[Sasha Distan] A Wolf And His Man

[Irritable1]

Oh dear. Poor Oli.

[Sasha Distan]

hey, even i have decided if momma knows yet!

 

but poor Oli, don't worry though, his luck is changing.

[Timothy M.]

Anxiously waiting for my Oli fix

 

and yeah I know I'm six hours ahead, but still.....

[Sasha Distan]

Anxiously waiting for my Oli fix

 

and yeah I know I'm six hours ahead, but still.....

 

its there hun. Fetch!

[Irritable1]

Phew. Got through that one lightly enough!

[Timothy M.]

Hi there Irri

we seem to fall over each other to be first to catch a new chapter, read, comment and post.

I agree, very vanilla in spite of a few naughty dicks poking out here and there.

Oh well, boys will be boys and poor Oli is doing his best to keep his urges hidden.

[dughlas]

Okay so I'm really feeling for the horny teenage Oli, can't imagine the sweet torture of sharing a bed with the object of your affections when you can smell the colors of him as intensely as a wolf can. I remember it's bad enough if strictly human.

[Irritable1]

Hi there Irri

we seem to fall over each other to be first to catch a new chapter, read, comment and post.

I agree, very vanilla in spite of a few naughty dicks poking out here and there.

Oh well, boys will be boys and poor Oli is doing his best to keep his urges hidden.

Sasha may not be deliberately provocative but SOMEONE on this thread is! Yes Timmy, thank you, I noticed the dicks. I saw them the first time, it just didn't make me freak out :-p

[Irritable1]

You know what would be hilariously terrible? If Oli's experiences with Boris lead him, and the reader, to understand, and reconcile with, his father.

[Sasha Distan]

You know what would be hilariously terrible? If Oli's experiences with Boris lead him, and the reader, to understand, and reconcile with, his father.

 

You know, I'm not sure if i see that happening. The writer would have to reconcile with his father first.

[Irritable1]

Aw sweetheart.

 

Life is long. Events and people can be surprising. And that's my ration of platitudes for the day.

[dughlas]

You can love your father without really liking the person he is. And yes life can be long and the damnedest things can happen but Oli's dad is one sick puppy.

[Irritable1]

He HAS gone to the dogs a bit hasn't he?

[Timothy M.]

He HAS gone to the dogs a bit hasn't he?

 

Literally...

 

Sometimes I wonder why Oli doesn't seem to know any other werewolves. I guess he may not want to associate with any of his dad's relatives, but he and Buddy could do with some help to get in sync.

Surely Buddy must mostly be a human otherwise he should have been born a wolf who suddenly turned human when reaching canine puberty. Or ... no this is getting too complicated for my tired brain. I'm off to bed soon.

Edited August 1, 2014 by Timothy M.

[Irritable1]

OMG I just realized that human Boris asked to be taken for walkies.... XD

[Timothy M.]

Anxiously waiting for my Oli fix

 

and yeah I know I'm six hours ahead, but still.....

 

It is Thursday isn't it ?

[Irritable1]

Now that I know he's skipping meals to write I can't nag effectively :-(

[Sasha Distan]

Now that I know he's skipping meals to write I can't nag effectively :-(

 

Actually, the chapter is late cause i was eating. I rode late, so we ate late, so the chapter is late.

 

I often withhold, food, alcohol, reading time, duvet snuggle time, and TV-movie entertainment if I have not reached word count. it works.

[Timothy M.]

I like the fact that Boris talks to Oli and clearly knows exactly how to interpret his wolf body language. Makes it much more likely they will have a meaningful relationship - no matter whether the reverse werewolf problem is solved. Oh and in some ways it's practical that one of them is human while the other is wolf. But of course I hope for a solution involving synchonization (can't spell).

Anyway, this whole chapter was delightful and sweet and with only a tiny little Alsatian cringe moment.    

[Irritable1]

LOL you cringed at that? Someone's gotten sensitive all of a sudden. I was a brave girl and didn't even shudder.

 

I think Oli is being a bit over-diffident. Could Boris say I AM IN LOVE WITH YOU any more clearly?

[Timothy M.]

LOL you cringed at that? Someone's gotten sensitive all of a sudden. I was a brave girl and didn't even shudder.

 

No, OLI cringed, not me. And well done on being brave, lol.

[Sasha Distan]

I think Oli is being a bit over-diffident. Could Boris say I AM IN LOVE WITH YOU any more clearly?

 

Well... he could actually say it...

[Irritable1]

I am handicapped in this conversation because whenever I think too hard about this my brain goes here:

 

 

BUT, I have to say, I think you have a really powerful and sweet metaphor going on here, Sasha.  So much about a relationship is about taking care of each other during moments of vulnerability, even if we are too inarticulate to ask for what we need, and here you've got two partners who take turns literally being an animal. It's weird and lovely. I just love the scene where Oli's dealing with human jealousy and animal lack of personal space, and how Boris understands and tries to help him with both, the immediate problem and the subtext.  Exactly like a good partner does   It's fabulous writing.

Edited August 8, 2014 by Irritable1

[Sasha Distan]

I am handicapped in this conversation because whenever I think too hard about this my brain goes here:

 

 

BUT, I have to say, I think you have a really powerful and sweet metaphor going on here, Sasha.  So much about a relationship is about taking care of each other during moments of vulnerability, even if we are too inarticulate to ask for what we need, and here you've got two partners who take turns literally being an animal. It's weird and lovely. I just love the scene where Oli's dealing with human jealousy and animal lack of personal space, and how Boris understands and tries to help him with both, the immediate problem and the subtext.  Exactly like a good partner does   It's fabulous writing.

 

thank you Irri. very high praise.

[Irritable1]

Now the Jayne thing, I don't get at all. I'm a Wash woman myself.