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  1. That was quite the train ride/wreck...
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    Elijah's Encore

    Calling all @weinerdog's where is you???
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    Elijah's Encore

    Oh look @weinerdog, number 25!!
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    Elijah's Encore

    A great way to bring this chapter to life, so many right moments hit, thank you for sharing. I would insert the theme for Jaws with the following... “It’s a small peninsula on the coast of Brazil, north of Recife. We will fly there and rent cars to get to the house. Nat Chusi owns it and was gracious enough to offer it to us for vacation. It has all the amenities of a luxury resort but without any other guests. There’s plenty of uninhabited forest, too, for our wolves to enjoy.”
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    Chapter 3

    For some reason this party has been sticking in my mind along with the inordinate amount of time Andre spent in the bedroom helping with the costume change as it were...I think Chris needs to reassess his relationship with as one so eloquently put it, with the millennial princess...and as to the sheets...WTF as others have noted...
  6. Oh happy days are here again...the following resonated very strongly with me “Don’t mind you asking me anything… not anymore. He married a woman what arrived from his country.” “And you still love him after such?” “I reckon I’ll always have love him. It don’t ever go away. He always planned to marry, and he said so from my first time laying with him… never hid it, and never lied to me. Truth is, it be arranged by their families when he was still a boy of thirteen, and I reckon he did love her, but he loved me too… maybe even more than her. He said as much, but he was a man who wanted a family above anything else. Can’t fault him for it.” “It’s good you can think well of him. You’re right the love never goes away, but it can get easier to think on,” Lucas said, his gaze saying something more than his words. “I believe that too. Never was angered with his choice, but there be plenty of hurt for sure. Lucas?” Now, on to burning that stub of the sawed off broken branch and the wildings.... Thank you for this Gary and the best of the New Year to you and your readers....
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    Chapter 3

    Things that make you go humm
  8. So much going on and we are no closer to any answers... “Theodore…” She sounded frightened. She shakily pushed back her hood. I didn’t know she could be frightened. Her face was painted with regret. “Your pack was cursed. It all started here. When you were still a pup in your mother’s belly, I felt like you could be different. I shielded you from the curse. I severed the connection, but at the same time, I severed your bond with your parents. With your pack.”
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    Falls Apart

    Well the heat is on under the pressure cooker...something has to give.
  10. And the elephant was brought down by a mouse....
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    Chapter 1

    Simply, thank you for this...
  12. A reminder things we sometimes put off shouldn't be!
  13. Well...I resolve to try #'s 3 and 4 along with @chris191070's daily porn movie...but at my age after the second day all I get would look like baby powder...
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    Prologue

    Should we be scared??
  15. It was very heartwarming and enjoyable.
  16. All I can say is wow in amazement... I can choose to fly a rainbow flag and wear my purple unicorn tie, or simply plant my yard in colorful flowers, but attraction is etched in my genes, so you get no choice in who I love.
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    Chapter 1 S2

    And a new adventure begins, one can only hope that the school year has no 'hiccups'...And Devin, get rid of those 'pesky' A-'s....
  18. While the A-Holes are bombing the crap out of the universe, I suspect they left the back door open to their headquarters...time to send an explosive message up their backsides...
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    Chapter 11

    Well...living on a farm and the back 40 is due to be plowed under soon...
  20. It all keeps pointing back to the Giblox Authority...time to give them a taste of their own medicine...well past time!!
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    Scotland

    Enjoyed this visit to Scotland and the reunion very much and as we see time marches on!! Thank you for this and the best of the New Year to you and yours!!
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    Noah

    This chapter was a highlight in so many ways, but best of all it shows that good old common sense leads to positive outcomes. The following is so spot on!! “You OK, Noah?” “Yes, it’s just. What you said to Toby.” “About the wet-wipes and condoms?” Noah blushed, “Yes. You think that Toby and I are going to…” “I’d assumed so. I knew Toby wanted to. You OK?” “Yes. Thanks. And yes”, he gulped, “I enjoy doing stuff with Toby”, he gave a shy grin, “He’s the first boy I’ve liked that I could do stuff with. You really don’t mind?” “Mind! Hell no, as long as you two are happy.” Noah nodded, “It’s just my Grandmother has strong views.” “Yeah, so your Mum mentioned. Good job that your Mum and Dad feel the same way as Gordon and me, so no sweat there.” Brian continued with his preparations for tomorrow, but he didn’t miss Noah’s eyes widen. The boy mumbled his thanks again and disappeared.
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    Chapter 11

    I loved this chapter and glad to se both boys recovered as best expected... I have to believe Brian's father will have a suggestion planted that he will find Bum-Fuck Arkansas a nice place to live and want to adopt stray kittens and keep 'em in the humane shelter he will build...
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    Chapter 10

    Hats of to you dear author....I have to remain in the camp that both will survive, and I would not be surprised if the leg is saved, if they had to reopen the leg for Jake to let go of the arteries, it may be a sign that the vampiric healing abilities might/will work on healing the leg...fingers crossed. This chapter was well written, paced and descripted throughout, it was as if we were there!!!
  25. Thanks, Chris, for a great story!
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