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Eternal Love

   (7 reviews)
Genres: Fantasy, Horror, Romance,

The Northern Lands are peaceful. About 450 years ago, the Church of Unification defeated the evil wizard Alrik, using its victory to consolidate its hold over land and people.

In the capital of the Northern Lands live the unlikely best friends Derek and Jordan. Derek is a sailor's orphan who grew up in the care of the church. Jordan is the third son of a successful trader and is headed for a career in the church. 

Jordan will begin training as a cleric soon. Before being cloistered for the next year, he and his best friend are on a farewell trip to a romantic destination. The secret they uncover will change their lives forever.

Contains scenes of non-graphic violence and criticism of religion.
Copyright © 2025 lawfulneutralmage; All Rights Reserved.

Story Recommendations (10 members)

  • Action Packed 7
  • Addictive/Pacing 6
  • Characters 7
  • Chills 5
  • Cliffhanger 4
  • Compelling 8
  • Feel-Good 0
  • Humor 0
  • Smoldering 3
  • Tearjerker 1
  • Unique 7
  • World Building 7


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Gary L

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

I had the pleasure of reading this early and thoroughly enjoyed it, although it being outside of my usual range.  There are some lovely moments included in a tough tale.

Highly recommended.  Well done @lawfulneutralmage!

Response from the author:

Many thanks! Glad that you enjoyed this take!

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Mikiesboy

   3 of 3 members found this review helpful 3 / 3 members

What do i think? Well, i think this author should perhaps consider writing more stuff for us to read. Maybe publishing his stories?  This is another interesting story, where the truth depends on who you are talking to. Excellent. 

Response from the author:

Thank you for the glowing review! I am working on more stuff.

  • Love 5
Bill W

   2 of 2 members found this review helpful 2 / 2 members

If you enjoy stories about magic and powerful wizards, then this wonderful short story is for you.  The authors paints powerful images that allow us to visualize what's taking place, and although not all of those images are pretty, there are many others that are, including the possibility of a romantic encounter.  

This story also raises questions that are relevant in today's society, and both of the main characters have decisions to make as to whether the wizard is evil or good.  You may have to ask yourself that same question as you're reading this magical and captivating tale, because, as one of the characters points out, there are two sides, or viewpoints, to every conflict.  Well done, @lawfulneutralmage!

Response from the author:

Many thanks! Yes, what is good and what is evil?

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