

I agree.  :yes:

I have two different scenarios in my head... so yeah, Sheriff Willard is still talking to me... :) 

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Just finished "Song and Dance" and enjoyed it so much I did an author search to see what else you have written. Normally I only read COMPLETED stories but your writing is addictive so I took the plunge.

First, I want to thank you for writing a story that is grammatically correct. I'm already known as the Grammar Nazi and reading your work is a pleasure. I fully believe I will become physically ill if I have to once again read "He chocked on this large appendage." The word is 'choked'!😡 (After a smack on the back of my head my husband demanded I clean up the previous quote. What a prude.)

Secondly, your writing is cultivated and succinct. The story is well plotted and moves along at a good pace. No suffering through multiple chapters of angst or unending descriptions of interior decor. 

I am looking forward to the future chapters.

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43 minutes ago, LD Stratton said:

Just finished "Song and Dance" and enjoyed it so much I did an author search to see what else you have written. Normally I only read COMPLETED stories but your writing is addictive so I took the plunge.

First, I want to thank you for writing a story that is grammatically correct. I'm already known as the Grammar Nazi and reading your work is a pleasure. I fully believe I will become physically ill if I have to once again read "He chocked on this large appendage." The word is 'choked'!😡 (After a smack on the back of my head my husband demanded I clean up the previous quote. What a prude.)

Secondly, your writing is cultivated and succinct. The story is well plotted and moves along at a good pace. No suffering through multiple chapters of angst or unending descriptions of interior decor. 

I am looking forward to the future chapters.

Hey, LD! Addictive? :D I'm so pleased to hear you read and enjoyed "Song and Dance." It was the second story I'd written in my short writing career, and I'd like to think my writing has come a long way since. There is so much involved in becoming a good and proficient writer, and I'm always learning. :) 

Your words are very kind, indeed, and much appreciated. I'm somewhat the same when it comes to reading. I find it hard to stick with a writer if I don't see obvious care to improve. I am also 'allergic' to overdone and unnecessary angst, and do my best not to play with the reader... so 'cultivated and succinct' is well received on my part. :D  Am I to assume you've read the previous chapters? The way I keep track of readers is by 'likes/reactions' they leave at the end of each chapter, so if you could remember to leave one, it would be a great help to me. Anyway, if you have read the earlier chapters, thank you... westerns are not a popular genre,  but they give me great pleasure to write. This is actually my second story set in the Old West, the first being "Finding Refuge," if you ever care to check it out. As you look forward to future chapters from me, I look forward to hearing from you... cheers... Gary.... :hug: 

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4 hours ago, Headstall said:

Am I to assume you've read the previous chapters? The way I keep track of readers is by 'likes/reactions' they leave at the end of each chapter, so if you could remember to leave one, it would be a great help to me. Anyway, if you have read the earlier chapters, thank you..

Yes I have read all chapters and I do neglect commenting on each chapter but be assured I've read them all.  I will try to remember to comment but I am so fascinated to discover what is next I read on.

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3 hours ago, LD Stratton said:

Yes I have read all chapters and I do neglect commenting on each chapter but be assured I've read them all.  I will try to remember to comment but I am so fascinated to discover what is next I read on.

Awesome that you're up to date, LD. I love getting comments, absolutely, but what I was referring to was the like/reaction button on the bottom right at the end of the text of each chapter. It's just a quick click, and those reactions tell us authors who the readers are, how they felt... whether they liked it, loved it, found it amusing... or sad. As the reader gets to know author, we authors get to know the reader... and it's added input that helps us get a feel for how the chapter was received. :)  Cheers! :hug: 

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All great comments!  Escape is the key word for me as well during these crazy crazy days.  I am thankful for excellent writers like you Gary that transport my mind to other, less stressful, venues.  Great chapter, the dialect is perfect and I am soooooo happy the boys are back together. 

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2 hours ago, KayDeeMac said:

All great comments!  Escape is the key word for me as well during these crazy crazy days.  I am thankful for excellent writers like you Gary that transport my mind to other, less stressful, venues.  Great chapter, the dialect is perfect and I am soooooo happy the boys are back together. 

There have been a lot of truly wonderful comments... proof of story engagement... and that's rewarding for me. Reading, especially fiction, has always been and always will be an escape, but particularly needed in times like these. The writing and posting of this story has kept me busy, and my mind off how isolated I am... and I'm pleased to know it provides you small interludes. I am constantly refining the dialect, but I'm pretty comfortable with it now... glad you are finding it authentic, and are happy with where the boys are at. :) 

Thanks for adding to the wonderful comments, David... cheers... G. :hug: 

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On 11/12/2020 at 8:35 PM, Headstall said:

Awesome that you're up to date, LD. I love getting comments, absolutely, but what I was referring to was the like/reaction button on the bottom right at the end of the text of each chapter. It's just a quick click, and those reactions tell us authors who the readers are, how they felt... whether they liked it, loved it, found it amusing... or sad. As the reader gets to know author, we authors get to know the reader... and it's added input that helps us get a feel for how the chapter was received.

In the words of MacArthur "I shall return" and gladly do a check fest.

 

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25 minutes ago, LD Stratton said:

In the words of MacArthur "I shall return" and gladly do a check fest.

 

:2thumbs:  My favorite MacArthur quote:  "... never try to regain the past, the fire will have become ashes." :)  Cheers, buddy!

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