Nephylim Posted June 2, 2011 Author Posted June 2, 2011 New Face in the Window posted. Gods, that Ace has a wicked sense of humour. Don't get too comfortable though
Ara Posted June 2, 2011 Posted June 2, 2011 oooooh grrrrrrr Nephy, such a nice time at the party all happy fun times and then this is how it ends I smell a rat, a Logan shaped rat and i'm pretty sure im not the only one who smells it. Thw big question is what this does to Ace in terms of his freedom, his confidence and how others treat him. Ill be tuning in same bat time same bat channel next week to find out.
Nephylim Posted June 2, 2011 Author Posted June 2, 2011 You think it was Logan? You think this is going to affect Ace? You think that it's not Haze who gets... ? Okay
Ara Posted June 2, 2011 Posted June 2, 2011 You think it was Logan? You think this is going to affect Ace? You think that it's not Haze who gets... ? Okay hehe im not sayin it wont affect Haze im just wonderin how it will affect Ace
Nephylim Posted June 2, 2011 Author Posted June 2, 2011 I will affect Ace HUGELY but possibly not in the way you would expect
Benji Posted June 2, 2011 Posted June 2, 2011 I will affect Ace HUGELY but possibly not in the way you would expect ...............Well I think I enjoyed the party as much as Ace did, I was very surprised that Haze didn't walk Ace home. I suspect he didn't want to appear to be over protective, but he could of gotten away with that by telling Ace he wanted spend a little more with him. I strongly suspect Logan, but what kind of freinds does he have that would help rough up a blind kid? If they figure Logan out he is up on assault and battery, and probably robbery ( the cell phone). Great chapter Nephy!
Nephylim Posted June 3, 2011 Author Posted June 3, 2011 WELL IF it's Logan and IF they find out that it's Logan and IF Ace decides not to tell anyone it's Logan then BAD things could happen...
Nephylim Posted June 8, 2011 Author Posted June 8, 2011 Another chapter posted Uh Oh the shit hits the fan and there are shocks for everyone. Hold your breath guys, Nephy is about to come out to play
Benji Posted June 8, 2011 Posted June 8, 2011 Another chapter posted Uh Oh the shit hits the fan and there are shocks for everyone. Hold your breath guys, Nephy is about to come out to play ................Well now that it all out in the open, I'm afraid when Nephy said 'and then it came' she was referring to one of Haze's rage moments. I do hope Ace can calm him before Haze kills Logan, and with all that shouting where are the parents?
Nephylim Posted June 8, 2011 Author Posted June 8, 2011 Unfortunately Ace is in the attic and they are downstairs. They never hear the shouting.
Ara Posted June 8, 2011 Posted June 8, 2011 Ooooh its hit the fan this time me thinks Jealousy may well get Logan the thrashing of his life and while im fully supportive of him being taken down a notch or 2 im not 100% sure that this is the right time for a good old fashioned beat down. We all knew it was Logan, what we didnt know was if Ace knew it was Logan now that he does and the truth is out there well its brought it all to a head. I think id setle for a quick hit from Haze and then Ace calming him down, also would kinda like to see Nick find out and see his take on this. Well whatever way it plays out theres a grrrrrrrr for ending it there and making us wait another week Although im still hooked so your doin somethin right Nephy
Benji Posted June 8, 2011 Posted June 8, 2011 Ooooh its hit the fan this time me thinks Jealousy may well get Logan the thrashing of his life and while im fully supportive of him being taken down a notch or 2 im not 100% sure that this is the right time for a good old fashioned beat down. We all knew it was Logan, what we didnt know was if Ace knew it was Logan now that he does and the truth is out there well its brought it all to a head. I think id setle for a quick hit from Haze and then Ace calming him down, also would kinda like to see Nick find out and see his take on this. Well whatever way it plays out theres a grrrrrrrr for ending it there and making us wait another week Although im still hooked so your doin somethin right Nephy ................ I think the shoe print on Ace's shirt will nail Logan!
Nephylim Posted June 15, 2011 Author Posted June 15, 2011 So, the next chapter is up. Is it what you expected? i doubt it Ooooh... so now we know that Tally died... did Haze kill him with the rage?
Frostina Posted June 15, 2011 Posted June 15, 2011 So, the next chapter is up. Is it what you expected? i doubt it Ooooh... so now we know that Tally died... did Haze kill him with the rage? It's NOT what i expected. And NO, i really dont think Haze 'Killed' him, just that he died. And... and... what did that 'we...ell' mean? :o I'm going crazy here!
Agaith Posted June 15, 2011 Posted June 15, 2011 Just finished catching up I was a couple of chapters behind sooooo glad i did! Poor Ace...and then feeling even worse for Haze, I hope Ace can bring him around. I think only Ace can pull Haze out of his feelings this time around. argh I need a new chapter now! Pwease Nephy? Pwetty Pwease?
Ara Posted June 15, 2011 Posted June 15, 2011 That was definately what i wanted for Logan hehe. Not quite how I wanted it to end though with Ace getting hurt and then with Haze having a total freak out but meh at least Logan got his Now we just need Ace to put Haze together again give him a hug tell him its all going to be fine and see if he can work Hazes anger issues completely out of him Oly 2 chapters left tho Nephy this isnt good we wants more and is this the point I should mention we havent had a wedding in ages as well lol Gonna duck and cover now as Nephy explodes Haze style
Nephylim Posted June 15, 2011 Author Posted June 15, 2011 A wedding? *gasp* Ace is only seventeen. Don't you think he's a bit young to be getting married? There is definitely going to be a lot of talking and working things through going on and they have two chapters to do it in. And somewhere in there we are going to have to hear Tally's story.
Benji Posted June 16, 2011 Posted June 16, 2011 ....Nice chapter, I had already figured out Haze was going to explode, the aftermath was unexpected from his side. Ace, was diligent in reclaiming Haze. Nice to know that Logan is no longer a threat after the beating Haze gave him, I see the story winding down now, which is a good thing! The resolutions have been resolved so far with Ace and Haze attending a University together in the quick future.
Nephylim Posted June 22, 2011 Author Posted June 22, 2011 Well, the penultimate chapter and the mystery of Tally and the origins of the rage are revealed. Get a hankie and enjoy
Nephylim Posted June 22, 2011 Author Posted June 22, 2011 SO.... There is one chapter left where i am taking things just a step further and bringing things up to date ie from the time Haze is looking back from. I wasn't intending on mentioning Logan at all becuase as far as I am concerned his purpose is now fulfilled and it really doesn't matter. BUT If everyone wants Logan to get more punishment it would be easy to write it in
Benji Posted June 22, 2011 Posted June 22, 2011 SO.... There is one chapter left where i am taking things just a step further and bringing things up to date ie from the time Haze is looking back from. I wasn't intending on mentioning Logan at all becuase as far as I am concerned his purpose is now fulfilled and it really doesn't matter. BUT If everyone wants Logan to get more punishment it would be easy to write it in .......... I agree, Logan has been exposed, (but he should be in counseling) Great chapter answering a lot of questions, good job Nephy!
Ara Posted June 23, 2011 Posted June 23, 2011 ooooh that was good Nephy very very good. Tallys fate whilst already generally know for it to cause such anger and fury was still sad to behold. It was definately a good step though that Haze has taken with Ace in trusting him and opening himself up to him. I actually dont really care if Logan makes an appearance in the last Chapter or not. He served his purpose and got beaten to a pulp for it this is good although whilst im not for an appearance im also not against it. My evil side says another beating for him would be fun Anyway what a journey I cant believe we are almost at the end these two have been a happy mix of fun and frolics with some Nephy angst thrown in for good measure and I have nejoyed every minute
Nephylim Posted June 23, 2011 Author Posted June 23, 2011 WooHoo thanks hun. I was really trying for fun in this one and focussing on the relationship. I really feel that Logan has always been expendable and just a device allowing the rest of the story to go around him. I have no real desire to write anything in and I have a feeling that if i do write anything it will be artificial. I have tried again for a light and even funny story and that will start posting when this one ends. I think you will find it unexpected
Nephylim Posted June 27, 2011 Author Posted June 27, 2011 Okay, so I know it's a bit early but I just couldn't wait. The very last chapter of The Face In The Window is now up. The end of an era guys. My first ever proper romantic love story. I hope you liked it. Thank you all so very much for supporting me and my boys in this. It's been quite a ride but I think they're both going to be alright now. 1
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