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    Jwolf
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The English Year - 31. Trial Run

Trial Run was unpublished for the following reason(s):

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oh man.... thanks for the update... This story still plays my emotions like a piano :)

 

Cheers

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Wow, I love how much Corbin has grown over this story. I am always so happy when I see a new chapter. Thanks for making my day. :P

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On 07/02/2015 04:47 AM, pfox25 said:

oh man.... thanks for the update... This story still plays my emotions like a piano :)

 

Cheers

Thanks for the review, pfox. It's good to be back at the keys.

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On 07/02/2015 04:47 AM, pfox25 said:

oh man.... thanks for the update... This story still plays my emotions like a piano :)

 

Cheers

Thanks for the review, pfox. It's good to be back at the keys.

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On 07/02/2015 04:47 AM, pfox25 said:

oh man.... thanks for the update... This story still plays my emotions like a piano :)

 

Cheers

Thanks for the review, pfox. It's good to be back at the keys.

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On 07/02/2015 10:54 AM, starrynight said:

Wow, I love how much Corbin has grown over this story. I am always so happy when I see a new chapter. Thanks for making my day. :P

He is growing up a little... More to come on his progress soon. Thanks for the comment!

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New chapter, yay, and Corbin the shows his masterful skills yet again. One of these days he's not going to know what hit him... Can't wait for Lee's reaction.
I don't want to feel badly for Pete. I really don't. Yet, I felt a twinge of something for his predicament.
Corbin needs to clue Nick in and be honest, no matter how long this trial run is for. I still like the idea of them.

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Well now, Lookey what the wind blew in! What the hell man. I totally did not see that all coming with Lee!! Has Corbin been sitting next to Domidick in those meetings? Wow. I like Nick for Corbin, he seems like a good dude. Too bad he is going to end up in Friendzoneland. I still say Corbin won't end up with the dummy Brit. I have to say though, I was so proud of the Brit. He is getting closer to knowing himself. OMG! HA! I just a thought! Maybe the Brit is supposed to be Corbin's Ron Weasley! I still like Lee for Corbin even if Corbin just totally made a dick move. Lee will be well within his rights to threaten him with a butter knife. So when do we get the cadette back out of hock? I am interested in seeing the full unholy trinity back in action. I really love this story. Its so awesome. Even if the author has a tendency to wander away, leaving us all hanging in agony. Ha! Free guilt trips! You are still amazing. For reals, I hope all is well and you are just very busy. :o)

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On 07/02/2015 03:00 PM, Carrie76 said:

Well now, Lookey what the wind blew in! What the hell man. I totally did not see that all coming with Lee!! Has Corbin been sitting next to Domidick in those meetings? Wow. I like Nick for Corbin, he seems like a good dude. Too bad he is going to end up in Friendzoneland. I still say Corbin won't end up with the dummy Brit. I have to say though, I was so proud of the Brit. He is getting closer to knowing himself. OMG! HA! I just a thought! Maybe the Brit is supposed to be Corbin's Ron Weasley! I still like Lee for Corbin even if Corbin just totally made a dick move. Lee will be well within his rights to threaten him with a butter knife. So when do we get the cadette back out of hock? I am interested in seeing the full unholy trinity back in action. I really love this story. Its so awesome. Even if the author has a tendency to wander away, leaving us all hanging in agony. Ha! Free guilt trips! You are still amazing. For reals, I hope all is well and you are just very busy. :o)

So much in this review to cover! I love it! I think Corbin's reaction to Lee's threat was very in character... he doesn't mess around when he senses any form of danger. Don't count Nick out just yet...we've just met. There's a lot to explore there, and so far, he is good for Corbin. The cadet will be out and back soon... don't you worry... and I'm hoping to back with some form of semi-regularity, so... there's that. Until next time!

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On 07/02/2015 02:03 PM, Defiance19 said:

New chapter, yay, and Corbin the shows his masterful skills yet again. One of these days he's not going to know what hit him... Can't wait for Lee's reaction.

I don't want to feel badly for Pete. I really don't. Yet, I felt a twinge of something for his predicament.

Corbin needs to clue Nick in and be honest, no matter how long this trial run is for. I still like the idea of them.

Thanks for the review! I love that everyone is holding out for Lee's reaction... will he go the explosive route, or will he give Corbin a taste of his own medicine? I will say that moving forward, Corbin and Nick's relationship is the most honest one we've seen him in... thanks again!

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Wait, what just happened? Corbs agreed with the Brit that getting back into the friendzoneland (to quote Carrie :D) at least would be a good. Then a moment later they're saying have a good semester to each other! Huh? What happened to at least hanging out as friends...oh, I guess Corbin can't do that if he feels everything he feels for Pete. I did feel sorry for Pete, I will admit. He had some time w/o seeing Corbin and being in contact with him, to really think about what he wants. He was honest with his feelings in the voicemail. I'm sure he thought Corbin would jump into his arms or something. lol

 

I LOVE Nick!!!! I think he's perfect; he's sweet, loving, funny, easy on the eyes, and he doesn't come with a manual to try and figure him out. :P

 

Corbin is so manipulative - look what he just did with Lee at the EC meeting. He did throw Lee under the bus. Just b/c Lee is unpredictable right now. Isn't he worried about Lee's response to what he did? lol I can't wait to find out how Lee's gonna react to that!

 

As usual, another terrific chapter, Jon! Hope you have a great 4th! :)

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On 07/04/2015 01:19 PM, Lisa said:

Wait, what just happened? Corbs agreed with the Brit that getting back into the friendzoneland (to quote Carrie :D) at least would be a good. Then a moment later they're saying have a good semester to each other! Huh? What happened to at least hanging out as friends...oh, I guess Corbin can't do that if he feels everything he feels for Pete. I did feel sorry for Pete, I will admit. He had some time w/o seeing Corbin and being in contact with him, to really think about what he wants. He was honest with his feelings in the voicemail. I'm sure he thought Corbin would jump into his arms or something. lol

 

I LOVE Nick!!!! I think he's perfect; he's sweet, loving, funny, easy on the eyes, and he doesn't come with a manual to try and figure him out. :P

 

Corbin is so manipulative - look what he just did with Lee at the EC meeting. He did throw Lee under the bus. Just b/c Lee is unpredictable right now. Isn't he worried about Lee's response to what he did? lol I can't wait to find out how Lee's gonna react to that!

 

As usual, another terrific chapter, Jon! Hope you have a great 4th! :)

Thanks for the review, Lisa! Glad you enjoyed the chapter! I LOVED Carrie's Friendzoneland... that's a place we all know in some way, right? And as for Corbin and Pete walking away, well... we know from experience that those two don't stay gone on each other for very long, do they? I can't WAIT for you to read the next scene between Corbin and Lee... I think you'll like it! Thanks again! Have a happy holiday!

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I had to go away and cool down before reading again and reviewing. Otherwise I might have tried to crawl into the screen and STRANGLE Pete. :pissed::fight: I cannot believe my fellow reviewers saying they feel ANY kind of sympathy for PEP, he is a jerk, messing with Corbin's head and heart and I want to kick him right back to Britain and tell him to STAY the F..K away from Corbin. :angry: I cheered when Corbin cut him off, gave him the Cold shoulder and said he had a boyfriend. :D serves you bloody right PEP.
But of course we all know it won't last. :no: In spite of Nick being the perfect boyfriend, Corbin is gonna fuck things up by not being able to resist the lure of the Brit and by not being honestwith Nick about his issues. Arrrggghhh :facepalm: But I'm going to keep hoping Corbin will hold on to Nick for five months, and then Mike will be back and can punch the Brit's face again if he tries anything on. And I'm proud of Corbin for ryng his very best.
Lee leaves me cold and I'm still waiting for Corbin to exact the perfect revenge on Domdick for ratting on Mike. And this is another reason to hold on to Nick and to go public about their relationship. Corbin cannot fight two fronts at once. He needs to have a settled love life to focus his energy on his studies, social status , and strategies for the standing of his house (much as I still shake my head over the ridiculous frat stuff, lol).
Oh, and if Nick is really serious about loving Corbin, he needs to bottom once in a while. Or at least stop assuming Corbin isn't versatile. Otherwise, I shall stop feeling sorry for him. -_-

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This chapter murdered me...I don't know if I want to be happy about Corbin trying with Nick or sad that it feels like things are over with Pete or worried about what is going on with Mike and if he is okay. I could live with out Lee...

 

Keep up the great work! I'll be biting my nails until the next chapter.

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On 07/10/2015 12:24 AM, Timothy M. said:

I had to go away and cool down before reading again and reviewing. Otherwise I might have tried to crawl into the screen and STRANGLE Pete. :pissed::fight: I cannot believe my fellow reviewers saying they feel ANY kind of sympathy for PEP, he is a jerk, messing with Corbin's head and heart and I want to kick him right back to Britain and tell him to STAY the F..K away from Corbin. :angry: I cheered when Corbin cut him off, gave him the Cold shoulder and said he had a boyfriend. :D serves you bloody right PEP.

But of course we all know it won't last. :no: In spite of Nick being the perfect boyfriend, Corbin is gonna fuck things up by not being able to resist the lure of the Brit and by not being honestwith Nick about his issues. Arrrggghhh :facepalm: But I'm going to keep hoping Corbin will hold on to Nick for five months, and then Mike will be back and can punch the Brit's face again if he tries anything on. And I'm proud of Corbin for ryng his very best.

Lee leaves me cold and I'm still waiting for Corbin to exact the perfect revenge on Domdick for ratting on Mike. And this is another reason to hold on to Nick and to go public about their relationship. Corbin cannot fight two fronts at once. He needs to have a settled love life to focus his energy on his studies, social status , and strategies for the standing of his house (much as I still shake my head over the ridiculous frat stuff, lol).

Oh, and if Nick is really serious about loving Corbin, he needs to bottom once in a while. Or at least stop assuming Corbin isn't versatile. Otherwise, I shall stop feeling sorry for him. -_-

Thanks for this epic review! I wasn't sure if anyone was going descent on the Pete opinion, and here you are. I love that people fall into two camps about him, especially because Corbin isn't perfect either. I think what happens next with him and Nick will surprise you. He's growing up our boy... And the fight with Dom an the house will continue to escalate, so stay tuned for that. Thanks again for the review!

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On 07/11/2015 04:56 AM, W.E_Rosenthal said:

This chapter murdered me...I don't know if I want to be happy about Corbin trying with Nick or sad that it feels like things are over with Pete or worried about what is going on with Mike and if he is okay. I could live with out Lee...

 

Keep up the great work! I'll be biting my nails until the next chapter.

Thanks for the review! I think the common consensus among readers is that things are never quite over with Pete... But we'll see. More soon.

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New reader here and you got me really hooked up with this story. I don't know what to say really. I have mixed emotions. At first I like Pete for Corbin and at some point at the beginning I did like Lee for Corbin.And then came Mike and did things that go against what he believes and that made me like him for Corbin. And now here comes cool, charming and perfect Nick and made me think that he is the best choice for Corbin. And then here goes Pete again. I actually really like Pete but I think it'll really break my heart if Corbin chooses Pete over Nick. God, Corbin is really lucky to have all these guys lining up for him! I think I'll just have to wait and see what happens next. Can't wait to read more!

 

Oh, can I just say something? Sometimes I think Corbin is really overdoing it. He's being selfish and manipulative. And I do think what he did to Lee is too much. But oh well, no one's perfect after all and I still like Corbin anyway. ;)
Looking forward for the next chapter! :)

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I would really like to read more, I hope it hasn't died or nothing bad has happened to the author! We miss this story!

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On 02/04/2016 01:20 PM, rockycs said:

Well its been six months since the last chapter. Should we assume this story has died?

More chapters coming out very soon. :)

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On 02/04/2016 05:03 PM, Mark M said:

I would really like to read more, I hope it hasn't died or nothing bad has happened to the author! We miss this story!

More chapters are on the way. Thanks!

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On 04/17/2016 07:04 AM, najaate said:

I hope the story hasn`t died, becoz i really like it.

Thanks for your comment. More chapters are on the way.

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On 08/23/2015 02:21 AM, loveseeker said:

New reader here and you got me really hooked up with this story. I don't know what to say really. I have mixed emotions. At first I like Pete for Corbin and at some point at the beginning I did like Lee for Corbin.And then came Mike and did things that go against what he believes and that made me like him for Corbin. And now here comes cool, charming and perfect Nick and made me think that he is the best choice for Corbin. And then here goes Pete again. I actually really like Pete but I think it'll really break my heart if Corbin chooses Pete over Nick. God, Corbin is really lucky to have all these guys lining up for him! I think I'll just have to wait and see what happens next. Can't wait to read more!

 

Oh, can I just say something? Sometimes I think Corbin is really overdoing it. He's being selfish and manipulative. And I do think what he did to Lee is too much. But oh well, no one's perfect after all and I still like Corbin anyway. ;)

Looking forward for the next chapter! :)

Thanks for the review, and for following the story! I'm glad you're getting wrapped up into it. More to come very soon :)

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Well, I'm so glad the story is still going on though at widely spaced intervals.

 

This chapter is a little more predictable in a sense. Not too much drama, though laying the foundation for lots to come with the frat house, with Lee, with Pete (always will be with Pete!), with Mike (when he reappears) and with Nick (Mr Nice Guy!) Corbin is so very lucky to have Nick, but he's not in love with Nick so Nick won't last as the boyfriend, even though for now Corbin has chosen him over Pete. Wow! I think that must have been very, very hard for Corbin to do that, though I appreciate that Pete is still such an unknown, uncommitted, doesn't really know who he is himself and what he wants. Pete wants Corbin maybe. That's not good enough for Corbs, and he's right. It's not good enough. Pete has let him down too far, too much, too often. Pete doesn't deserve him any more. Nick does. He's a treasure. But you can't make yourself fall in love. Poor Corbin. I'm scared for Nick. I hope he appreciates that he might get badly burnt in this, though Corbin has been quite truthful with him and not led him on false pretenses. On to the next chapter! Lol!

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