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Chapter Twelve: Labirinthoset
drsawzall commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Twelve: Labirinthoset
Looks like a need for some Bounty paper towels and Windex... -
Chapter 17: “Keep your hands clean.”
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 17: “Keep your hands clean.”
From Sun Tzu's Art of War... • He will win who knows when to fight and when not to fight. • He will win who knows how to handle both superior and inferior forces. • He will win whose army is animated by the same spirit throughout all its ranks. • He will win who, prepared himself, waits to take the enemy unprepared. • He will win who has military capacity and is not interfered with by the sovereign.” -
Chapter 16: “Play to People’s Fantasies.”
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 16: “Play to People’s Fantasies.”
When one door opens, another closes, or vice versa...So the time of the boy king is coming to an end, what havoc awaits?? -
Some interesting observations and reveals in this chapter, makes one want to know more...loved the following... “And the queen of melodramatics,” Kenny said. “Serious, Babe, could you at least take the volume down. I'm sure the characters in the other stories can hear you.”
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So many questions had answers revealed, all of the comments above are spot on!! Having said that, is Long Ears a changeling or was Micco able to, for the lack of better words, cure it? That it was immune to bullets is the stuff of nightmares!!! Martina got what was coming to her, sadly she acted on emotion and frustration, not a good combination when plotting to murder and absconding with a fortune... We still have the worst part of the hurricane to get through, thankfully the rest of the wolves are ok, I worry about the panthers, or did I miss something?? While it is fantastic that Micco was able to rise above and conquer his fears and rise above a life-threatening situation, what is left are questions regarding the loss of his family in the fire, who, how, what, and why??? One of your best chapters yet and there's still the ubiquitous red herrings...
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Gonna show my age here a bit, the stash of brown paper parcel-era gay porn @Leslie Lofton brings back memories of growing up gay in the 70's and 80's just after the dinosaurs extinction...for someone of my ilk and age at the time, it was how many of us were exposed to the wider worlds of gay sex and the mechanics involved. I can remember many a afternoon perusing the 'selection' of magazines from straight to gay, some of the cutest boys were sadly straight...but to see their bits in stop action photos...double wow...then when I got brave enough to enter the dank, sticky floor, thread bare seats, bleach smelling theater, well some things are best left to imagination...along with the requisite 'gentleman in the London Fog rain coat... Like others, I also hope to see more of Toby and Ha-Joon and I also thought Harper would make an appearance...fingers crossed she does...or reconnects with Carey...a photo shoot with the two of them would be hoot...talk about cementing one's reputation... Actually, I think the sequence of the chapters works well as they are!!
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Can't disagree with any of the comments above, all well put and very succinct! I wonder, if after visiting and Mum's visiting the garden, if somehow, she sees the light and is the one to upbraid morainic Miles the moron and put him to rights???? And who says that global warming/climate change affects only the weather???
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Explanation, Compromise, and Love
drsawzall commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Explanation, Compromise, and Love
The family needs to back off of the teasing and poking the bear when it comes to Dylan, several chapters back I noticed his father getting his verbal jabs in...time to put their muzzles on... -
Chapter 15: “Conceal your intentions.”
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 15: “Conceal your intentions.”
Sad that to this day we have "so-called Christians"... I nodded without hesitation, but Frances Howard was aghast at the suggestion, “Lord Eli, Mr. Tallis, and his group are of a lower station than you, why would you break bread with them?” ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ I answered Frances coyly, “During this time of year, it is important to remember that Christ dined with everyone without regard to status or rank,” turning back to Thomas, “We would be honored to be your guests, Mr. Tallis.” -
Chapter 14: “Play the Perfect Courtier”
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 14: “Play the Perfect Courtier”
Poor Edward, damned if you do and damned if you dont! I am beginning to see the long game Eli is playing... “All warfare is based on deception. Hence, when able to attack, we must seem unable; when using our forces, we must seem inactive; when we are near, we must make the enemy believe we are far away; when far away, we must make him believe we are near.” -
I reached out and was led to believe that there were some who didn't play fair or well with others in using that feature...
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Chapter 12: “Win through actions, not through arguments.”
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 12: “Win through actions, not through arguments.”
I'm sure this is the first of many altercations, the loss of Father Archibald may prove to be a boon in the short term, I fear it may be akin to poking the bear... -
Chapter 10: “Learn to keep people dependent on you.”
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 10: “Learn to keep people dependent on you.”
I sense the possibility of a trap.... “If you know the enemy and know yourself, you need not fear the result of a hundred battles. If you know yourself but not the enemy, for every victory gained you will also suffer a defeat. If you know neither the enemy nor yourself, you will succumb in every battle.” -
Chapter 8: “Infection: Avoid the unhappy and unlucky.”
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 8: “Infection: Avoid the unhappy and unlucky.”
I had to go with WOW as my reaction considering what we find out at the end of this chapter, simply mind blowing...considering, and we all knew, the tech that is employed across the channel...How many and who/where are they??? I knew there was neither coincidence, nor mercy of some deity at work. Jack had done something in the past or future that allowed me to be here in this body. I knew he loved me, but he transcended the bounds of life and death to be with me. What he did was reckless and epic, I was proud and horrified, so I knew it was his actions. However, Jack and I weren’t the only ones to make the journey to the past. There must be a deeper story behind why all of this happened and why I am here with such a weight on my shoulders. -
Chapter 7: “Know who you’re dealing with”
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 7: “Know who you’re dealing with”
One has to wonder just how much Francis will see of the other reality as well!! -
Chapter 6: “Make other people come to you”
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 6: “Make other people come to you”
Here I am binge reading this and loving all the twists and turns!!! Keep your friends close, your enemies closer... -
Chapter 5: “Pose as a friend, Work as a spy”
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 5: “Pose as a friend, Work as a spy”
And just who are the 'fair folk??? Onward to the next chapter! -
Chapter 3: “Court attention at all costs”
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 3: “Court attention at all costs”
The crux of the issue is what time do they have to catch-up to the foul actors on the continent, a stone's throw so to speak, from the bad actors??? -
Chapter 1-Always Say Less Than Necessary
drsawzall commented on W_L's story chapter in Chapter 1-Always Say Less Than Necessary
An interesting twist to say the least! One has to wonder if others are aware of his dual sexuality...
