creative Prompt #309 - Creative

[comicfan]

Your phone rings and you pick up it. There is only one problem, the conversation going on is one you remember happening  ten years ago on the date of a terrible accident. As the conversation continues you suddenly feel very light headed and close your eyes. However, when you open them you find yourself still on the phone but now dressed as you were all those years ago. What do you do?

[Valkyrie]

Here's my take

 

https://www.gayauthors.org/story/valkyrie71/2014promptresponses/6

[Ron]

Perhaps I am a bit on the dense side today, no comments, but the ending left me scratching my head. What the heck happened?

[Valkyrie]

I was worried that the ending may not have come across as I intended.  Patrick spent the 10 years since the accident in a coma.  Reliving the accident and making a different choice allowed him to awaken from the coma. 

[Aaron Penrose]

Didn't abide by all the rules here, but this was such a good prompt. It got me out of a mean bout of writer's block. 

 

My take: https://www.gayauthors.org/story/aaron-penrose/aaronswritingprompts/3