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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
Note: While authors are asked to place warnings on their stories for some moderated content, everyone has different thresholds, and it is your responsibility as a reader to avoid stories or stop reading if something bothers you. 

Garlic or Love? - 1. Garlic or Love

Choosing

No chorus of angels sings,
nor do divine trumpets blow
Rather, our choices are quiet
coming in moments
we could ignore

With shaking hands or heavy hearts or
sometimes with a shrug
We ask which way, or what if?
Oblivious and blind until we
feel the shift in the ground below

Standing still is a direction.
Blade or gun is a choice.
It is we who choose what to carry
what to hear, whom to silence
and what is left unnamed

In the end, we are not judged by
the dramatic, but by the simple,
by the day-to-day and the doors
we do not open.

 

Red Ink

No one tells you
that choosing means crossing out.

It should feel decisive—
a clean way forward.
Instead, margins fill with silence,
whole paragraphs sacrificed to the work

You hesitate longest
over the sentences you thought saved you.
They aren’t wrong.
They just don’t belong.

Every deletion asks
Who are you without this?
Erasing is not forgetting
Ghosts linger in the lines

Clarity arrives in white space
not as absence, but as room to breathe.

 

The Garlic Question

Tonight we choose using prayer and logic
To cook with a clove, or no garlic.

The pan is ready, the oil is hot
The recipe says, "Add one shallot"
Add garlic next, one or two
Who on earth uses so few?

The garlic bulb sits on the side
A papery crown, a fragrant guide.
My inner voice says you must add six
Mince it fine and then mix, mix, mix

But then a voice from far away—
My spouse comes in to save the day
“I have a meeting early, so, please.
Let’s aim for breath that won’t fell trees.”

I pause. I weigh. I try to be fair.
Garlic or love? Choose with care.

Without it, dinner feels polite,
A little bland, and not right.
Respectable. Mild. Entirely tame.
The culinary equivalent of beige, by name.

But consequences are quite near
Perfume of the clove lasts for a year
Tomorrow’s coffee, toast, and tea
Will taste like yesterday’s spaghetti.

And if you’re torn, and conflicted,
Let this simple truth be predicted
In matters of life, love and fun
Too much garlic can't be done.

So cook with joy, ignore the doubt.
The only mistake, is leaving it out.

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Thanks for reading these. I hope one tickles your fancy!
Copyright © 2026 Mikiesboy; All Rights Reserved.
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Poetry posted in this category are works of fiction. Names, places, characters, events, and incidents are created by the authors' imaginations or are used fictitiously. Any resemblances to actual persons (living or dead), organizations, companies, events, or locales are entirely coincidental.
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I read the opening title and started to laugh and giggle, so early on the morning with just a sip of coffee under my belt. 

Switched gears rather quickly with your first two entries as they were more serious and brought my pondering side to the fore. Then it was back to laughing (snickering, perhaps?) and giggling.

What a morning you gave me, tim. 

I loved them all. :D 


 

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2 hours ago, Reader1810 said:

I read the opening title and started to laugh and giggle, so early on the morning with just a sip of coffee under my belt. 

Switched gears rather quickly with your first two entries as they were more serious and brought my pondering side to the fore. Then it was back to laughing (snickering, perhaps?) and giggling.

What a morning you gave me, tim. 

I loved them all. :D 


 

I'm glad you like them. Sometimes, life is too serious and you need a little fun. Michael did come into the kitchen and ask me to 'watch the garlic'. haha. 

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There are a few things that caught my eye, made me linger:  our choices are quiet coming in moments we could ignore

I really liked this.

And of course: Clarity arrives in white space not as absence, but as room to breathe.

On the other side: there is no too much garlic. I have Italian genes somewhere.  If I cook, there's garlic. lol If he doesn't want it, the dragon has to cook. 

Thanks, for these, tim.

 

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Garlic! Garlic! Garlic!

Working from home has its advantages...

 

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In the end, we are not judged by
the dramatic, but by the simple,
by the day-to-day and the doors
we do not open.

That is rather powerful.

 

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Clarity arrives in white space
not as absence, but as room to breathe.

I hope I get you right. Sometimes, one must clear out!

 

Arg! I have commented on poetry! @Mikiesboy, what are you doing to me?!?

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In the end, we are not judged by
the dramatic, but by the simple,
by the day-to-day and the doors
we do not open. - (Oh! That hit me hard.)

You hesitate longest
over the sentences you thought saved you.
They aren’t wrong.
They just don’t belong. - (I'm suddenly glad I'm not half as tortured when editing.) 

Add garlic next, one or two
Who on earth uses so few? - (That's what I'm saying.)

My inner voice says you must add six
Mince it fine and then mix, mix, mix - (I feel hungry now.)

“I have a meeting early, so, please.
Let’s aim for breath that won’t fell trees.”
I pause. I weigh. I try to be fair.
Garlic or love? Choose with care.
Without it, dinner feels polite,
A little bland, and not right.  - 🤣

So cook with joy, ignore the doubt.
The only mistake, is leaving it out. - :rofl:

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I had to love The Garlic Question. It made me smile, and  l may never be in the kitchen without being reminded of that poem. Choosing’s last stanza was powerful enough to make me reread it several times over. I may put it on my classroom door. My students will say I live by red ink. That made your poem by that name stand out to me, and I read it, nodding as I went along.  I’m delighted with all three of these! 

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The first two were great and thought provoking…and I had to reread them..

You had me with garlic, it brought back bittersweet memories of my father, who reeked for days after a meal with garlic, and drinking a bottle of mouthwash wasn’t enough either. The family cat who would nap on dad while he was resting his eyes on the couch, wouldn’t go near him…

Thanks for this and sparking a memory…

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Oblivious and blind until we feel the shift in the ground below - Or, in my case, bust a ligament, back, or neck by moving too fast.

Every deletion asks Who are you without this? Erasing is not forgetting Ghosts linger in the lines - Wait, are we talking about deleting words on paper here or troubling memories/past encounters? BOTH?

As for The Garlic Question, the whole thing was presented in such an entertaining way that I couldn't even choose a favorite line. The whole thing was favored. I loved it.

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On 4/9/2026 at 1:44 PM, Aditus said:

There are a few things that caught my eye, made me linger:  our choices are quiet coming in moments we could ignore

I really liked this.

And of course: Clarity arrives in white space not as absence, but as room to breathe.

On the other side: there is no too much garlic. I have Italian genes somewhere.  If I cook, there's garlic. lol If he doesn't want it, the dragon has to cook. 

Thanks, for these, tim.

 

Thank you, Adi.  Garlic is part of living a good life. Enjoy it often, i say.  

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On 4/9/2026 at 3:41 PM, BendtedWreath said:

In the end, we are not judged by
the dramatic, but by the simple,
by the day-to-day and the doors
we do not open. - (Oh! That hit me hard.)

You hesitate longest
over the sentences you thought saved you.
They aren’t wrong.
They just don’t belong. - (I'm suddenly glad I'm not half as tortured when editing.) 

Add garlic next, one or two
Who on earth uses so few? - (That's what I'm saying.)

My inner voice says you must add six
Mince it fine and then mix, mix, mix - (I feel hungry now.)

“I have a meeting early, so, please.
Let’s aim for breath that won’t fell trees.”
I pause. I weigh. I try to be fair.
Garlic or love? Choose with care.
Without it, dinner feels polite,
A little bland, and not right.  - 🤣

So cook with joy, ignore the doubt.
The only mistake, is leaving it out. - :rofl:

:) Glad you enjoyed these. Thanks for reading and commenting. 

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On 4/9/2026 at 4:06 PM, Parker Owens said:

I had to love The Garlic Question. It made me smile, and  l may never be in the kitchen without being reminded of that poem. Choosing’s last stanza was powerful enough to make me reread it several times over. I may put it on my classroom door. My students will say I live by red ink. That made your poem by that name stand out to me, and I read it, nodding as I went along.  I’m delighted with all three of these! 

Oh there is beauty in a perfectly sharpened red pencil, isn't there?   I'm glad you enjoyed them, Parker. Thanks for reading them. 

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22 hours ago, drsawzall said:

The first two were great and thought provoking…and I had to reread them..

You had me with garlic, it brought back bittersweet memories of my father, who reeked for days after a meal with garlic, and drinking a bottle of mouthwash wasn’t enough either. The family cat who would nap on dad while he was resting his eyes on the couch, wouldn’t go near him…

Thanks for this and sparking a memory…

:) Too much garlic may not be so good for those around us.  You're welcome and thank you for reading.  

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