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I'm reminded of a quote, the smarter we are, the stupider we get...

As best as I can describe it without giving anything away, they are strangers in a strange new world.

Thanks, hang on tight and I hope it does not disappoint!!

Whatever you do, I look forward to reading it.

I'm singing in the rain Yes, singing in the rain What a glorious feeling And I'm happy again I'm laughing at clouds So dark up above The sun's in my heart And I'm ready for love Let the stormy clouds chase Everyone from the place Come on with the rain I have a smile on my face I walk down the lane With a happy refrain Just singin', singin' in the rain Dancing in the rain, da-da-dada I'm happy again I'm singing a

This is the third segment in the world Volvo Tales. You should read the first two before this one.

So many points of conflict and introspection, the setting is volatile, and a simple spark is going to change everything. Like tigers or zebras are unable to change their stripes, will the lemmings in this community be able to???

Alan fails to impress me, I find him to be sad, pathetic, and a user of the worst sort...

I may have been in error when I mentioned Anthony the Asswaffle having testimonials to grab and fondle...it would appear they haven't descended yet...

From the mouth of babes... "Two Daddies or two Mummies." He smiled, "Well, you'll just have to wait", he squeezed their hands, "And do I get a girlfriend or a boyfriend?" He gave a big smile to show it wasn't really a serious question, but the two concentrated hard. "Two Daddies would be nice."

I prefer 'ass-hat' which is a cousin to 'ass-waffle' and grandchildren to 'ass-hole' and as far as I know I've never seen either used outside the USofA @Summerabbacat

Well with the counting of the early comments...votes...75% are begging for a continuation...I'd have to agree with them, giving you 80% for more of this story....

A true to life story, not for the faint hearted, gritty, thought provoking, and at time will have you pounding your keyboard in reaction to the subject matter. Not everything in life is sunshine and roses, sometimes all one can do is to make the best out of a terrible situation, and that makes this tale worth reading.

Thank you for sharing this with us, as every author strives to engage their readers, I have to say you hit the mark with me...for the good, not so good, and the truly despicable... As you could tell by my comments, I was fully engaged...and to that...well done sir... All I got, is from this... To this...

While the boys seem safe, and I have to think so, considering that some of them appear right out of his father's books, I hope the epilogue answers more questions than it raises. Otherwise...

Not a pat down or frisking for dangerous items???

And once again Anthony the asshat shows his true colors. He’s nothing more than a puppet for dear old dad….He should reach between his legs and give his testimonials a grope and find the courage to be his own man…. looking forward to the date!!

All I got is...

Zac and Jessie...destined for menial careers in the lower end of the blue-collar world....

So it isn't only me then...hummm

Wasn't on the boat....Alex...what possessed you to come up with that story??? Did you not understand what the Mexican authorities were doing when they recorded yours's and others passports??? And cleaning out the apartment/condo...making room for another boy-toy??? I truly believe Logan was assisted in his fall into the seas....

Marc's growth is remarkable along with his attention to detail, he needs to learn some of the finer nuances of command I believe. While he was correct in bringing to everyone's attention the condition of the vessels he is/was renting, I wonder if a less public approach might/may have worked a bit better. I'm concerned he is creating adversaries needlessly. I think a "discussion" with Sa Henderson about his concerns with a warning proviso, that if it should happen again to him or anyone else, then he will bring it to the attention of everyone in the 'Bowl"... Now, having said all that, if scheduled/routine maintenance is being marked as done and Sa Henderson knowingly knows it is not, what happens to the "items" noted as used, but not. Who then is profiting, just Sa Henderson or are others included?? If that were to be the case roast him/others very publicly.... “It just so happens that I should have a say, as I have the requirements to rent that equipment and you do not, Sa Henderson. Although I am sure people you hire do. Still. When I step aboard a vessel that I am going to use. It had best be ready or I will be looking for the reasons. I will say this now for all to hear. When I track back the what and who of the next set of issues with the vessel that I rent. I will file a formal complaint and request for restitution against the party responsible

That asshat defense lawyer nearly got me to trigger a carnal oops a cranial explosion, but I survived knowing Jill is going to take the stand...

Good on you Todd, way to move forward out of the shackles of your past, and Barrett...as well as searching for your mother, don't think it will be all sunshine and roses, you may not like what you find, and most of what you are looking for, happens to have admitted is attraction to you... I wouldn't trust any overdressed artsy fella wearing a bandanna, scarf, and a fedora....