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  1. drsawzall

    Chapter 11

    Will is simply a ...
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    Troy's Revenge

    Be right back, gotta wash my hands...that's right...that's my story and I'm sticking to it.....
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    Wounds

    For god's sake Henry...be very aware when you go where angles fear to tread.... As I thought, Damir wants to use the 624, it would be serendipitous if they all shot each other... The Turd never fails to find the lowest point in the sewerage filled gutter.... Juan finally got thru to his team, how soon will Sid's effort to get the team going pay off and please his boss??? Angelica just got the answer to two plus two, how will she use that information??? “Yes, although I need to keep most of those details confidential as they are part of an active investigation.” The man’s comment reminded her that he was a law-enforcement agent as much as he was Teyshawn’s uncle, which made her pause for several seconds before deciding to ask her next question anyway. “You said my husband told the school to withhold Walter’s information and delay emergency care until he arrived?” She hated when people turned statements into questions but found herself struggling to transform her scattered thoughts into coherent words. “I’m afraid I can’t comment on that either. I’m sorry. I shouldn’t have even mentioned it.” She could tell that the man was lying, just as she could tell he had been watching her reactions like a hawk.
  4. Sounds like their secret weapon just may be Kim Kardashian and her sisters....could drive the humans insane with all sorts of impure thoughts.... Kilial focused on her and whispered in a sultry voice that caught Nuji unaware. “Now, on to the sexy Rothian. What’s your kink, hottie? What naughty thing turns you on?” Nuji snorted a laugh and brought one of her long-fingered hands to her wide mouth in embarrassment, but she freely admitted, “I love a big, round, jiggly ass!”
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    Chapter 4

    A random decision to take a side road led to quite the surprise!!
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    Chapter 19

    A grand day out, a good time had by all, and an amazing new ability discovered...
  7. drsawzall

    Chapter 11

    Who's driving the car???? Then there is Will, @Jeff Burton noted, a two by four upside the head, however, I think a sawed off 4x4 might be better... Was I suspect? Could I be arrested for fleeing the scene of a crime? Was I a material witness? What even was a material witness? Did I need a lawyer? I was in over my head. I needed to talk to a trusted adult. Too bad I didn't know any. Umm...how about Will, you need to talk to Dr. Wohler about this. Will has to be the most clueless, child-like, idiot ever...
  8. drsawzall

    Chapter 10 of 10

    What's up with the Momster???
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    Chapter 5 S3

    And a fun time had by all, as noted before...whitewater rafting is about as much fun one can have with clothes on...I highly recommend it!!! I highly suspect we will be seeing more of Clint and Lonnie in the future!!!
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    Anduin

    Anduin is a toxic, slow-growing cancer and needs to be excised ASAP...
  11. Hummm....let's see, gotta figure out how many chores I can put off today.....
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    Amiens

    Granger and Daventry should tread lightly in London, lest they find themselves overseeing Cornwallis or replacing him.... Caroline...what a harpy...thank god for the rubies....
  13. Oh my, someone set the story temp to sizzle....phew...gonna need a fire extinguisher for when they spontaneously combust...
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    After The Storm

    So glad to see that things are finding a semblance of solid ground, it's way too early, but a lifeline has been tossed, no impending decisions to wade thru at the immediate moment, no doubt that they are coming. Jamie has the support he will truly need in the coming days. And it is critical he reaches out to Legal Aid, just to set the foundation, for any conflict/issues that may/might arise with his father. I found the following especially moving... Jordan was quiet for a long moment, eyes on me, not studying like Ari had earlier, but seeing. Like he already understood everything I hadn’t said out loud. When he finally spoke, it was soft. “You didn’t run because you were scared,” he said. “You ran because somewhere deep down, you already knew staying would mean losing parts of yourself you’d never get back.” My breath caught. Something in my chest shifted at that. He leaned forward, elbows on his knees. “You didn’t fail by leaving. You saved the part of you that could still feel. That could still hope. That takes more courage than most people ever manage.” ********************* Before I could respond, Luca cut in. “I know you mean well,” he said, glancing at Ari. His voice wasn’t defensive, it was calm, but final. “And I appreciate the offer. But Jamie’s not going anywhere. Not to a shelter, not to some program. He stays here.” Ari blinked, surprised by the firmness in his tone. But Luca didn’t stop. “I’ve been there,” he said, more quietly now. “I’ve been right where he is, bruised up, nowhere to go, no idea what came next. And I got out. But I did it alone. I had to. And I wouldn’t wish that kind of silence on anyone. Especially not him.” He turned to me then. Not to ask permission, not to make a speech. Just to look at me, and say it like it was already settled. “You’re not doing this alone. Not while I’ve got anything to give.” ************************************** I could not get the following from the last chapter out of my head, its importance will be defining in the longer run.... “Get up,” my dad barked, standing over me, his voice full of contempt, as a sharp kick hit me in the sternum. He didn’t even sound like the same person anymore. He was a stranger, a monster I didn’t recognize. And I was on the ground, small and powerless, with nowhere to run. I wanted to scream. To say something, anything, but my throat felt like it was full of broken glass. There was no way out of this. No escape. And all I could do was breathe, gasping for air, as everything I’d feared about myself and this family seemed to close in around me. The sharp crack of shattering ceramic rang out behind me, followed by the sound of my mother’s voice, no, screaming. Splitting through the house like a fire alarm. Time seemed to stall. My heart stuttered in my chest as I turned to see her face-to-face with my father, her hands shaking, her voice raw with fury and fear. She wasn’t holding back anymore. “You hit him!” she screamed, shoving at my dad’s chest with both hands. “You hit our son!” It was like watching something snap inside her. Years of silence, of backing down, of trying to keep the peace, it was all gone. She was on fire now, standing between me and him, her whole body shaking as she held her ground, pushing him back. And to my disbelief, my father actually stepped back. Not because he wanted to, but because, for once, someone had stopped him.
  15. We now know the humans aren't invincible...now to connect with others and hopefully those who brought down the alien ship...
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    Chapter 9 of 10

    Understatement of the year, isn't that why the neanderthals slowly disappeared??? I'd always been more of a physical guy anyway. Not so good with thoughts.
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    Fort Rannick

    David sorta grows on you, at least a tad...and now he simply can't catch a break.... “It’s magical though. I could use the protection it gives.” “It has a scrying enchantment on it. Someone could see you any time you wear it,” Arlo said. “Take it off. Give it to Coradiel. He’s been collecting them.” “Well, to be fair, the only other one I found was on Xanesha,” Coradiel said, taking the amulet from David. “Fine,” the cambion growled. “But that thing’s worth three thousand gold at least. You owe me now.” “And the best way to collect is to stick with us,” Coradiel pointed out. David sucked in a breath. “Fuck.”
  18. Damn...need a shower now....
  19. You say that now.....
  20. drsawzall

    Chapter 42

    David may be starting a career!!!
  21. In a meeting with Pembroke, what could possibly go wrong/right???
  22. Yea...that's his my thought and I'm sticking to it...and why is Patsy Cline's Crazy plasying in my head after all of the song comments....
  23. drsawzall

    First touch

    I only ask as it is a large part of this first chapter, alluding to, but not fully explaining why the differences are so stark between your two protagonists...it is the main part of the shifting dynamic and it raised my curiosity. Please note, as the author you need to create this story as you intend, I am simply along for the ride as it were...
  24. Having watched a couple of shows on smugglers at airports and other places, I am never surprised by the great lengths these folks go to 'hide' the stuff they should not be carrying. To Catch a Smuggler is on Nat Geo. That Jasper and all were "only" smuggling pocketbooks and perfume is a joke, considering the money to be made smuggling other stuff. The blowback is going to be very interesting to say the least....Let's not forget that this all happened because Jasper was stalking Toby, and if not stalking, then what was he doing in the first place???
  25. Well...there's twist...will the new arrivals hold the same possibility Ray does? I don't think it is going to be the dreaded Mother-in-Law...unless she's more like this...when no one is looking....
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