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I sense nothing good is going to happen with Apollo…the sheik gives me the creeps.. Miranda’s next photo shoot is about to get very racy to say the least…

Like others, loved the ending… Man,” Kenny said, with a little pout, “I guess I won't be calling Bryan 'Daddy,' then.” “Serious!” Bryan cried out, trying to cover his reddening face. “Not you, too!” And then @Summerabbacat, I’m guessing Judge Crustypants suffers from a well known malady called stickupyourasssideways as it is known in the medical community…

Nice to see the relationship growing and solidifying. Colin has the right of it, seeing he needs to update the business plan and has some serious thinking as to how he wants the business to evolve.

Someone better check those aspirin bottles….

BTW…loved this…now bring on Cowman !

Ummm…what was it the pot said to the kettle ?

Two broken souls finding each other, one hope they aren’t ships in the night. what ever happens on a date with Sharon,Thomas needs to be honest and forthright!

Thank you for taking the time to gift us with your work, it is appreciated!!! While I feel like this... When I really want to feel like this...

I can't disagree with any of the above comments, they all hit the mark as it were...what I find a bit disingenuous is the following... Apart from the first chapter, this was the chapter with most edits. @Mikiesboy brought the restaurant to life and helped out with the sex (not that way) What you talking about Willis???. I have researched a lot for this story, but restaurant interiors really weren’t on the list..

The mystery deepens as the plot thickens...what is going on with the four riders suddenly leaving the Keep...could it have anything to do with the busy Lord?

My goodness...that was/is one heck of a boat ride...gonna keep an eye out for that boat...

This is thanks due to American churches from our deep south sending missionaries, funds for buying the politicos over there, getting them to enact their homophobias into law... But where would you park on the beaten path off the moors??? The boys need to consider renting a room somewhere, over here we have some that rent by the hour!!!

Welcome back and this story looks very interesting...looks like a trip to the store may need to happen for some super glue!!!

A great start, what has Nathan gotten himself into and not so much a cliffhanger but a knife-hanger....

You rascally SOB...12 lines or so into the chapter I was reaching for the tissues, and then you piled it on!!! Loved this chapter and thanks and please forward the following!!!!

Well this chapter certainly was jam packed with all sorts of good stuff...Praying for Mama and looking forward to Chris babysitting...

Oh my goodness, just where was the dirty deed done, might there still be clues present?

I can't say it any better than the 2 comments above other than to prophesize that in the end Fran will be the making of his own undoing, sad, lost, and broken, in and at the end of his days...

As it seems at the moment and events transpired, all for naught. I suspect Lothar may not be able to pull this last caper off... Will news come out that there is a child, a boy child of Edith's living???

If more young couples could see the wisdom in the following... "Okay, I'll offer a rebuttal." Tiger's flippant attitude seemed a little inappropriate when Elijah was pouring his heart out, but the bookworm always found it charming. "How come you get to decide what I feel? How come I'm not allowed to think you're cute as a button? How come we have to like the same things?

As long as the garage isn't so far away from the house, they should consider having a breezeway installed between the two. After all, Colorado winters can be cold and snowy giving the perfect reason for having one in the first place...The family has the money and more than enough reasons to do so, to not do it is simply foolish, and begging for trouble down the road if they can't change or figure out something better... There seems to ne a blind spot in the critical thinking of the boys in being able to 'think outside the box'... More to the point, they can get their exercise by transitioning into smaller animals and race around inside the house...just pull the blinds down on Mrs Busybodies side of the house. It simply stuns me that there are so many effective and easy solutions to some of the issues they are having, that they don't see them, and then find the most difficult path forward...

This chapter was brilliant, loved how in talking to each other, any misconceptions or points of differences were addressed as adults... I don't think that they will be free from 'any bumps' in the road ahead, but they have established open and honest lines of communication...good on them!!!~!

Not sure what to think of Randy, his communication skills leave much to be desired...Having a Professor Day when I was in college just after the Civil War would have been exciting!!!

I may have use the saying earlier however it still applies, and as taught to me by an high school history teacher..."The enemy of peace, is peace"!!

With the advent of the wireless and the discovery of 'others' transmissions leads credence to the old saw, "Prior Proper Planning Prevents Piss-Poor Performance"!!!