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  1. charlieocho
    Whew! What a "tour de force". Simply mind-boggling. Superb storytelling. Thanks.
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    A perfect ending to an uplifting story. A good present. Thanks.
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    Chapter 42

    charlieocho commented on Libby Drew's story chapter in Chapter 42

    Good one! At first, I didn't like the short chapters, but the story sucked me right in, and it was all over before I knew it. I enjoy your writing style very much.
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    Mr. Anonymous

    charlieocho commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Mr. Anonymous

    Very nice!! Better than champagne and caviar. You keep us hanging on.
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    Story

    charlieocho commented on Frostina's story chapter in Story

    Intense. Sucked me right in. So much for "and they lived happily, ever after." Good job.
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    I was very curious how you would end this. But......you pulled it off very smoothly. Looking forward to your next story. Best wishes.
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    Chapter 1

    charlieocho commented on Libby Drew's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Hmmmm. What a great Christmas present. You say so much with minimal words.
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    Ch 30: Suicide

    charlieocho commented on Hamen Cheese's story chapter in Ch 30: Suicide

    I find it amazing how you weave all these different elements together, so seamlessly. Hope you are starting something else to post, once this is finished. (Greedy readers...right?)
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    Yay! Another chapter! So very well written and most entertaining. You have a flair for revealing just enough info to keep us hooked, but wanting lots more. I am patiently waiting for more.
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    Wow! ***** ..... I am going to have to check out the original, next. Very thought-provoking. Somehow "Good job!" doesn't quite fit. Thanks.
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    Bananas

    charlieocho commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Bananas

    "I wish I knew how to quit you." But you're too goddamned good, KC.
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    Hamen, you get better and better at one-upping yourself. I don't like the sound when I "gush", so I'll try not to, but ya done good, boy. Like Robert Zimmerman has sung....."Keep on Keepin' on".
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    Chapter 1

    charlieocho commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Chapter 1

    Very well crafted. Clever, too. You'll be sorely missed.
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    Twizted

    charlieocho commented on K.C.'s story chapter in Twizted

    Damn! I was so getting into this story. I hope you return to this story, and create other ones, too. Whatever you decide.....here's to you! Thanks.
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    "Come here, Fat Mama"! Made me start to laugh while crying, something I didn't think was possible. Kim, I don't know how you do it, but you sure take us to a higher ground with your writing. Thanks.
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    I am stunned. Where do we go from here? Excellent.
  17. charlieocho
    Another good one. I was jonesing for this! But the suspense will kill me, eventually.
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    Well, I just finished chapter 6, and I figure I have to weigh in with my two cents worth. What a fine story! I am so glad I stumbled upon it. I like how it feels more "substantial" (for lack of a better word), now, than it did in the beginning. The characters have more depth and the dialogue seems to pack more of a punch. Perhaps it is just my perception, but there seems to be a bit of an evolution, here. I am torn between wanting to read more, and wanting to stretch it out!! Very well done .
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    Chapter 11

    charlieocho commented on rec's story chapter in Chapter 11

    Can't believe this is all over
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    Chapter 8

    charlieocho commented on rec's story chapter in Chapter 8

    This is better than the finest Meursault.
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    Chapter 3

    charlieocho commented on rec's story chapter in Chapter 3

    Falling...........Falling................Falling.............in love with this.
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    Chapter 1

    charlieocho commented on rec's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Ah, what luck to stumble upon this masterpiece! It will be difficult not to devour this story...a deep chord is struck already.
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    Chapter 1

    charlieocho commented on rustle's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Spine-tingling, amazingly well-written.
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    Lord have mercy! What is this whack job doing now?? Please don't end this too soon!
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    Chapter 4

    charlieocho commented on Shatt3r3dGlass77's story chapter in Chapter 4

    Hotness on the horizon. Yeah!I like the pace of the story and the evolving of the characters. A good reading, so far.
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