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Never turn your back till the job is finished!
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Let's not forget what Nick's pictures show, the scars on his back...
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Interlude: Nana's House
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Interlude: Nana's House
Oh no...I caught that; my comment was a plea in the dark. As an aside, I started to read some of Ken Follett's books had to stop for the very same reasons...Cliffies are all well and fine, it's when an author overdoses on them... It's sleepy time for me, I will check out Ch 149 in the morning... I thought CJ's chapter, when our protagonist falls off the boat in the roaring 40's and is facing drowning, to be one of his best chapters, cliffie aside... -
Too many 'moments' stood out in this chapter, but I loved the following... She smiled and licked her lips in anticipation, the things she was going to accomplish with Kenny running logistics, her mind was already calculating the expansion prospects. “Oh and I want a ‘If you make my brother cry’ clause that delivers me his testicles on a silver platter.” Lydia smiled a deep, dark, menacing smile. “No one makes Steve cry but me.”
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You might want to make a correction here...see below and anothe r great chapter...thanks!! “Ah, got it. Well, I’ll let you go. Maybe I’ll see you around the condo soon,” he said with a warm smile. He bent down to Forest. “Uncle Marvin’s heading out now, okay? Be good for your dad, alright?” He offered Forest his finger to grab, and Forest clutched it with a tiny fist. Dailan looked up at me again and smiled. “Wait—Marvin!”
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Our offshore pleasure
drsawzall commented on Thomas Lindblad's story chapter in Our offshore pleasure
Åke, it would seem, hasn't met the one who turns him on, and yes, America at that time was roiled by culture divisions... -
I have to believe Idalae will always remain Josel's mother once the full story is known... Mocvann, what on earth ever possessed her?
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Loved this and what a great use of the fox theme!!!!
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Only a Monster Would...
drsawzall commented on astone2292's story chapter in Only a Monster Would...
Well done!!! In the best tradition of Mel Brooks and Carl Reiner!!!!- 33 comments
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Chapter 1 I am a creature
drsawzall commented on Aditus's story chapter in Chapter 1 I am a creature
What a great use of the anthology theme, loved the part about the cats, hats, and waistcoats!!! And I am very glad that I now feel better about my 70-some odd tropical shirts, some go back to the days of Pearl Harbor in 1941!!- 31 comments
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A unique take on the anthology theme, nice job...
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What a great use of the theme!! And breaking news, the commentators' fish sticks just hit the trash can!!
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What the Hell Was That?
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in What the Hell Was That?
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Time will tell...
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2025 Anthology - Creature Feature - Week One *Now Live*
drsawzall commented on Valkyrie's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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Interlude: Nana's House
drsawzall commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Interlude: Nana's House
CJ James, the undisputed master of the cliffhanger, with every freaking chapter...it got to the point it was ridiculously repetitive, and for me started to distract from the story, and in my opinion, was unnecessary. it could have been sooo much better.... Please tell me you aren't gonna do the same... -
One almost wonders if there is a curiosity on Luke's part that intrigues him....
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Great use of the prompt!!@!@ Loved the way it ended, right out of the Twilight Zone...
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My memory can't quite remember what the oath Matthew has taken, and the details thereof...
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2025 Anthology - Creature Feature - Week One *Now Live*
drsawzall commented on Valkyrie's blog entry in Gay Authors News
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Very enjoyable and thank you for sharing this with us!!
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So unnecessarily sad... The Major looked at Will for a long time, "I can't forgive you, you know that don't you." Will nodded, "Yes." "But you know I love you." "I know," Will replied quietly, looking up into those terribly sad eyes of his father. There would be no reconciliation, only understanding that they were so radically different there never could be. But then, you never could choose family; they often were the ones you were stuck with.
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The minor major surprised me and I have to wonder where the half sister is...
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RJ can't see the forests for the trees...coupled with the fact he needs an assholeectomy...
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So very true...
