robbie1042 Posted August 6, 2005 Posted August 6, 2005 Hi All Zot is writing a story called Yankee and it's posted on Nifty. I highly recommend it. Great reading, well written. Two thumbs up. Yankee on Nifty Archive Rob
GREEN Posted August 7, 2005 Posted August 7, 2005 I read the first chapter of this story I also reccomend it. Green
viv Posted August 7, 2005 Posted August 7, 2005 This story is really great!! I have been reading it on Nifty. Thanks Zot!! for the wonderful story. Viv
TheZot Posted August 7, 2005 Posted August 7, 2005 Everyone's quite welcome -- I'm glad folks are enjoying it. Actually getting it to this point has been something of an experience, though one I'd do again in a heartbeat. (When this one's done I think I will do it again, too) It's nice to know that something you've done for yourself is something other people are enjoying too. PiscesRising is due a big round of thanks for this, since she's in large part responsible for things being as good as they are...
Conner Posted August 7, 2005 Posted August 7, 2005 ...PiscesRising is due a big round of thanks for this, since she's in large part responsible for things being as good as they are... <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Well, Zot, if Kitty's involved, I'm in. I'm off to nifty. I guess it'd be too much to hope for that this story ia about hot guys in baseball uniforms? I love baseball and men not necessarily in that order. Hugs, Conner
TheZot Posted August 7, 2005 Posted August 7, 2005 I guess it'd be too much to hope for that this story ia about hot guys in baseball uniforms? I love baseball and men not necessarily in that order. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Alas, yes, too much to hope for, and Lurker's already hassled me about that. Besides, if it were a baseball story it'd be called "Red Socks" anyway.
Conner Posted August 8, 2005 Posted August 8, 2005 Great story, Zot. I like your sense of humour. I'm uncertain whether I should shout SPOILER or not - but I guess I already have. The scenes in chap 5 between Justin and Rick were super, some really tender and honest moments, very well written, too. That's quite the plot that Justin has got going for Bobby. I'm ever so curious as to how that will turn out. I can be patient though. "Um, yeah, sorta. It'll get cockler, uh, cooler soon..." Hugs, Conner
Former Member Posted August 13, 2005 Posted August 13, 2005 I red it too. It's really great. Thanks for writing! Tob
Davey Posted August 21, 2005 Posted August 21, 2005 I only found this story because Viv told me about it. Its really good! Im hooked already..... Zot you got a new fan Dave
Conner Posted August 23, 2005 Posted August 23, 2005 Loved chap 6, Zot! It was a very relaxing, laid back sort of chapter for me. Very funny with a lot of insight into Justin's character. Walking and talking...I thought I'd die laughing. More please! Hugs, Conner
TheZot Posted August 23, 2005 Posted August 23, 2005 Walking and talking...I thought I'd die laughing. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Heh. It is funny, though I hadn't actually planned on it being so. I was looking more for uncomfortable and slightliy illustrative, but I'll take what I can get. I've been trying hard to get across Justin's impairment without overdoing it, which is turning out to be really difficult, and I'm not entirely sure I've managed to do so. Still, it's fun to try. -TZ
Coming Undone Posted August 23, 2005 Posted August 23, 2005 Zot Your doing a great job with this one. I've been trying hard to get across Justin's impairment without overdoing it, which is turning out to be really difficult, and I'm not entirely sure I've managed to do so. I think you've done well in this regard. When I read the "Walking and talking" comment I felt his pain , then I almost wet myself. Great story, Great writing.
TheZot Posted August 29, 2005 Posted August 29, 2005 The groping setup was excellent. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Heh -- Justin so should have died for that. He's amazingly lucky Melanie's got it bad enough for Rick to let him off the hook. Of course, he's really in for it now. (Buahahahaha!)
EleCivil Posted August 29, 2005 Posted August 29, 2005 Great job on chapter seven, Zot. Loved the "If things get ugly, hit him in the face with a hacky sack" plan.
TheZot Posted August 29, 2005 Posted August 29, 2005 Great job on chapter seven, Zot. Loved the "If things get ugly, hit him in the face with a hacky sack" plan.<{POST_SNAPBACK}> It's a plan I like, personally. I should point out that you are the entire reason that Paul exists any place outside of chapter 3, (with a consistently used name, even! He was almost a Steve in chapter 6) so if things go horribly wrong everyone knows who to blame. -TZ
EleCivil Posted August 29, 2005 Posted August 29, 2005 I should point out that you are the entire reason that Paul exists any place outside of chapter 3 <{POST_SNAPBACK}> And I'll point out that I'm currently scouring the stores for a set of juggling penguins.
Conner Posted August 29, 2005 Posted August 29, 2005 As Rob said, Chapter seven's another winner. "I'll return you with your virtue untouched." Not a bad line for a social misfit! There was definitely a cliffhanger there, Zot. Melanie seems to know something. Really enjoying the story. Hugs, Conner
TheZot Posted August 29, 2005 Posted August 29, 2005 "I'll return you with your virtue untouched." Not a bad line for a social misfit! Yep. Pretty typical as well -- it's not that he can't think of things like that, he's just normally really, really behind. There's a reason he does poorly when surprised, and has to prepare in advance. There was definitely a cliffhanger there, Zot. Melanie seems to know something. <{POST_SNAPBACK}> D'oh! I hadn't planned on that. Wow, my first cliffhanger. Cool!
Former Member Posted September 8, 2005 Posted September 8, 2005 CHAPTER 8 IS OUT!!!!!!! YAYYYYYYYYY That's a really intersesting turn. I wonder what will happen next. Tob
Conner Posted September 8, 2005 Posted September 8, 2005 WOW!!! Pretty powerful stuff Zot. Left me speechless. Rob <{POST_SNAPBACK}> Well, Zot, Rob stole the words right out of my mouth. They're worth repeating though. WOW! A good story just became a powerful story. Talk about quantum leaps! Excellent job. The ending of that chapter was perfect. I'm referring to Justin's words - they were so bitter-sweet. Things that could be...but aren't. Hugs, Conner
TheZot Posted September 8, 2005 Posted September 8, 2005 Wow, thanks guys. I'm glad everyone's enjoying the story so far. It's halfway done, and hopefully downhill from here...
Site Administrator Myr Posted September 11, 2005 Site Administrator Posted September 11, 2005 Hey Zot, Great Story! We need to get this linked in the archive too. Myr
TheDaniel Posted September 15, 2005 Posted September 15, 2005 A short thumbsup from me, too. What started as a promising story has become a great one. I really like it. As always I can't wait for new chapters. Regards, Daniel
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