New story and looking for assistance

[BWCTwriter]

I am the writer of Boundary Waters Canoe trip, which you can find at Nifty under Gay Male-young friends section, and i'm looking for any and all comments on my newly developing story, and also for some assistance in editing the story. having a second set of eyes to look over my story would be beneficial in terms of catching grammatical errors and the like. take a look at my story here: http://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/young-frien...ers-canoe-trip/

 

and email me at bwctadmin@cox.net with any comments, suggestions

[Aden]

Hi,

 

Sorry about the delay in posting, I've been offline for a while.

 

I can't get the link you posted to work:

 

http://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/young-frien...ers-canoe-trip/

 

I'd be glad to read it given the chance.

[Myr]

http://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/young-frien...ers-canoe-trip/

 

That should work. he probably copied the link from on the board...

[Comicality]

Just wishing you luck on the new story. Like I told you in emails dude...people are reading. They may not SAY it right away, but they are reading.

[Guest FlexCut]

The link shoud read:

 

Boundary Waters Canoe Trip

 

or if you need to cut and paste (don't know how this board displays URL's).

 

http://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/young-frien...ers-canoe-trip/

 

I've bookmarked the story for later reading.