Dayne Mora Posted April 3, 2016 Author Posted April 3, 2016 Finally, Indie. I think he's a combo of these two: http://www.modelmayhem.com/3814067 http://www.modelmayhem.com/3251787
glitteryantlers Posted April 4, 2016 Posted April 4, 2016 OMG, the first Indie, wow. My mind's eye was doing a poor job when he's supposed to look like this! Now I understand Preston! I like the first Preston, he's super cute, but the attitude is missing. Not rabid terrier-ish enough <3 1
Puppilull Posted April 4, 2016 Posted April 4, 2016 Well, I would say 3, 2 and 2. Sure, Preston has attitude but in reality that attitude is hiding a very big heart. So that soft but well guarded center comes across for more in picture no 3. Besides, those cheekbones are simply delicious. As for Cory I agree with the rest and with Indie I can't really deal with the first guy's hair... Shallow yes, but I prefer the other one.
Dayne Mora Posted April 4, 2016 Author Posted April 4, 2016 OMG, the first Indie, wow. My mind's eye was doing a poor job when he's supposed to look like this! Now I understand Preston! I like the first Preston, he's super cute, but the attitude is missing. Not rabid terrier-ish enough <3 Not just Preston! Both Cory and Efrain found him attractive (Cory did kinda throw himself at Indie). Though to be fair, there is a huge difference between how others see Indie and how Indie sees himself, which may be what you've picked up on. The first Cory was kinda basic. I found a much better model for his body, but some of the pics are NSFW. Tastefully NSFW, but still NSFW. 1
Timothy M. Posted April 4, 2016 Posted April 4, 2016 I liked the first choice for all of them - although not Efrain as much, but you did say it was difficult to find a model for him. 1
Dayne Mora Posted April 7, 2016 Author Posted April 7, 2016 I think I'm getting warmer on 'Rain. http://www.modelmayhem.com/3729098 2
Dayne Mora Posted April 8, 2016 Author Posted April 8, 2016 (edited) Well, I would say 3, 2 and 2. Sure, Preston has attitude but in reality that attitude is hiding a very big heart. So that soft but well guarded center comes across for more in picture no 3. Besides, those cheekbones are simply delicious. As for Cory I agree with the rest and with Indie I can't really deal with the first guy's hair... Shallow yes, but I prefer the other one. I linked the models' profile underneath - there were some very cute pictures in the second "Preston" portfolio. Edited April 8, 2016 by Dayne Mora
Cris L Posted April 25, 2016 Posted April 25, 2016 (edited) Hated the new chapter, even if I was excited to read it.... I am reading a story called Efrain & Cory, I believe... Not Preston & Indie! Edited April 25, 2016 by Cris L 1
Puppilull Posted April 25, 2016 Posted April 25, 2016 I have such a crush on Prendie! I think I like their dynamics even more. 3
Dayne Mora Posted April 25, 2016 Author Posted April 25, 2016 Hated the new chapter, even if I was excited to read it.... I am reading a story called Efrain & Cory, I believe... Not Preston & Indie! You're in luck. I'll be posting another chapter later this week! 1
glitteryantlers Posted April 25, 2016 Posted April 25, 2016 I have such a crush on Prendie! I think I like their dynamics even more. Prendie <3 I wonder who of the two will realize first,that they are not casually having fun. My bets are on Preston. Seems like he has almost the same brain function as before. 2
Puppilull Posted April 25, 2016 Posted April 25, 2016 Just as long as Indie keeps saying juxtaposition, I'll be happy! I could sooo relate to Preston re that. 3
Timothy M. Posted April 25, 2016 Posted April 25, 2016 (edited) Hated the new chapter, even if I was excited to read it.... I am reading a story called Efrain & Cory, I believe... Not Preston & Indie! Well, you can blame Dayne for choosing a not-so-clever title. With all his wonderful ways with words, I'm sort of at the lack of invention for the story title. I have such a crush on Prendie! I think I like their dynamics even more. Me too! Me too! :D Edited April 25, 2016 by Timothy M. 1
glitteryantlers Posted April 25, 2016 Posted April 25, 2016 Just as long as Indie keeps saying juxtaposition, I'll be happy! I could sooo relate to Preston re that. Brains as erogenous zones? Never heard of that
Puppilull Posted April 25, 2016 Posted April 25, 2016 Brains as erogenous zones? Never heard of that It's my biggest one... 1
glitteryantlers Posted April 25, 2016 Posted April 25, 2016 Well, you can blame Dayne for choosing a not-so-clever title. With all his wonderful ways with words, I'm sort of at the lack of invention for the story title. Dayne could make a change a la Cazpedroso like from Daniel to Buy one, get two and three. (Great story by the way) EXC with gratis Prendie
Timothy M. Posted April 25, 2016 Posted April 25, 2016 Dayne could make a change a la Cazpedroso like from Daniel to Buy one, get two and three. (Great story by the way) EXC with gratis Prendie out of likes so :heart:
Dayne Mora Posted April 25, 2016 Author Posted April 25, 2016 It's weird, but I'm totally shit with book names. Plus, I didn't really think this would go as far as it has (first timer and all). I was going to wait to announce this, but I'm splitting EXC into books and changing this titles. Efrain and Cory will be the series title (although ExC/IvP could be fun too). The current book will be retitled Wolf Like Me, after the TV on the Radio song, and book 2 will be called Wild Card.
Cris L Posted April 25, 2016 Posted April 25, 2016 Splitting into books, hmmm! I could get a little excited.... I could start sing The Carpenters "Top of the world"! Maybe not.... But then again if there's more of ExC...
Site Administrator Graeme Posted April 26, 2016 Site Administrator Posted April 26, 2016 You're in luck. I'll be posting another chapter later this week! I'm surprised that no one commented on or even liked this post! Why don't people like the idea of another chapter later this week? That's an outrage and I insist that people start jumping up and down while cheering. 2
Dayne Mora Posted April 26, 2016 Author Posted April 26, 2016 I'm surprised that no one commented on or even liked this post! Why don't people like the idea of another chapter later this week? That's an outrage and I insist that people start jumping up and down while cheering. I'm trying not to jump the gun on it as I haven't started work on the next chappy and was hoping to keep y'all distracted. 1
glitteryantlers Posted April 26, 2016 Posted April 26, 2016 I'm trying not to jump the gun on it as I haven't started work on the next chappy and was hoping to keep y'all distracted. In this case I hope later this week doesn't mean Sunday after 11pm I'm surprised that no one commented on or even liked this post! Why don't people like the idea of another chapter later this week? That's an outrage and I insist that people start jumping up and down while cheering. Serious case of outta likes, already corrected :-)
Timothy M. Posted April 26, 2016 Posted April 26, 2016 (edited) I'm surprised that no one commented on or even liked this post! Why don't people like the idea of another chapter later this week? That's an outrage and I insist that people start jumping up and down while cheering. Uhm, because I didn't see the post until after I had read the chapter (I assumed it related to the most recent one posted not a future one). And I was also out of likes. But I'm totally at the idea of getting another chapter soon. Edited April 26, 2016 by Timothy M.
Cris L Posted April 26, 2016 Posted April 26, 2016 Mmm! I like it! In fact .... im on the top of the world.... And it's all because Cardza are back! Mr Mora, thank you, but now you've fed the poor starving masses, and they are replete for now.... Though I will be hungry again in the morning! Very hungry.. Hungry like a wolf, in fact! So when's next chapter? 1
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