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Everything posted by drsawzall
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Can’t disagree with any of the comments above….let’s not forget the mother of all hurricanes is approaching…. And Micco, share the frigging texts with Burke and we have even more red herrings to sift thru It was Danny,” I blurt. “I’m sure of it.” “Danny?” Burke tilts his head, not unlike a wolf. “Danny Parks? Sam’s friend?” “He hates me, Matthew. He’s been stalking me. Throwing accusations around. This morning he sent me some threatening texts.” That gets Burke’s attention. “What kind of threats?” “Never mind.” I regret the outburst immediately. The last thing I want to do is share tangible evidence of anything, bullshit or otherwise.
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Well…so much for my comment in the last chapter…it is no longer a cliffhanger but a wait and see hanger….
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As with the quote, “Do onto others, as you would have done to you” the following quote is in the same vein and wisdom to mold a life around…. God, grant me the serenity to Accept the things I cannot change Change the things I can And the wisdom to know the difference Not sure how I missed this powerful chapter, but now I miss the cliffhanger…
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Oh…look second on page 4….
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Why are flashes of images of Mel Gibson in Braveheart flashing before my eyes?
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Uh oh Balder then took to the altar and spoke,” The Old one says this offering was pathetic and we need to offer him a human babe. He also says you aren’t being as diligent with your prayers and tithings and must offer more to the Order of Eternal Night. So saith The Old One, so mote it be. Now offer praise to out benevolent God.” Travis followed along with the other demons, not wanting to stand out, as they prayed to Oblivion, but Dre refused, causing a minor kerfuffle.
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Boots should get 2 ribeyes a day! Thank goodness Corbin and Boots are ok… Ok all you haters, the Jury is still out…. Asa wasn’t sure how everyone else slept, but he and Caleb tossed and turned all night, and yet, they were ready at five a.m. to catch the flight Sebastian had arranged for them. Asa frowned as they drove away from the house. Last night had escalated so fast they didn’t get to give a proper goodbye to everyone, but it couldn’t be helped. Poor Caleb. He knew his mate regretted leaving things with Vann unresolved. His anguish was palpable through their bond. Asa felt it in a way that was similar to a fine-tuned instrument hitting a wrong note.
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And yet scum like Calvin seem to thrive on the misery they inflict on others…all we can hope for is that he shows his true self in the courtroom… There has to be some monetary gain for Calvin to push the envelope so far in this case…
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Chapter 81: Final Chapter
drsawzall commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 81: Final Chapter
Amen brother…amen!!! Lord Arbor thanks for this book and the knowledge that the saga will continue, as we all know a certain vertically challenged piquant pissant, is about to wreak havoc much greater than his stature!! A lot of answers in this chapter…well done!!- 57 comments
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Let the learning begin and just where will it lead to?
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If you look at @weinerdog,s comment, it isn’t a trifecta as Dylan also fu*&ed up himself as well making it a quadraphonic situation or a foursome!!!
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Welcome back and looking forward to the rest of the story!
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Dear old Frank is/was probably the most overrated architect ever!!!
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Loved this chapter, Colin is a saint!
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This was an excellent chapter to read. Signs of growth for all!
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Well done…Looking forward to the next one!
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The Berger/Burlington Transition Continues
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Berger/Burlington Transition Continues
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Hoo boy dagnabit...this was one heck of a chapter to say the least.... And speaking of saying the least...way not to go Caleb...you frigging putz,. it is called testicular fortitude... The boy looked up from the book he’d buried his nose in and broke out in a wide grin. “Alpha Caleb!” Caleb’s heart leapt into his throat at the sight of his son. Vann had grown a couple of inches in the time he and Asa had been healing the hybrids. Gone was the cute-as-a-button little boy. He now had the lankiness of a teenager, complete with a sharpness to his features that hadn’t been there. It was a shock when Vann got up and threw his arms around Caleb’s waist in a tight hug. He had always prided himself on control, and his son clinging to him tested his control like nothing else had. He and Asa’s schedule meant that his and Vann’s paths hadn’t crossed since their arrival. As much as it hurt, Caleb preferred it that way. It was easier to shield his heart when there was some physical distance between them. “Hello, Vann. It’s good to see you.” It’s good to see you? What the hell was that? Inwardly rolling his eyes at himself, he felt Asa nudge him a little. It was just enough to snap him out of his idiocy. Truer words never spoken Caleb...is dumbfuck your middle name....just when the jury was warming to you Caleb took the opportunity to spend time with Silas. The old wolf shifter voiced his opinions without holding back. During the hours they spent rocking away on Silas’ balcony overlooking the back meadow of the lodge, he imparted his advice and then bestowed praise. “You’ve come a long way, son, and I’m proud of you. I know it hasn’t been easy, but you have the support of your mate to carry you when needed. It’s no longer necessary to shoulder the world by yourself. You deserve to be happy.” “I don’t always think so, but I’m starting to believe it.” “One more thing. Don’t let your foolish pride get in the way of what you want the most. The boy is old enough to know the truth. He’ll forgive you.” Caleb turned his head and uncharacteristically bit his bottom lip. “But can I forgive myself?” His words were barely a whisper, but Silas reached over and placed a gnarled, wrinkled hand over his strong, smooth one. “Only you can make that decision. I have faith that you’ll choose wisely.” Ok all you haters, it seems the defense is punting the football...much like my beloved team the New England Patriots...The jury is pissed in both instances...it looks like there may be a liquid lunch, supper, and what the hell...breakfast the next day too..... AND.... ya just gotta know the Queen of the korner denizens is planning on some sort of shenanigan's/scenario where Caleb is forced to save Vann from the clutches of that despicable lion shifter...just saying...and a slight confession...the jury is already imbibing...
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What are the chances JJ and his fellow escapees find allies, help, and assistance in Tomsk???
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I think @weinerdog and @Geemeedee have the gist of what is happening and not happening. other than the teen protagonists in the story, no one is talking to each other...And that includes Seth and his interactions with most adults, which adds up to nada, zippo, not much,,,can you say pretty much non-existent. Something is off with Seth's father...He isn't what he is cracked up to be...
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And the mystery continues, while we have confirmation the catamaran won't be blown up or lost, will it perhaps run aground??? As @weinerdog stated...mmmm...donuts!!!
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Once again we are treated, or is that tricked, into reading another tale in the Charlie Boon compendium, and it does not disappoint. Well written, engaging and as expected, full of surprises!! Take the time to read this, you won't regret it!!
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Thanks Geron for another fantastic tale with a truly superb ending. I am sure the housewarming party will be splendid, with just a hint of problems for the boys and friends to solve! I hope they don’t change the house at all as who knows what roads any of the doors may lead to!!
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Of course the shite is gonna hit the fan for Pro...again...and JJ needs to shut the frigging place down with extreme prejudice....
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The Wedding, Honeymoon, and Trouble Starts
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in The Wedding, Honeymoon, and Trouble Starts
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