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I love where you got the name "Porcupines" from! lol Their friends are wonderful! I absolutely LOVED the intervention! Especially the part where they're stopped at the stop sign and they BOTH see the two Kellis making out! That was funny! And Issac thought that was part of the distraction. lol I'm so glad it worked. I'll tell you, Dylan is stubborn. He knew he overreacted, yet he didn't want to call Chuck b/c he thought Chuck would never want to hear from him again. How stupid is that? He knew Chuck loved him. Why was he so stubborn that he couldn't pick up a phone or even text Chuck apologizing to him ? Men are so stubborn sometimes. I think it would be different with girls. I think girls are more apt to go crawling back with apologies. Well, I'm glad their friends intervened and all is well in Porcupine land.

I must have been hiding under a rock b/c I never saw this updated. lol Firstly, I can't believe Dylan would think Chuck was tellling him about Dewayne b/c Chuck though DYLAN was the lying, cheating, thieving bastard. It doesn't soundl like Dylan. Neither did Dylan telling Chuck to get out of his apartment and never speak to him again. That didn't sound like Dylan. Thank God he finally realizes how wrong he was. I can't believe Ron - what a scumbag! His poor wife! Imagine how she felt finding out that her dead husband was a lying, cheating bastard! And she had three kids to take care of! Ok, on to the next chapter!

I used to watch "Days of Our Lives"! Haven't seen in it exactly a year though. Whatever happened with Will and Sonny? I was a bit confused in this chapter. I guess I didn't remember Melanie sleeping with Brad too. I thought it was just Miracle. I cannot believe what a BITCH Melanie is! I know, I know, every chapter her bitchiness increases. I just can't get over how horrible she really is! How can MIracle even be friends with her? He's not like she is. I'm also a little disappointed that Miracle forgave Jaemin after he found out the truth about Jaemin beating up Sterling. And I thought that Miracle and Jaemin had known each other for a long time. Maybe I forgot that part too. Sorry. Anyway, Jaemin is all kinds of fucked up and I hope Miracle doesn't go thru with that asinine plot of his to sleep with his foster father.

What a great second chapter, Eric! Rachel is such a good best female friend. I can understand how Danny feels though about going out with Jake. He and Jake have been best male friends for three years, going on four, so it must be strange to think of him as his boyfriend now. Hope their date goes well! =)

Love your first chapter, Eric! Wait, isn't your last name the same as Danny's? lol I guess I'll repeat your other two reviews: the chapter posted a total of three times - the original, and then two more. Ok, on to chapter two!

Well this chapter explains a lot about what Hugh has been carrying around his whole life. He's finally dealing with his pain and I hope what he finds out can help Jonathon. (is that the way you spelled it?) Looking foward to the next udpate, Lab!

I think you need to add in your tags something to the lines of: Will invoke lots of tears - have plenty of Kleenex around. What a beautiful chapter, Ron. I loved how you "showed" the readers everything instead of "telling" them. The way Tag ran inside when he heard his mom cry, when he remembered his daddy telling him marines didn't cry (what a load of horsehit. I hate when parents tell their kids they shouldn't cry), burying his 'daddy' soldier and the picture...it was all so touching. Great job, Ron. =)

Lol, I was confused too at the "straight male cheerleader" part! So...is it Erin who's not so straight? And I thought the twins hated Luke at the end of the last chapter? You know, with the whole outing Jeremy thing. Great chapter Sasha! Can't wait for the "studying" to start! And the tutoring on the report. lol

Awww, now Akihiko won't be lonely anymore! When he's done with Hiroki, maybe he can send him my way! lol Although Akihiko will probably never let Hiroki go!

Well, at least now we know why Keith keeps everything in. My heart was breaking for him just reading about how his parents were always MIA (and still are), and the only affection he gets is from Albert. Poor Keith. And he was so nice and so human when he was with Hubert. He was a different Keith than the Keith from the first chapter. But now we know that Keith hides everything, his feelings, etc. Elliot's doing the same thing. When are they going to be on the same page? This was such an emotional chapter, Keith. Great job! Oh, I had to look up Trisomy 21. I never heard Down syndrome referred to that before.

Oh man, Cassie! Now I have "Bewitched" in a loop going round and round in my head and a picture of Samantha twitching her nose! lol God, I loved that show. Mikeal is so cute. He's so unsure of himself and so worried about everything. Though of course, at the end of the chapter he has every right to be. If he feels the way he does already (as I'm sure Adam does too), they're going way too fast! lol Can't wait for chapter three!

What a hearbreaking chapter, Andrew. My heart goes out to Luka. At first, I had thought it was that psycho who's still out there roaming free, plotting his next move. I thought this was his next move. How sad that these things can happen to horses so suddenly. Now why did Luka run away from Diego? As far as Jesse's troubles go, I hope that guy isn't his real father. Jesse is finally happy, safe, and loved. I hope that Danny and CJ are in for a battle. If this guy really is Jesse's father, then I really think he's going to fight for him. Another terrific chapter, Andrew.

Oh Keith, you idiot! (not YOU, Keith, the author, but Keith the character) Suck it up and call your boy! lol Straighten things out. Dr. Quentin gave Keith lots of good things to think about. Stop being so pig-headed and call Elliot! Pretty neat invention Dr. Q had going. What kind of a doctor is Dr. Q anyway?

Wow, Trevor! What a terrificallyemotional chapter! Is that even a word? lol Melanie - what a bitch!! I can't believe the tale she spun and everyone believed her. Well, except for Sterling b/c he finally realized what a manipulative witch she really is. lol I hope Miracle can get Sterling out of jail. Cody seems nice. Somehow I don't want him getting mixed up in all of Miracle's shit.

Jesus, what a mess!!! Melanie is one big troublemaker! And Kevin's dad's gonna have a FIT!!!! lol That's all I gotta say! Ok, on to the next chapter! I hope Melanie gets what's coming to her - she is baadddd news!

Hey Addy - (saw others call you that on here. =) ) - I'm goin' in a boat w/crazyfish, but we could stop by and all go together. He is pretty cute. Maybe he'll be the next Bel Ami boy.

Daddy!!!! Don't be a buzz kill! I wanna go!!!!! lol

Crazy, you got room for one more? lol

Holy shit, THAT was a great chapter, Keith! Keith was acting out of pure jealousy when he saw Elliot and Jeremy. It's good he realized it on the cab ride home. Now he'll have a wicked hangover in the morning. lol Elliot didn't deserve Keith's (or Dustin's), chagrin. All Elliiot has ever done was love Keith. He just has trouble expressing his feelings. He needs to fix that. Looking forward to the next chapter. I noticed in the past two or three chapters that your writing has gotten a lot better. Keep up the good work, Keith!

I'm so glad that Keith decided to go see Elliot perform. He seemed to grow up a bit in this chapter. Well, not at the beginning. lol

Ugh, Dustin, brush your teeth before you kiss Edwin! lol Glad Dustin finally came clean with Keith. Now Keith has to come clean with Elliot. No more lies, no more pussy-footing around your feelings.

Ah, they're all messing around on each other and in front of each other! lol I think though that Jo Ann was right about Keith and Ian. I think Keith only was interested in talking to Ian about his comic book.

I wanna smack both these kids upside their heads!!!!! They are being so pig-headed and stupid! They've been together for two years - why are they trying to mess that up? Keith is lying to Elliot and Keith said he wanted a loving relationship. Well, he's lying to the person he loves. If he wants a loving relationship, he has to be honest with Elliot. If he knows Elliot's shy and it's hard for him to admit his feelings or tell Keith what he wants, then Keith should help him come out of his shell, not lie to him and backstab him.

Jeez, you'd think after two years these two would know how to communicate! They are totally sabotaging their relationship! Why is Keith playing games with Elliot? Why can't Elliot tell Keith how he feels? Ugh! Ok, on to chapter four.

The pool thing was funny. Elliot does seem nice. It was so tragic to read about what happened to his b/f. So sad. Maybe Keith can help him with his sorrow.