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  1. Can't add anything to the comments above other than to say what this chapter did to me...
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    Chapter Twelve

    Had to do some catching up…..as I remember Guam is an independent island…. Henderson senior could count the number of times he’d ever been surprised in his life, on four crooked, arthritis-ridden digits of his left hand, discounting for an amputated pinky. There was one time during his military service in marine corps, when their brigade was ambushed by Vietnamese in Guam. He Jake still worries me, Liam needs to be staked naked to an anthill naked with a solid bar of rock candy stuffed up his ass….
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    Chapter 21

    Much to ponder in this chapter, love the way this story is coming together!!!
  4. Hey @weinerdog, @chris191070...1st on Pg 3!!!
  5. With apologies to @RainbowPhoenixWI... Jesusmotherfuckingchristonafuckingbycyclemeetingmotherlovingmonkeysodomizersposingasdildoworshipingnuns.....I mean just what the fuck????? If tomorrow's chapter fails to post, what our author might see when looking out his back door... Followed by
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    Take Me Chapter 6

    It would seem the dynamic has changed, I am very interested to see if there was additional fallout from Harold and Charles stupidity...
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    Chapter Three

    Oh the hubris of youth... “But if you get caught–” “I won’t. Damien can’t even tell what I’m doing in the surveillance footage since it looks like I’m just placing the price stickers on instead. He’s none the wiser.” I find it so darned cute when I hear a Bieberler trying to act so 'adult'... “Oh, that’s wonderful,” an older woman said. “People your age don’t usually want to work and rather spend their days complaining, while living under their parents’ roof.” Okay, boomer.
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    Chapter 5

    Great point, and will we see or hear of him again???
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    Chapter 5

    Greg is growing into his role naturally as if he was born to it. His means and methods are bringing out the best in all those who surround him, the hallmark of a great leader, can't wait to see what the future holds....
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    Chapter 25

    Let's hope Franz quickly picks up the wherewithal to not be a drag or an anchor on this journey to wherever they are going....and that in losing his virginity he did not pick up any 'unwanted guests'.....
  11. Interesting, what will our hero do to set his adversaries back on their heels, will it be quick or will he lay out an even more devious plan??? I hadn’t anticipated such a unique trap, but it offered an intriguing opportunity. Even as our motorcar traveled down the Rue Neuve-Saint-Louis, I used the phantom energy to manipulate small things, like freezing a geyser of water at a nearby fountain for a few seconds or causing a gas lantern to burn a day’s worth of fuel in seconds. Time was not on their side.
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    Chapter Two

    Oh, the injustice/hardship of the self-imposed interior prison walls we create...Attica...Attica...Attica!!!!! Then there's Sally Fields accepting the Oscar she won..."You really like me"!!!! One has to wonder just how long and what it will take for both to pull their collective heads out of their posteriors!!! This should be a very interesting dance to say the least!!!
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    Chapter 6

    I can't add to the comments above, this was an amazing chapter, and like the others has me wanting more!!! I will wait, and not go to that 'other' site, till this story is complete!!!
  14. Mother once told me off after farting in the living room, and as a wise ass I asked/assumed that girls did not, I was politely informed that they 'broke wind' and had the good sense, manners, and grace to do it out of sight....note, she didn't say out of smelling range...
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    Chapter Eleven

    And you thought I had a dark side, I'm very impressed @Summerabbacat!!!!
  16. Ralph is quickly learning you can run but not hide, from what truly tweaks his proclivities...
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    Chapter 20

    There's gotta be at least a dozen more chapters....please
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    Chapter 6

    Well now, Mum has issues, we've seen that from the 1st chapter, what is her story?
  19. There's 'fucked' and then there's fucked...the question is as to what degree...The miasma of the bureaucracy ain't gonna slow anything down...
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    Chapter 5

    I noticed they aren't leaving for home after bringing Mary Lou to university...they aren't bringing their bags along with Mary Lou's
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    Chapter 4

    I wonder if David's move will be long term....
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    Chapter One

    Sabrina, did you just bring your gay ex-boyfriend to a gay bar as a mission of mercy...this can't end well...or will it?
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    Take Me Chapter 5

    You can run but not hide Brett, and I do not blame you for not going either, but you will be found and will have to account for yours and others actions...will there be repercussions????
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    Chapter 5

    might we have a developing friendship/romance here???
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    Chapter 1

    Well now, there's a mystery to be sure!!! Just who are these people?
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