Two Stories From Freethinker

[FreeThinker]

Hi!

 

I have two stories that I would like included in the archive if possible. They are the two that my readers seemed to like the most and I am rather proud of them, though I think they still need some work. They are both t/t stories with moderate sex. The first is A Canterbury Tale, which is a series of stories about gay teens in a northern college town during the mid-seventies.

 

http://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/adult-youth/a-cantebury-tale/

 

The second is The Moon in Your Eyes, a romance about two introverted teenagers who are faced with rejection by their families and peers and triumph over their adversities.

 

http://hotrod.nifty.org/nifty/gay/highscho...n-in-your-eyes/

 

I would be interested in constructive criticism and suggestions as to how I might improve them!

 

Thanks

[James Bond]

Good stories both.

 

But should they be improved? OK, a thorough proofing might turn up a typo or a missing comma (what else is new in the World?), but a rewrite I fear, could lose the immediacy of the stories, and you end up with one step forward and two backwards.

 

In my book a finished story is a finished story, and better left alone, unless there is something dramatically wrong with it, of course. With these stories there's no need for a rewrite, IMHO.

 

But if you have time to spare, I'd really like to see you starting on a new story

 

007

[Sparhawk]

Wonderful I love to have more stories added.

[Myr]

hmm... not sure how this got under my radar...

do you have the codes so that we can add them?

[James Bond]

Should be t/t on both of them, I can't remember any other combination...

[Myr]

They are listed as being by two different people... did you want them under one name or 2?