comicfan Posted June 1, 2013 Posted June 1, 2013 After four long days of non-sleep you are beginning to feel like you are going to lose it. When you look out your window and see your neighbor slide what looks like a mask of their face over a deformed one you think your insomnia is driving you crazy. The question is, did your mind make up what you thought you saw or was it reality?
Andy78 Posted June 17, 2013 Posted June 17, 2013 Here's mine https://www.gayauthors.org/story/andy021278/andysshorties/4
Mann Ramblings Posted June 18, 2013 Posted June 18, 2013 Nicely done, Andy. Your narrator's voice of tedium and endless wakefulness comes through nicely. You really get the sense of boredom and frustration as he unearths all the secrets of the neighborhood. I like it.
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